Just an introvert who likes My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I also like to write MLP fanfiction. Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony.
This story is a sequel to The Moon's Comfort
The day of Twilight's coronation is stressful for the young alicorn soon-to-be princess. Everything must be perfect, and to Twilight, it will never be perfect. Too much can go wrong, and even the minor details need to be perfect.
But maybe it doesn't have to be perfect, or maybe she needs to look at it differently, and maybe Princess Luna can help with that.
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I think you need to change that description a bit. You've used the word "perfect" four times within- what, three sentences?
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I think that might've been intentional...
8600246
I think so too, but I don't feel like it is practical for a description due to the fact it's a very subtle joke, It might just fly over their head. Especially if they're not a fan of Twilight.
I'm kinda confused. In the last story it felt like Luna's visit was like a first romantic overture sort of thing. Luna was nervous, Twilight was uncomfortable calling her by name, Luna seemed afraid Twilight would think the cuddling was weird, etc. And she seemed to be playing up that she was going for platonic comfort until she called Twilight 'belovèd' as she was going to sleep.
But now in this story they both seem to be acting like they've been together for a while. Which one am I misreading?
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This takes place later on, so you're not misreading either of them.
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But... I thought the last one was set the night before her coronation, and this one's set the day of her coronation... How...?
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The last one was set the night Twilight ascended into an alicorn. This is several weeks to two months later.
8603047
Ah. Yeah, that was it. I just had it in my head that everything just kinda happened all at once, but that was more the fault of that rushed-ass episode.
Best Ship
8603047
They're supposed to be in a relationship yet there is not even one kiss between them.......why?
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They're not that far along yet... They're comfortable being with each other and cuddling together, but they've yet to kiss. Plus, I want to keep this E rated...
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Luna kept referring to Twilight as "Beloved" and "My Love" which are names that lovers usually give to each other which would insinuate that they are most definitely a couple.
And how would kissing cause the rating to go from E to T? I've read plenty of E rated stories that had kisses exchanged between lovers/couples
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Yeah, it's just a personal preference for myself... From a canonical standpoint, they just haven't yet as a combination of being nervous about that, along with kind of wanting to wait for a better time for it.
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Oh ok that's understandable
Nice story. Rarity and Celestia are terrible ponies in this though. Rarity just adds to Twilight’s stress when she is obviously on edge and Celestia wants her to address the public with no warning.