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This story is to help me write better.
[This story takes place in The Magic is Friendship, parts one and two]
Though Nightmare Moon is defeated, Twilight is not set free from her wrath unchanged.
THIS STORY HAS BEEN REDONE ENTIRELY.
Sex tag for some sexual themes for a few scenes throughout the story.
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Interesting story
Looking forward to more
This reads an awfull lot like Vampony Chronicles, only difference for now is name of the curse and the guardian. Will there be more parallels, like a Blessing of the Day or will it be different?
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I took the inspiration for the first chapter from that story, yes. However, things will be different.
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Then I'm looking forward to where you're going with this. Would have read on either way.
8652536
Good to hear.
really liked the old version. hope this new version is just as good if not better
Yay, a good story continues.
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It’s a start let’s see where this goes.
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moar
My my did we use a double my there?
The Twilight Sparkle becoming a vampony is an interesting touch, but Owlowiscious should not be present yet.
From blue to black.
Missing some personal space
and
I'm not sure if this is missing a word or not, but I'll put it here just in case
Split? And just one my is enough
Black?
The story in itself seems really great and I'll be tracking/reading, but in some points of the story, the grammar gets really bad, leaving me kinda flabbergasted
But I'l still be reading your story
Was this the story when Twilight's friends helped her with her blood problem and then Nightmare Moon was in her head and all sort of crazy shit happened. Also did Twilight turn Rarity into a Vampony to save her life and the story hinted at NM relinquishing her wings and giving them to Twilight because she liked flying so much
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That's The Vampony Chronicles.
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Then is this the one with the big war?
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Uh, no.
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Then which one is it
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A new story that I redid, duh.
Welp. Twilight's fucked. Question: If being out in the sun causes only a barely noticeable amount of pain, does that mean that the sun itself isn't what hurts her, but more the solar energy? Regardless of that answer, I assume being in the direct vicinity of Celestia will not be a comfortable experience for Twilight, will it?
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She was already in the presence of Celestia in the last chapter. And anything holy or sun related hurts her slightly. If she is touched with it directly then she gets more pain.
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Ah. So avoid being in the crossfire of Celestia using beams of solar energy/fire. Got it.
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Eh, yeah.
I wonder how Rarity will react if she hear or see Spike feeding blood to his Vampony BF (Best Friend)?
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The vampony chronicles was they original ? If yes, this would be the remake of that story, if yes... AWERSOME!!!
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I didn't make The Vampony Chronicles.
nice work.
Hmmm...interesting start to what I think will be an epic tale
. I'm tracking this.
HA
!
Very good point
.
Wow...never though I'd hear Spike say that...
. Still, that's really sweet of him to do that for Twi
!
Again, VERY good point
!
Never change Spike, never change
.
Great work on the first two chapters PIxel
! I look forward to seeing how this goes
!
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Thanks!
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!
No problem
Besides learning the life and ways of a Vampony. Can I still point out about her craving issues for blood?
Too short and too sudden with the reveal of Lunas intentions to have an impact, also what about Celestia?
The immediate reaction was, ehhh.
Is this a remake of The Vampony Chronicles ? Cause I won't lie I ABSOLUTELY LOVED that story I just wish it wasn't abandoned.
nice work.
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Um, I'm sorry, but no. I loved it too so I decided to refermish one of my cancelled stories with almost the same concept and recreated it with the same concept as that story.
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meh good enough That story was really really good. It was going amazing places then it just stopped being written. It is definatly one of the top stories on the site.
Seems you miss a word.
Hope you will not let us hang hier for to long.
Rarity your a asshole
Mutha fu-
What about Celestia? The mentor who taught Twilight since she was a child. The mentor who Twilight obsesses over and tries to impress. Now this new pony shows up and basically says, "I have given you my 'blessing', now help me build my republic (and overthrow my sister?)", and Twilight just sits there and calmly thinks it over?
Are Twilight going to meekly accept Luna's offer? Or, will she rage shift and throw this pompous pony princess out of her home?
At the moment this feels forced, rushed and unbelievable.
this good so far and I can see twilight joining luna because shis is giving her a choice on what to do as well as wanting to grant everyone with a chance to exersise free will as when it comes to celistia she never dose as she tends to say I want you and your friends to go here and do this without giving the option to refuse.
As much as I feel that Rarity shouldn't have run away like that, I can understand why she did it
. Still, I really hope she does not tell anypony else, especially the girls. Let Twilight handle that. The last thing Twi needs is to have an angry mob come after her and try to stake her through the heart
. Plus, I actually like her as a vampony, I really don't want her to lose her new powers
. Who knows, maybe they'll become of great use to her in battle, especially since vampires are known to be unnaturally strong...at least, that's what I've heard.
Also...
That was a good line
!
Another nice little chapter, I'll continue following it to see how it goes
.
I do have one question though. If my knowledge of vampires is correct, they do have an estimate lifespan of over 1,000 years tops. Now that Twilight has the powers of a Vampire Pony, is her lifespan going to be drastically extended along with her magical abilities
?
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At about halfway through i was thinking 'this seems familiar...'
Hmmmmmm
Maybe a bit rushed but I look forward to what you have planned for this story.
Is this a SE\NLR fic? Or is it unrelated?
Good point...though I wouldn’t put it past him to lose his head
.
...What
?! Shining...
.
Oh you should not have done that
.
Or else she’ll give you and even whiter coat
! If you know what I mean
.
Oh thank Celestia
.
Again, good point
.
Probably of a got idea to do that to Rarity Twilight
.
Listen to Luna Twi! She has experience
!
Eeyup
.
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Aww, you took mah job XD
Well, I agree with you in these, awesome chapter.
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Eeyup