The princess of the night has a daughter named Twilight Sparkle. When Luna is banished to the moon. Twilight feels nothing, just the hatred of Celestia for having banished her mother to the moon. whenever she looks at the moon, the only present feeling is sadness.
Inspired by Polaris501's story 'Heir of the Nightmare'
Twilight vector by uxyd: https://www.deviantart.com/uxyd/art/Sad-Twilight-357973293
Luna's room background by Boneswolbach: https://www.deviantart.com/boneswolbach/art/Luna-s-Room-545676832
Moon background by sigmavirus1: https://www.deviantart.com/sigmavirus1/art/MLP-FiM-Moon-MtT-314964851
Nightmare Moon vector by 90Sigma: https://www.deviantart.com/90sigma/art/Upset-Nightmare-Moon-Redux-375185142
Chapters (7)
...unless they aren't ponies for some reason, then the correct term is hooves. What's embarrassing is that you get it right every other time.
you called them paws again.
I suddenly feel like I'm shot back to 2012...
Is that normal?
Oh man, the feels were strong right off the bat! You have my full attention
nice start
Not the worst start to this trope
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Yes
9421391
It isn't te best either, but I think it's worth a look.
9421590
My thoughts exactly
Siblings don’t sign adoption papers.
Edit: good story but needs some editing
9421603
Here maybe but this is equestria so who knows.
Great Work! ^^
Damn... Celestia put Twilight to sleep for a 1000 years.... That bitch...
Good story so far. I love stories where Luna is Twilights mother
Hey man I think it would make for a smoother read if you change "Why do they avoid you and avoid the night?" to "Why do they avoid you and your night?"
Make up your mind, Twilight! Do you hate her or not? Cuz the logical sense is hate after everything Celestia did.
P.S. Is old does Twilight look?
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Yes, Twilight is grown.
9421994
Sorry I meant how old does she look?
9421995
Well, as Luna was banished to the moon long ago, and Twilight awakened from the spell in the thousandth year. Twilight, technically she has now in history, a thousand years old, but with the appearance of an adult mare. Like, the spell of sleep made her sleep, but her body still worked and she grew up in her sleep. Twilight may have lost her wings,but her shape grew from a filly to an adult mare and then stopped.
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I see then, thx 4 answering
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you are welcome
Poor Twilight. I can understand sending her to sleep, but this is too far.
So that's Twilight got paranoid about Nightmare Moon in the very 1st episode
this is actually really interesting... keep up the good work!
awesome! sunset shimmer is still in Equestria, you have my approval! ever since In the land of Twilight, under the Moon I wished more stories would do the same when it came to sunset shimmer
Interesting to see Sunset owning Spike & not in the EQG-Verse.
So Celestia tried to stop a potential threat to Equestria but simply ended up delaying her instead.
Now thanks to reasons Celestia herself created, that threat is going to return to Equestria in a month's time angrier than she was before.
Oh Celestia, I really have to wonder about you sometimes.
well this is a juicy story... cant wait to read more
Fluttershy should be capitalized since it’s her name and you’re using past tense where you should be using present or future tense.
Again this is a great story but needs editing this chapter especially
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Agreed, the grammar mistakes make this chapter almost unreadable.
I know you're trying to say "Yeehaw!". But... Well...
This wasn't really that good at all...
Sunset is a girl and your using past tense where it doesn’t places where it doesn’t fit. Seriously you need to edit these before uploading
I’m really sorry but this story went downhill
Serious that was stupid ending. Luna should slapped Celestia for banishing her, I'm not sayin they go to war, but things take a bit longer. She may forgive Sunset but Celestia on the other hand.
The story was ok for what it was.
The last two chapter were... not good.
The last one was Copy pasted from the show and this one is flat like a cutting board.
I'm sorry that I've to say that.
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Twilight's still alive.
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Wait what. I need to reread this cause I missed something.
Good story. Sequel please
This ending... I'm positive you rip it off word for word (minus Sunset) from a different story
Well done. I love stories where Luna is Twilight's mother
Wow, it's like reading off of Google Translate....
I can't make any sense of this story. It's barely legible, and so far the only thing that makes any sense is Luna's anger towards Celestia. why put twilight in an adoptive family if Luna will be home in a month? why take her wings? Why wake her at that arbitrary time?
I do not understand the tip totally, I have forgotten, celeste traitor. And celestia is exalted as always. Celestia should get in the face for what she did. and here the luna is being thrown before it. he feels very disappointed. a nice story, only this humiliation of the luna hurts a bit.
If Twilight Sparkle was really Luna's daughter, then that explains why she was chosen to be her successor.
But what do you think really happened? She and the Mane 6 are, of course, all worthy of damehoods, but are any of them of a royal lineage?
I love it
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That’s because it’s copied and pasted from another story
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R.I.P. Von Twilight
If you are looking to the comments before reading, do yourself a favor and move along for your "Luna is Twilight's mother" fix. There is other stories out there that do the subject better than this one. Started strong but quickly devolved in its structure that later chapters were barely coherent.