"Where Do Foals Come From?"

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Every parent knows that one day their filly or colt will wonder where they came from. And then their filly asks it.

Madness ensues.

Filly Twilight Sparkle Art by Elemectric

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Artist

Artist #1 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Aww

Halira

Halira #2 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 6 · ·

I was waiting for Cadance to go into excruciating detail.

link4

link4 #3 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 2 · ·

love cadance in this. lol i can totally relate, i LOVE watching others squirm

The Crazed Werewolf

The Crazed Werewolf #4 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Best. Story. EVER! SQUEE!

Honestly, I really enjoyed your story. It was funny, and cute. And Shining's reaction was great. I give this story 10/10!

Boltstrike58

Boltstrike58 #5 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 3 · ·

...what the actual fuck?

PixelMoon

PixelMoon #6 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 2 · ·

8655120
Even I don't know.

nwithan12

nwithan12 #7 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 3 · ·

now ask celestia

Mythic Night

Mythic Night #8 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 3 · 2 ·

This isn't great... The concept is solid, and your execution is just ugh.

PixelMoon

PixelMoon #9 · Jan 7th, 2018 · · ·

8655347
It's just for fun, sir.

Bigd2k

Bigd2k #10 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 3 · ·

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So was I.
Leaving a permmity scarred Twi

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #11 · Jan 8th, 2018 · 1 · 9 ·

Twilight Velvet sat in a chair in the dining room, her glass of coffee now all over the floor.

Coffee is generally drunk from a cup, not a glass. They're not the same thing.

"~Where do fillies and foals come from?"

You literally just had her ask "where do girls and babies come from". Get your horse terminology right, please.

"Where do foals come from, daddy!?" Twilight exclaimed, her brain just inching with the wonders of the world.

Itching, not inching. Also, his name is Night Light, not Nightlight. Two words.

"Um... what, Twily? I doing think I heard you right,"

Doing should be don't. You're not writing this on a smartphone are you?

Velvet the Nervous chucked

chuckled

Your grammar fell apart so horribly in the popcorn paragraph I can't even parse it.

Gonna be brutally honest here: The only actual joke you have going on here, what with tacking random adjectives and verbs onto names? Is not really even funny, and you run it into the ground. Your grammar is very poor. You don't appear to have proofread this. I'm sorry, but this just isn't very good.

Ellington