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Do you remember the Jedi texts that Rey found in Episode 8? Many wonder and create where Luke had found the sacred texts, as well as what he did after he found the compass. Here is my version of it, hope you will enjoy it, as the ponies and their counterparts will learn the ways of the Force, as Luke will learn the meaning of Friendship

Special shoutout to CortezDude for the cover page.

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‘Yup,’ said Applejack as she started ‘There was a time when all she cared about was winning competitions.’

Except she still does. Let's not forget Non-Compete Clause, and Triple Pony Dare Ya.

Ok love this already plz have more this story its really great love how its Luke befor Disney mess him up

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You got a good point. Thanks for reminding me. I forgot about those parts. She may still be obsessed with winning, but that's one of the things we love about Rainbow Dash

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Already working on the next two chapters right now. I did a lot of Research about Luke about what he used to be, and honestly, I also like Luke how he was before Disney ruined him. But if you have any suggestions of what else I can add, I'd love to read it.

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Also, thanks for adding my story to your favorites

With my father under his control, Darth Sideous contacted every Clone throughout the entire galaxy and activated Order 66, causing the chips inside their minds to be activated, and compelled them to kill all the Jedi on sight.

It should say "executed Order 66," so that way "activated" isn't repeated twice in the same sentence.

‘Master Yoda is the Grand Master and head of the Jedi Council,’ said Luke, describing the best as he could about him. ‘He is the most powerful Jedi to ever exist, wise beyond anyone else, and he had trained the Jedi for over eight hundred years.’
‘He’s that old?!!’

Compared to Celestia and Luna, being 800 years old would make Yoda be at his prime.

‘I don’t want to hear another word about Obi-Wan.’ said Anakin, noticing that his anger and the darkness inside his heart was growing ‘The Jedi turned against me, don’t you turn against me.’

Every time I watch that scene, I always wonder how slightly better it could've sounded had he said, "The Jedi turned against me, don't you turn against me as well."

‘You brought him here,’ said Anakin, not believing her as she took a few steps back. ‘You brought him here to kill me.’

The line actually goes, "You're with him! you brought him here to kill me!"

Obi-Wan activated his blue Lightsaber, and within a split second, Anakin activated his blue Lightsaber too whilst he jumped backwards and in front of Obi-Wan. To many, even Luke’s shock, they saw master against apprentice as their sabers clashed. As they clashed, they kept moving backwards, they made their way towards the bridge and headed straight inside the building, with Luke watching as both Obi-Wan and Anakin continued to fight one another. They continued clashing their sabers as they went down the halls, slashing and slicing the walls until they were in another room, where they continued to clash their blades and deflected onto what appears to be a control panel. They jumped onto a table where they continued fighting, with Obi-Wan knocked Anakin’s Lightsaber out of his hand, until Anakin grabbed Obi-Wan’s throat and forced him to bend over backwards and nearly made him slice his throat with his own saber

I always felt that the prequels had the best lightsaber duels, mainly because the duels in those films felt the most atmospheric than in the original trilogy; and the best examples are the duels near the end of Phantom Menace and Revenge of the Sith, no sudden interruptions where the characters have an exchange of words, just Jedi and Sith conveying their moods through facial expressions and body language, with epic music to compliment each duel.

‘Never underestimate small packages.’ said Spike as he grinned

Best Spike quote ever.

‘NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!’ yelled Vader in despair, whilst it was too much for Luke, but he continued to watch as a tear was shed from his left eye.

Many prequel haters always treat Vader's lamentation as one of those unintentionally funny moments, but it's still one of the most tragic moments I've ever seen. He betrayed his own order, turned to the dark side, murdered his fellow Jedi, children, and political leaders all the for sake of protecting the woman he loves, only to realize that his sacrifice had been in vain, and the moment he cries out in despair is when the last part of what use to be Anakin Skywalker had died and finally transitions into being more machine than man.

The Jedi would often say that this weapon is our lives. For in a way, they are powered by Khyber Crystals, the very gem that would allow a Lightsaber to be activated.

There's no h in kyber.

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Yea I hope this story gets completely and hopefully a sequel, also it be cool if the young six and even spike can be train if possible in the way of the jedi and a nother thing try looking at star wars legend comics, they have some good views on Luke also there a some interesting things on the Disney comics that show Luke train Ben solo befor he turned to the dark side other then that I cant wait for more

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Yeah, sorry about that. My first time. Thanks for your comment. I'll keep that in mind. And sorry about that, sometimes I tend to make mistakes without even noticing. I'll definitely make some changes. Thanks for the insight.

*Me seeing R2 HUMILIATED the Pathetic Royal Guards*

*Woody Laugh*: 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 :trollestia: :ajsmug: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild: :rainbowkiss:


*Put Bill Hill Theme Song*

*With R2-D2 as the Chaser, and the Guards the VICTIMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

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thanks. I imagined R2 doing something like that. Plus I thought it would be really funny. And it turned out it was.

Comment posted by Postwarmonkey50 deleted May 29th, 2020

Sorry for the wait. Still writing the next chapter. I won't spoil ahead, but I'll give you a hint:, they will be tested, and it involves a being of darkness, aka, the First Sith Lord

Luke pulled out and activated his green plasma blade Lightsaber as he uses his Form I, or simply known as the Shii-Cho, the same as his father’s.

Point of order Luke and Anakin were primarily Form V practitioners specificlaly the Djem So variant.

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OH, okay, got it. Didn't realize that he used form V, the djem so variant. Thanks for telling me about it.

This is getting more interesting with each chapters.

Oh man I was hoping Spike would help him but still good chapter

Like Master Qui-Gon Jinn spike follow the will of the force

They watched back at the blue side again, as Padme struggled to breathe. ‘Obi-Wan.’ said Padme, gaining his attention whilst he was holding Luke. ‘There’s good in him.’ she said, trying to stay awake ‘I know. I know there’s…still-‘ was all that she could say, and with that last breath, she died on the table, much to Luke’s shock. Even the Young Six couldn’t handle it, with Silverstream crying over Gallus’ shoulder. Obi-Wan showed signs of distraught, as well as Yoda.

Poor Silver

Sion instantly took it whilst Pinkie zipped away. Until she suddenly popped out of it and yelled ‘Double surprise!!’

LOL MLP Movie reference

I HOPE Luke doesn't become like his "Verison" in Episode 8-9. And maybe Ben Solo WON'T become Kylo Ren by Snoke/Palpatine. I like the Legend Verison of Luke's Jedi better, and becoming Grey Jedi using BOTH the Light and Dark Side for Good.

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Your wish is my command. Will let you know as soon as I am done with the next chapter.

Is the new chapter still in progress? When's the release date?

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Yep, still busy. I'll give you a hint of who they face next. Darth Malgus from the Old Republic.

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Alright. Here's the next chapter. Hope you enjoy it.

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Glad you liked it. I had to do some research and go through two trailers just to make a thorough story. Not to mention I wanted to make Sunset shine a bit. Also, in case you wonder, they'll face the next Sith of the past. I'll give you a hint. He created the Rule of Two.

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Yeah, I think I may have an idea who the sith is. By the way, are the young six gonna shine too? Maybe in the future chapters?

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We'll have to wait and see. Maybe when they face a certain pointy headed double bladed wielding lightsaber that hates Kenobi so much😉

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Alright, as promised. Here it is. Had a little power outage so I couldn't post it last night. Still, delivered what I promised. Hope you like it. The next one is where the Young Six will face Maul. Will try to make it as exciting as I can.

Malgus is truly a cruel Sith Lord. But, is he still canon in the Star Wars timeline? Cause if he’s not, then it’s total Bullcrap!

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According to the Star Wars time-line. The guys who created Star Wars created the timeline explained every Jedi and Sith that ever existed. Look it up, I sure did.

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Also I wanted to make a star wars story that everyone would like, not like the disappointment that Disney had made.

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These movies weren't that bad..ish. I would say decent at least. But, uh, they revealed a teaser trailer of Star Wars Obi-Wan Kenobi. Hayden Christensen will come back as Anakin Skywalker and Ewan McGregor as Obi-Wan Kenobi. So, at least that's a bonus.

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Yup. According to Wikipedia, the series is set ten years after Revenge of the Sith. I do wonder how that's going to work without Disney screwing things up with Star Wars.

If the next time there is Maul, does that mean that there will be Dooku after him? Or Sidious himself?

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To answer your question, yes, Dooku will be in the next one. But as for Sidious, he survived, according to Episode XI, so he won't make an appearance. But I will tell you who will appear during Dooku and after him. The one that will appear during Dooku will be Master Yoda. And the one ultimate test that will help him find the Jedi Temple. His father; Darth Vader.

Starlight was fast asleep near Sunset, considering that they have a lot of catching up to do. Sunburst and Stygian decided to share a tent, as did Starswirl with Mistmane, Flash Magnus with Somnambula, and Rockhoof with Mage Meadowbrook. Gallus and Silverstream shared a tent, as did Ocellus and Smolder, along with Sandbar and Yona.

Read the last part... THANK YOU FOR THE SHIPS!!!

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