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deadpansnarker


Writing's a tough job, but someone's gotta do it.

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Twilight Sparkle wakes up one morning, to find she's living with her family and is a filly again. She's not in Canterlot but in Ponyville though, and that's just the beginning of the changes. Like her new school, and the identity of the Headmare...

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 146 )

This is adorable, I love it! I love all your stories. :twilightblush::twilightsmile:

That chapter title...would I be on the right track to say that there’s griffins off the starboard bow, starboard bow, starboard bow?

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Thank you. It there's one thing that I appreciate even more than readers, it's regulars. :twilightsheepish:


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Maintaining it is my next goal. :rainbowdetermined2:


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You'll see, Cpt... :trixieshiftright:

I’m scared... but in a good way.

*Carefully presses tracking button*

Let’s see where this goes...

Not a bad start for a rather unique concept. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

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That's a compliment, right? :raritywink:


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I look forward to revealing more soon. :twistnerd:


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Thanks. Ideas are just the beginning though, the execution of them is the key. :coolphoto:

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Indeed. Looking forward to see how it goes. Had worked on something familiar once

Hmmm, not a bad start. Let's see where this one will go.

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Ya think? :scootangel:


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Hopefully somewhere unpredictable and interesting. :duck:

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It’s what you want it to be.....

Seriously though, I do like this, and I'm interested to see where it goes.

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I know what you meant, and thanks for commenting and reading. The way things are going with this story, I may be updating very soon... :rainbowdetermined2:

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Never mind, I'm sure she can have a snack later. :yay:


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Wouldn't that be quite the promotion? :ajsmug:

I’m gonna guess that another thing is the fact that Luna wasn’t banished.

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I knew someone would say this. All I can say is it might be exactly what you think, or it could be the exact opposite... :ajsmug:

I don't suppose you'd have any notion as to where i'd be in this parallel child like utopia.

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When I can find the time to write, but the more people enjoy the story, the more motivated I usually feel to add to it. And so far, it's going better than I expected, so hopefully very soon. :eeyup:


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I'm sure they'll be a place for you somewhere. After all, where would we be without Grogar? :pinkiehappy:

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personally, i think you're the cause of the events in-story
pulled a full Aku on Twilight and her friends

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well i hope people keep enjoying it then

Maybe she was too young now to handle such advanced enchantments, or perhaps her unfamiliar voice now meant she was messing up some of the words.

Given that unicorn magic doesn't seem to have verbal components, I'm guessing the former.

In any case, this is certainly an intriguing concept, though I feel you're going a bit overboard with Shining's obnoxiousness. Nostalgia goggles are one thing, but I can't see that ever qualifying as a BBBFF. Still, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

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I think I was just trying to express just how competitive both were for the title of 'Sibling Supreme'. Judging by the flashbacks we got in Sparkle's Seven, things got pretty testy between the two of them during the many contests. Plus, as explained, Shining was nervous about a big test at soldier training that day. As soon as he thought something was up with his sister, he reverted back to being the doting big brother we generally know.

Anyway, thanks for reading and tracking. I hope you continue to stick with the story into the future. :scootangel:

Please continue with this, make it appropriate, and make proper spelling and grammar. I'M BEGGING YOU!

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It's rated E, so I hope it should remain appropriate. And as for the spelling and grammar part, if you mean my spelling of certain words like 'Armour', that's just the British way of doing it, which is what I'm used to. Hope that clears things up.

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Okay then. Tell me what I can correct, and I'll see what I can do. :raritywink:

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Awwwwwww..... i don't usually show my gratitude side but that.... that means a lot. Thank you.

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HA!!!
(Ahem)
Long ago in a distant land, I, Grogar, the bell wielding master of darkness, unleashed an unspeakable evil. But a foolish Pony Princess wielding a magical horn stepped forth to oppose me. Before the final blow was struck, I tore open a portal in time, and flung her into the past where my evil is unstoppable. Now the pony seeks to return to the future and undo the future that is Grogar!.

How's that?

So, who's the element of magic this time round? Is it Sunset? This is a good start!

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Yes yes.
Just don't do a "Gabby Gums" and spread it around.
I've got an image to maintain.
And three backstabbing villains to keep an eye on.

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Your secret is safe with me. I'm surprised you know about your plotting partners in crime, though. Maybe you do know more than you're letting on in the show... :rainbowderp:


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Thanks. And keep reading to discover the answers to (most) of your questions...

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Wow high praise indeed. Hope you enjoy the next few chapters just as much. And thanks for the follow. :yay:

Ooooh, nice opening chapter. Definitely tracking.

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Good to hear. :raritystarry:


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Well there's only one way to find out... keep reading. :rainbowwild:

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So many possible explanations, but only one answer. :moustache:


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A WILD TWILIGHT APPEARS... :twilightoops:


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Hurray! And I didn't even have to set off any fireworks. :trixieshiftleft:

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