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Opaline is a small unicorn filly who is constantly picked on by other foals for her lack of unicorn magic. She has no friends but is enthralled by tales and stories of the mane six.
This story was written as a possible origin story for Gen 5's new Alicorn villain well also bringing In unique elements. This story was as good as the time it was made.
inspired by the Sombra Fiendship is magic comic and Siege on the Crystal Empire comics, Syndrome from The Incredibles, Dio Brando from Jojo's Bizzare Adventure, and Dracula.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 22 )

the gen5s new alicorn villain

What villain are you talking about?

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The one from the end of make your mark and Mlp issue #2

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hhmm...
Im not really sure about the story


https://images.app.goo.gl/xWWJshDzj1ajMYJQA

but ok, go on.

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I’m actually going to include that part this is chapter is supposed to take place before that.

Comment posted by MatTheBook deleted Sep 6th, 2022

Opaline is a small unicorn filly she is constantly picked on by other foals for her lack of unicorn magic she has no friends but is enthralled by stories of the mane 6.
this story is written as a possible origin story to gen5s new alicorn villain. this story is as good as the time it was made.
inspired by the Sombra Feindship is magic and siege on the crystal empire comics as well as the character syndrome from the Incredibles

Friendship

This is an interesting story. I actually like the idea that Opaline was judged by her colours as part of her origin. I’m curious to see more and, based off of the tags, see how involved Twilight and Rainbow are with Opaline’s backstory, along with the rest of the Mane 6.

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New information was recieved from the episodes

She sat there closely awaiting the change of the guard. Her mind was racing with the possibilities of what she might experience. She peaked her head up slowly, making sure she wouldn’t be seen. Almost coincidentally, at that same exact time, a guard appeared to talk to another guard. She could see them conversing before one turned to the door. Now was her time. She sprang from the bush, and before the guard could even remotely enter the building, she went flying past him. Her blind excitement had made her almost immediately seen "Hey, young filly! "STOP!" the guard yelled. But she was too fast even for them, her will powering her along, and the guards stood no chance of catching her. A guard stepped out from around a corner in one of the long hallways she had been running through. But she simply weaved beside them before they even had a chance to grab her. She turned her head around to take a glance at the small group of guards chasing after her.

THAT IS NOT HOW YOU FRICKIN SNEAK INTO A CASTLE

Bro if imma be real I actually have like no idea what your getting at here.

Comment posted by Gipercrafter deleted Dec 9th, 2022

When will the new chapter be released?

Will every chapter have "Opaline" in it?

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yes but to varying degrees

oo i love chapter 6 :3

This story is as good as the time it was made.

What do you mean by that?

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I put that there so that if anything in the official lore contradicts something in the story readers would know that this was written first.

She looked down at the pony's appearance. He was wearing a faded yellow vest now soaking wet from the torrential Downpour. His mane was a darker shade of blue that was followed by little purple and light blue streaks that were neatly combed back and ended in a ponytail behind his head. Small bits of facial hair lined each side of his cheeks and little locks of his mane had popped out of place in the wet conditions. But out of all these small details she picked up on, she was perplexed by something, in particular, the pony had on. She turned her head as she focused more. Around the stallion's neck hung a necklace carrying a small sanded-down round piece of wood. But it was what was on that necklace that perplexed her. It was a star, a six-pointed star. The very same star as her mentor's cutie mark, Twilight’s star. The strange pony then shakily got up from the floor. He tried brushing the water out of his vest but gave up as his article of clothing was too wet to be dried off. He quickly turned his focus to Opaline. She watched as she saw him quickly step back in surprise.

ARGYLE!! NOOOOOO!!!

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