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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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Spike and Pinkie are called by the map to the lovely city of Phillydelphia, but the setting is a lot more romantic than Spike is comfortable with.


Collaboration with the ever-so-talented Summer Dancer.

Featured May 22nd-25th, 2018

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 48 )

This was supa fine to write, get down with your bad self :rainbowkiss:

Dies of cutenes

That was sweet. I wonder if Pinkie had been chilling with her feelings for a while, or if she realized it then.
Has Spike ever been called by the map in show? I wonder what that would/did look like.

AAWWW!!!!!! This was sooo sweet!!!!:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

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He was, when Thorax and Ember came to town.

I want a sequel!!!!!!!!! I demand one!!

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice! I defiantly approve!

yaaay!!! best ship!!!!

God Bless ya to!

It's been so long since I've had such a good read, thank you. And God bless you too my friend.

A story with Supertramp, Spike ships, and enough sugar to kill an elephant? Fantastic, cuddly read

The story was cute thank you for it. :pinkiesmile:
Good job on getting Featured! :moustache:

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... I'd respond with slang, but I would have absolutely no idea what I'm saying. :rainbowlaugh:

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Careful! When two authors infamous for spreading diabetes join forces, you'd better believe there's collateral damage. :pinkiecrazy:

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That's a good question! :pinkiegasp:
I wonder if there will be an answer. :rainbowhuh:
And I think he has, once...

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Thanks, guys! :pinkiehappy::heart:

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I always seem to get that reaction... :derpytongue2:

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Thank you for reading! :rainbowkiss:
And thanks! I'm still not convinced I'm not just dreaming. :rainbowderp:

Love is a many splendored thing

Also, congrats on getting featured

super daawwws

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Hahaha :rainbowlaugh: The cuten-ing is complete! :pinkiecrazy:

This was so cute! It’s nice to read something like this once in a while.

This made my tea extremely sweet all of a sudden, I wonder why

How's Pinkie's mom, dad and sisters are going to react to this?

You're missing a few lyrics, namely

"Not much of a girlfriend, I never seem to get a lot"

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Well, those lyrics don't really apply here, do they? :raritywink:

Ooh, Pinkie, you so fine. /
You so fine you blow my mind. /
Hey Pinkie! Hey Pinkie!

SpikePie will rule the universe.

As they turned away, Amour muttered something else, but in the language of Prench. “Ah, le pauvre jeune dragon est aveugle. L'amour est dans l'air avec ces deux-là!”

for those curious google translate says Ah, the poor young dragon is blind. Love is in the air with these two!

Definitely thought provoking.

May God go with you all :twilightsmile:

This is such a cute and sweet little story! Reading it has left me feeling quite contented. :heart:

L'amour entre un dragon et un poney.Une belle vue.

...Still, ponies there betrayed...

Représenté

Ne vous sentez pas mal si vous ne comprenez pas cela. J'utilise Google Traduction.

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Ah, un commentaire assez intéressant. Je ne sais pas vraiment où vous avez pris la citation que vous avez utilisée, ou ce que cela a à voir avec le mot «représenter», mais je suppose que je vais l'examiner.

Et vous n'ĂŞtes pas le seul Ă  utiliser Traduire ...

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I just got owned. I have no idea what you're saying.

Edit: I meant "portray"

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Basically, I'm asking where the quote came from.

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Cela vient de l'histoire.
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Pinkie grinned, and the two of them sauntered over. Still, ponies there betrayed no signs of distress or aggravation. A group of fillies and colts seemed to be getting along nicely in their game of tag, though a few started to break away from the pack as soon as fireflies started appearing.

After the boat scene

Oh god, can't believe it took me this long to realize the story and chapter title were a Supertramp reference!:facehoof:

So the map decided to be a shipper then? Anyway. Nicely done

10/10 Loved it!

This was a really cute story. I loved how Pinkie’s surprising beauty and cuteness was captured in this story through Spike’s perception.

It’s actually inspired me to come up with my own story that’s similar to yours, but much different. I won’t be giving away what I have in mind.

Is it okay if I classify this story as an inspiration for mine?

Also, what do you think of Sparity (Spike X Rarity) in contrast to the pairing shown here?

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Glad you enjoyed it! Sums and I had a lot of fun writing it. :twilightsmile:
Happy we could inspire, too!

Sparity is one that I've enjoyed, though I prefer shipping him with character who (to me, at least) appear closer to his age. Like Pinkie, Apple Bloom. It all depends on how old the characters are supposed to be in the story itself.

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That’s something I’ve been wondering about myself lately, how old Spike is compared to the rest of the characters. The only calculation I could make was that he’s obviously younger than the Main Six. But yet, I could never discern how young Spike is.

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He's obviously younger that Twilight and Rarity, and older than the CMC. So I'd say he's around 16-19. Really, he could be anywhere from 12-20.

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