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The Bricklayer


Slow down, you're doing fine, you can't be everything you want to be, before your time... -Vienna, The Stranger: Billy Joel. (Any Pronouns)

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It's that time of year again for Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia, the time to celebrate their anniversary. And after remembering a visit to a karaoke contest in Ponyville, Twilight gets the most absolutely perfect idea on how to do it...

Music and lyrics used belong to their respective owners. Story partially inspired by the cover art and inspired partially by Nordyrd's fic The Magic Inside.

Written for and Third Place Winner of the 11th Bi-monthly Twilestia Contest.

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Comments ( 11 )

Is Vinyl Scratch a vampire in this story?

7894741 No, where'd you get that idea?:applejackunsure:

short but cute. I like it.

Heya! I'm not dead! I've been busy with all sorts of school stuff and other stories I haven't had too much time to work on reading your other stuff, sorry :( Anywho I got a good chuckle out of this line

Currently, the host of this whole event, DJ Vinyl Scratch had just kicked a pony off the stage for his terribly bad singing of Neighlantia Rhythm Section's Doraville, even after he had stayed on stage singing the song drunkenly and getting a chorus of boos in response.

cuz he was drunks and he got a lot of boos(ze) Anyway, as always keep up the good work!~:derpyderp2:

Well that was lovely and it has also some funny moments.

A little surprise seeing Boltstrick being here knowing how you portrait him in your other stories.

7895251 Well, the way I figure it, he's probably more like his Shattered Mirror counterpart (Polite with a love for fencing and poetry) in this universe... Unless he's very good at lying like a certain unicorn from Past Sins and fooled everypony into thinking he's such a nice guy.

I don't usually read Twilestia stories but this was pretty good and well written 11/10.

7895911 Oh yeah? What made you like it?:applejackunsure:

7896582 Well I liked the flashback with "Grape S. Vine". Twilight thinking about the anniversary and thinking the worst possible scenario that could happen, and the ending of course.

So reel me in, my precious mare
C'mon take me home
Cause my bodies tired of travellin'
And my heart don't want to roam.

Brilliant choice!

....they need a Doctor emote...Allons Y!

Ring-a-ling-ling! I got a fresh review for ya! ---> Music in the Night (Review)

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