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It has been a long day for Twilight Sparkle. Now, with the Friendship Games over, she returns home with Cadence to her family. But how will they react when she tells them what happened?
This story is completely canon based on my own opinion. I do not own MLP or any related characters.
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Wish the family would have freaked out more with Spike^^
6480942 However do you mean exactly?
6480958 I simply wished for the scene to be longer a little gawking, questioning reality, but I'm just complaining over something very minor in my opinion.
6481057 I just though since everybody else got over it fast in Equestria Girls and Friendship Games, Twilight's family would get over it just as quick. Besides, that's nothing compared to what Twilight wanted to avoid telling them.
6481445 Hmm, you have two points there.
Please continue with Shining confronting Cinch and the rest of the Shadowbolts.
6480942 The talking dog's starting to lose the novelty value. By the fourth movie, everyone's pretty much used to a talking Spike.
6481738 Well, I have considered it but we don't want certain people finding out about magic now, do we? However, I may put the Shadowbolts in a future fabric saying life at Crystal Prep has gotten better since a certain someone told off Cinch.
6482121 Or you could have them jump ship and follow Twilight's example and transfer to CHS.
Human Shiny's still a great BBBFF.
More please? Also nice nemo reference
6482242 Yeah, in one scene I was pretty much thinking of a gender swapped version of when Marlin found Nemo as an egg. Velvet basically telling her that she is just relieved her little Twily's alright.
6482167 I'll think about it.
6482500 It would be interesting to see Cinch's reaction when six of her students walk out on her.
6482528 Now I won't normally take requests but I'm open to ideas and this is a good one I may take up. And I'll be sure you get credit for inspiration should I do it.
6482831 Thanks!
Pretty good story this
Nice story, a little expositive, but that's a bit necessary given the circumstances. Anyway, I wonder how the other Shadowbolts will react to Twilight transferring, given their realization how big of jerks they were happening at the end of the movie?
Feels a bit incomplete but fills the family angle nicely.
6503397 How do you mean incomplete?
6503698 I mean there could be more added to story with the way you wrote the story.. Like maybe have her family meeting her new friends, classmates and maybe even going to the school... Maybe even effects on Flash's and Cadance's lives if you feel like it but mostly having the family wanting to get to know her new school and friends would be a nice touch.....
6503739 I'll consider it. Actually sounds like a good story.
6503836 look forward to it then.
I have mixed feelings about this story. It isn't bad, and Twilight's family members all sound like they're in character, but the story itself feels less like a story and more of a summary of the film.
A consequence of how the film was produced, I suppose.
I'm hoping Cinch was fired after that fiasco that was the Friendship Games
6987243
Update on that seems Candance became the new Principal.
How did sunset know about twilight's Crown?