This story is a sequel to Overlooked Relations
On Father's Day, Twilight discovers a problem with her family. Now she is torn how to help. As a Princess of Equestria, or as a daughter and sister.
Sorry it is a little late. Hope you enjoy it.
The reading of Overlooked Relations is NOT needed.
Part of the Family War Series
Sequel?
7333980 In the works
7333986 Can't wait.
*Twilight Velvet
I'm not sure what you mean, but I think it could be they went up to the bedroom.
This one is in here at least twice. Its Flurry Heart. Not hearts.
Both of these have the wrong mark at the start. The second one's were should be we're.
I know you said you can see the weird spacing, but I have no idea what's causing it. Have you tried re-writing the sentences that have them?
Another awesome story! I'm eager to read more.
7382472 Thank you. I'll get those fixed as soon as I get home. Also yes, they are still doing it. I managed to get a few sentences fixed before posting, but I don't know why it's doing that.
7382968 could you make a sequel