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PixelMoon


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On one lonely and dull night, Princess Luna finds comfort in the last pony she'd expect to see her.

Her night gets completely turned around.


Story inspired by cover art, which is by MagnaLuna. Check her out, she has a lot of good art.

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8699060
I'm so not even gonna ask where you get these pictures.

8699068
Overall, this could probably use a little bit of work though. I saw a few issues with grammar as I read through.

8699069
:twilightsheepish: I did a quick little run through. I plan on editing it a bit more thoroughly tomorrow.

That was cute, definitely a nice pick me up to anyone having a bad day. Though that may be my bias against Twiluna (Tuna) shipping, just can't get enough of it.

8699100
Thanks so much! You just made my day so much better!

aww i want more X3
like how dose Celestia find out, dose Luna start being late for meetings, if so, dose Celestia now feel how Luna ones did when Luna misses their times to be together, and is that how Celestia finds out

The love confession came too quickly for me.
Other than that, nice to see more cute Tuna :pinkiehappy:

excellent fic though I think there should have been something with luna and celestia to make up for her lateness

The roar of the crowd dies down as the band comes back on stage. As the noise ceases, the band starts in on the a cappella intro to their newest hit, eliciting fresh screams at their call for affection. The lead stallion smirks to himself as he seeks out the pink Alicorn in the first row that he's been watching all night. He sees her staring, enraptured by his sweaty, moustachioed charisma, and winks, enjoying the ensuing blush.

The song finishes, and the band takes another bow. "Thank you, Canterlot! We are Queen! Good night!"

As the band shuffles back stage again, the front colt motions to an assistant. "I'd like you to go down and find the young Princess and invite her backstage. Tell her I have a... special surprise for her in my dressing room." he says with an enigmatic smile. The assistant gives a small bow and hurries off.

"Yes, she'll definitely be surprised." says the singer with a sinister chuckle, his eyes flashing briefly to green.

This is exactly how me and my boyfriend started dating...Except much more cute and scrunchy facey
good fic, I felt the wub.

minor error
I insist, Princess. Besides, I want to know fully why you seen down,besidesthe fact that you are lonely." She rubbed the back of her mane with a hoof. "Plus, I may or may not be a bit lonely too."

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