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Aragon


Quoth the raven: "CAW CAW CAW CAW CAW CAW CAW CAW CAW"


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This story is a sequel to Twilight DONE!


The day of Shining Armor and Cadance's wedding anniversary is coming. Shining Armor, wants to give his wife a truly exceptional present, so he asks the Royal Guard of Canterlot for help.

Things get very out of hoof from there.


Remember that Twilight Velvet is the author of the Daring Do books in this fanfic!


Proofread by:

Lucky Roll
Selbi
Octavia Harmony
Chaotic Note
Missing Link

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 204 )

Can we make a DONEverse where just everyone is just done with everything

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Only if I get to name it EVERYDONE! and I can write Jar Jar Binks in there.

What the?
... I...
I don't, I...
I... don't... I...
don't.

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That would never work. We'd get done with the doneverse. We'd never write it.

I agree with the Dunsparce.

The final solution. Sound legit! Might as well turn everypony into an alicorn :pinkiecrazy:
And that was number two! Now comes three!

Night Light is the most interesting pony in the world now.

Aragon, you magnificent bastard :moustache: If I had scented soap, I'd give it to you as a gift.

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Yeah.
I'm done with this.
DONE I tell you.

I'm going to burn a rock now.

In the first few Twilight letters, she keeps saying "Get of the mountain" as opposed to "Get off the mountain."

Other than that it was hilarious.

GET DOWN OF THAT MOUNTAIN THIS VERY INSTANT!

How do? :rainbowhuh:

I love your DONE series. All the frustration and insanity is perfect, and Night Light still continues to be the best with his logic and mannerisms. I want a whole story just devoted to him :pinkiehappy:

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!? STOP IT I'M DYING, THIS IS THE THIRD TIME YOU'VE MADE ME LAUGH TOO HARD TO BREATHE :rainbowlaugh:

Seriously though, that was amazing, definitely worth the rewrites and work you put in.

We need one for the guards though.

Velvet gets her own chapter, Twilight gets her own chapter, Shinning Armor gets his own chapter...

But those poor guards (stupid, but poor), they get the worst end of things every chapter. By now, if I was a guard I'd be saying something like, "I should've been a (insert appropriate alternative job description here) instead!" Yeah, we really need one of those.

Night Light is my hero...cant use your dragon? fine ill get my own hahaha

That was AWESOME. I could help but laugh during the whole chapter. I can't wait for the epilogue.

Much like the rest of this series, I have no idea what I just read...

...and I love it!

i enjoy these done stories so much there really funny always makes me laugh a lot :heart:

Comment posted by Jarkes deleted Feb 18th, 2014

...That was unexpected.

:pinkiehappy: What was, Mr. Jarkers?

I thought I told you not to call me "Jarkers..."

:pinkiehappy: Oh, right... So what part of it was unexpected?

...All of it.

:pinkiehappy: ...

...How did you even get in here anyway?

:pinkiehappy: Your front door was open.

...Of course it was.

Celestia, you do realized that you've now made it possible to easily repopulate the Alicorn race again, right?

Man, all those poor Alicorn OCs now have no chance.:rainbowlaugh:

The newspaper clippings are some of my favorite parts. Also, Night Light is somehow more boss than last story.
He pretty much deserves a pair of wings himself. It might even make his dancing more mesmerizing.
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This story was just... Too awesome.

Dumbledore, what should I do!?

Multiple times I threw my hands in the air and walked away from the computer in a circle around my room before coming back to read more. Their logic just makes you do that.

I enjoyed the story.

Discord: *reads* ... guess I won't be needed anymore.

“So… Shining Armor has wings now.”
Luna shot Twilight a side glance. “That seems to be our go-to solution lately, yes.”

Well, that explains a lot :derpytongue2:

“So you got a dragon just by asking?”

“I asked nicely.”

Night Light wins everything. Ever.

Now I actually kinda want to see artwork of Alicorn Shining

Please, Princess, go back to Canterlot. Go back to safety. And let me work on the Cute Puppy Parade.

That line's a winner.

I love this story universe you have made because anything goes!
Also asking nicely is just as good as using the power of FUNK!

A few problems. (damn OCD that i have developed from reading so much!)
First one is in the story description.

The day of Shining Armor and Cadance's wedding anniversary is coming. Shining Armor, wants to give her wife a truly exceptional present, so he asks the Royal Guard of Canterlot for help.

His wife maybe?

Other one was in the very first letter.

As I’ve said before, it’s been almost a year since the [day I relieved of my duties] as Captain Shining Armor and became Prince Shining Armor. That also means that it’s been almost a year since the day I married my wife, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza.

"I WAS relieved" maybe?

And then this because:

Without the Guards, Canterlot is doomed!
Doomed!

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...So Shining Armor now has wings. Huh, well how about that.

Can't wait to see more chapters! Unless that "Status: Incomplete" is a lying sack of potatoes.

*GASP* SATANIC WORD COUNT

...So Shining is a pretty pony princess now?
Cadance: Auntie...FIX THIS!

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