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Darkened Moon is no more, and we stand strong. Come, my children, rejoice for her defeat.

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Every parent knows that one day their filly or colt will wonder where they came from. And then their filly asks it.

Madness ensues.


Filly Twilight Sparkle Art by Elemectric

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I was waiting for Cadance to go into excruciating detail.

love cadance in this. lol i can totally relate, i LOVE watching others squirm

Best. Story. EVER! SQUEE!

Honestly, I really enjoyed your story. It was funny, and cute. And Shining's reaction was great. I give this story 10/10!

...what the actual fuck?

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Even I don't know.

now ask celestia

This isn't great... The concept is solid, and your execution is just ugh.

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It's just for fun, sir.

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So was I.
Leaving a permmity scarred Twi

*quiet snickering* :rainbowlaugh:

Twilight Velvet sat in a chair in the dining room, her glass of coffee now all over the floor.

Coffee is generally drunk from a cup, not a glass. They're not the same thing.

"~Where do fillies and foals come from?"

You literally just had her ask "where do girls and babies come from". Get your horse terminology right, please.

"Where do foals come from, daddy!?" Twilight exclaimed, her brain just inching with the wonders of the world.

Itching, not inching. Also, his name is Night Light, not Nightlight. Two words.

"Um... what, Twily? I doing think I heard you right,"

Doing should be don't. You're not writing this on a smartphone are you?

Velvet the Nervous chucked

chuckled

Your grammar fell apart so horribly in the popcorn paragraph I can't even parse it.

Gonna be brutally honest here: The only actual joke you have going on here, what with tacking random adjectives and verbs onto names? Is not really even funny, and you run it into the ground. Your grammar is very poor. You don't appear to have proofread this. I'm sorry, but this just isn't very good.

What? You just tell them "babies come from their mother's gut thanks to the father."

I had fun reading this.:rainbowlaugh:

I’m supposed to be sleeping now! Not laughing to death!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Bloody hilarious.
That's an awkward question though...:twilightoops: Wouldn't want to be Twilight's parents right now. But the way you wrote it was hilarious.

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