• Member Since 15th Jun, 2019
  • offline last seen 1 hour ago

TCC56


“There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man.” - Patrick Rothfuss

E
Source

For Sale: One (1) Wagon
Good condition; single owner; well cared for.

For inquires, contact:
Trixie Lulamoon, The Great and Powerful
Castle of Friendship
Ponyville


Featured 8/12/2021 - 8/15/2021!

Now with a Russian translation by NovemberDragon!

And also readings by Rainbow Infinity and StraightToThePointStudio!

Listed in Equestria Daily's 21 of the Best Trixie Fanfics for Trixie Day on 10/31/2021!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

Beautiful capstone to a key part of Trixie's life, and I can think of no more suitable heirs to the wagon. Lovely bit of heartfelt, deceptively deep fluff. Thank you for it.

The great and powerful Trixies putting down roots in ponyville to be with the one she loves forever tour.............IT'S A WORKING TITLE

Oh, my god.

Whew.

And holy is that a good theory on why Trixie wasn't one of those who destroyed the world.

Short and sweet. Just a hint of nostalgia. Great fic!

”In all those alternate futures, I'm the only one who didn't destroy the world."

“Uh… well there was that one dead timeline…”

Good, emotional stuff here. Quite a lovely capstone on Trixie’s career, as others have said.

I'm sure that Trixie will have an itch to travel sneak up on her sooner or later. Probably not for a long while, maybe not even decades. But sooner or later, that itch will come back. But hopefully if and when it does, she'll have a lot of ponies to join her on the road, and it'll just be in a big circle that eventually brings her home back to where they live again.

I would like to purchase this wagon.

huh, i thought this was going to go differently.

YOU GET A WAGON, YOU GET A WAGON, YOU GET A WAGON, EVERYPONY GETS A WAGON!!!!!!!1!!1!!11 :trixieshiftright:

This was a sweet story. The bit about Trixie calling herself a good pony is quite meaningful. 10935966 "Deceptively deep" is a good way to describe it.

"What's that old saying? If you love something, let it go?"

Says the pony who's making a major change in order to never leave her marefriend.

"I love performing. I always will."

And somebody has to make frosh orientation day at the School of Friendship memorable.

I agree with the others -- that was a perfect final Trixie's Wagon episode. It's in very fitting hooves.

(And this one has wheels!)

Such sweetness! The great and powerful Mittens approves and will be adding to the shelf for future enjoyment.

Dangit, why are you giving me feels about a wagon?

10936329
Because it's the perfect vehicle for a feels trip

One wagon, slight bear damage. Inquire with Twilight Sparkle. Sold as is.

One wagon. Never worn?

10935994

Maybe she could take her foals on a tour of her old stomping grounds.

Trixie choked out a little laugh. "In all those alternate futures, I'm the only one who didn't destroy the world."

Immediately after selling the wagon and settling in Ponyville, Trixie discovers the hard way that her rootless, traveling mountebank lifestyle was the only thing preventing her from destroying the world. :twilightsheepish:

The description is a story all on its own. The story proper is equally moving in so few words. Well done!

Trixie choked out a little laugh. "In all those alternate futures, I'm the only one who didn't destroy the world."

Swallowing the lump in her throat, Starlight got it. "Because you're a good pony."

Trixie nodded. "Because I'm a good pony."

Damn straight she is.

10936173

YOU GET A WAGON, YOU GET A WAGON, YOU GET A WAGON, EVERYPONY GETS A WAGON!!!!!!!1!!1!!11 :trixieshiftright:

:facehoof: No, Trixie, you only have one wagon, so only one group of ponies will actually get that wagon....

Trixie is, indeed, a good pony. :trixieshiftright:

Excellent story.

10935981
Nah, pretty sure that was Daybreaker. Even with the Alicorn Amulet, Trixie didn't destroy the biosphere.

Man this really can hit ya in the feels, and the nice bits of comedy helps solidify this whole story so well! Like, my goodness this is such a satisfying read! Hope you didn't mind, but I couldn't resist making a reading of this beautiful fic of yours!

Audio Linky!: https://youtu.be/ifig5bpuhWY

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

This feels so...perfect. The emotions, the very conversation - this whole thing just feels like a perfect end to Trixie's story in particular. A nice little epilogue. It feels so cathartic that Snails and Snips are the ones who end up owning the wagon - I have a feeling it's new owner(s) will serve it well.

Very well done! :twilightsmile:

Slice of life par excellence :coolphoto:

A most excellent tale, one I've added to every Group I admin.

10939825
Bah - we all know that was the Nightmare Flurry timeline.

Nobody could tell the difference until it was too late.

Greetings. Your reading has been completed and can be found here. I hope you enjoy.

"In alternate futures, Discord destroyed the world. Sombra destroyed the world. Flim and Flam destroyed the world. Trixie… didn't." The tears started to flow - but happy ones, as Trixie choked out a little laugh. "In all those alternate futures, I'm the only one who didn't destroy the world."

Starlight: "Did you forget to tell you about the ashlands timeline?"
derpicdn.net/img/view/2016/3/9/1105601.gif
Source.

"Trixie, you can't !" Panic exploded into Starlight's voice. "Show business is your life! You've always been a mare of the road - how can you give that up?" Pulling away, she stared incredulously at her bestest bestie. "A-All those times! The energy of the crowd, the praise! That little thrill you get when you nail a trick perfectly!"

I would punch Trix if she ever thought of quitting


A great and powerful punch in the face!

was kinda hoping starlight goes and buys it from trixie just to basically give it to her by keeping it in the yard to their shared house or something. It would have been adorable really.

Really cute, and nice to see Trixie settle down with Starlight

You're very precise with your word in a way that you're able to get straight to the feels instead of drawing it out longer than necessary. I really like Trixie and Starlight's relationship and dynamic here in how they see the good in the bad parts of the past. This story's full of heart, and it very lovely to read. Thanks for writing it!

Trixie smiled at him - a true one. "Trixie assures you - that wagon is perfect for that."

Sooooooo she’s giving her wagon to snips and snails for travel and she’s going to be living with starlight?

Login or register to comment