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Moonlit Path


People are not born equal. That's the hard truth I learned at age four. But that was my first and last setback. -Midoriya Izuku

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This story is a sequel to Overlooked Relations


On Father's Day, Twilight discovers a problem with her family. Now she is torn how to help. As a Princess of Equestria, or as a daughter and sister.


Sorry it is a little late. Hope you enjoy it.
The reading of Overlooked Relations is NOT needed.


Part of the Family War Series

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Twilights Velvet 

*Twilight Velvet

That got up to the bedroom

I'm not sure what you mean, but I think it could be they went up to the bedroom.

Flurry Hearts

This one is in here at least twice. Its Flurry Heart. Not hearts.

‘He really just got tricked

‘Hey, were getting him

Both of these have the wrong mark at the start. The second one's were should be we're.
I know you said you can see the weird spacing, but I have no idea what's causing it. Have you tried re-writing the sentences that have them?

Another awesome story! I'm eager to read more.

7382472 Thank you. I'll get those fixed as soon as I get home. Also yes, they are still doing it. I managed to get a few sentences fixed before posting, but I don't know why it's doing that.

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