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The Chip


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"I'm so sorry...I didn't mean any of this to happen..."

When I said those words, I meant every one of them. For during that dark moment, I was not in control of my actions. There was something else inside of me that forced me to do all of it. Something powerful. Something wicked. Something that I did not want to become.

And it called itself...Midnight Sparkle.

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Basically a novelization of the last 10 minutes or so of the film. I'm afraid that it doesn't really bring anything new to the table except give exposition around the events. I was hoping for some more. Maybe Twilight thinking after the fact about the monster, asking if it really was something that had always been within her and what that might mean? Maybe some insight into how a pretty introverted girl would react in the days and weeks to come to what happened to her?

Overall... this really doesn't add anything.

6560081 First off, I just came up with the thought yesterday after waking up. Second, I'm not the only one who has done this. Ever read Power or Deja Vu?

So cut me some slack, please!

I am glad that someone else also tried to write Sci-Twi's mind during this.

Have an upvote :pinkiesmile:

I don't know what she did when she got overwhelmed but it couldn't have been as bad as what I did.

:pinkiegasp: :rainbowhuh: :unsuresweetie: :rainbowderp: :ajbemused: ...nope: I'm DEFINITELY not touching THAT can of worms...

I heard Indigo and the others saying they'd have your back," Spike said with an upbeat tone. "Sour Sweet even wanted you first in line before threaten Lemon not to sit next to you 'cause she wants to. Then, they had a friendly fight about it before Sugarcoat bluntly told them that they should let you decide."
I found myself giggling with him and realizing how much they actually would miss me. As well as how much I'd miss them. We haven't had a good start but if I decided to go back, we may have started over and become friends. They would probably feel silly and let down once they found out about the transfer.

oh, PLEASE tell me that the sequel (film and/or fanfic) will have a meet up/team up between the Wondercolts and Shadowbolts...

"Of course, this school would be perfect for you. Everybody here seems rather fond of you. They hadn't even mentioned what happened once. I'm personally starting to like the pretty girl with the purple hair and diamonds and-Whoops! Did I say that out loud?"

:rainbowlaugh: he's Spike's doppelganger alright...

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