After losing every semblance of a normal human life, the human-turned pony Silver Script turns to the study of alchemy in hopes of getting her life back on track. From there, she can start making friends and build a life for herself... Hopefully.
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I quite enjoyed this chapter, mainly due to the amount of times it made me laugh, here are a couple of my favourites.
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Sure was a long chapter. Again, sorry I couldn't help edit it. Most I can do right now is read and comment.
Don't even get me started on trying to type up my own chapters. It took me three hours just to get about 400 words down, and even then it was riddled horribly with mistakes.
It's been bugging me for a while, so I guess I'll just ask.
Is there really anything a non-unicorn could do to fight against magic abuse? It just seems like unicorns have no real respect for (what seems like) the impossible-to-fight-against powers that they have.
I finally finish When a Pony Calls, read all of this in two sittings, and when I come up for air, you've got a new chapter for me!
I freakin love this.
okay... I love the Lamia part, but...
The...birth & unbirthing is just
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2995159 Mostly, a unicorn is only as powerful as their focus/drive. Get a drop on a unicorn or surprise them, like Dashie did, and you've got a significant advantage. If you can bop them on the horn... well...
2995210 Those are exactly the reactions I was looking for with those scenes.
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Well congratulations then...I guess
I do kinda wish Silver would keep a decent brain-to-mouth filter going when talking with Ice Blossom because she is really not helping herself there and I'm finding myself yelling at my screen "Get over your damn awkwardness and just buck already!"
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So Silver's helplessness to a drunken Blueblood was mostly her fear? Sorry if that came out rudely.
It just seems that very little focus is needed at all for a pony to become helpless to a unicorn. I never really thought of it until now, but it could be Silver's size... she'd be physically weak compared to just about anything else.
2995226 Pretty much, yeah.
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Bad Lyra. Stop making things weird for everypony.
She should just start writing a book about her "adventures", it's as good as any Daring Do novel and the kicker is, it's not fiction. Oh? You don't believe this little filly got eaten alive by a lamia and blew it up from the inside like a gory party favor? Let's just ask the Elements of freakin' Loyalty and Honesty, shall we?
+20 Badassitude
Now if doesn't add to the legend she's carving out of Equestria's flank, I dunno what else will.
Double-reverse "Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge"! Awesome.
We can only hope Lyra's bluffing about that threat - Either that or she owns some rather outré magic textbooks.
2996129 I'm not sure I follow. Is it because I inadvertently lead the user to believe that scene one and two didn't actually happen, and that it was all just a split-second imagining of Silver's before getting eaten, and then surprise! It all did happen after all?
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Yep, that's it exactly. It was a fakeout, and then a fakeout about the fakeout.
Edit: You probably know already but just to make sure it's in reference to the famous Ambrose Bierce story about the guy "escaping" from being hanged.
2996195 Yeah, I googled it just to make sure I was following correctly.
That scene with Lyra forcing Silver Script to watch requires fanart.
Unbirthing? I could live with that if it didn't mean that she'd be in a bad spot due to the cuts breaking open and stitches coming free.
I do feel kinda sorry for Ice Blossom though, as she may be in shock for some time due to being forced into the relationship dynamics that've surrounded Silver Script, Lyra, and Bon Bon.
Glad to see much of the critical reasoning behind the various actions laid bare as well.
Go rainbow your actually awesome again.
2996711 How the hell did you manage to get my EXACT thoughts down before me?
Silver be unbirthed? ... The image is burned in my mind. I like it!
2997735 Your avatar is quite fitting in this situation.
There are no words.
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actually that's me on a daily basis. Would you like to join Kaiden, chocolateswirl, me, and several other bronies in a skype group? Also do you live in IL? I need some local friends and I can't seem to find anyone near me.
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Great minds think alike!
I have no idea.
2998105 No... I'd say this situation is closer to 'fractured minds behave like magnets.'
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I need to save that. Certainly beyond true.
2998059 Nah, I don't actively use skype... If by IL you mean Illinois, sorry to say I'm not what you'd consider local. I'm based in the Province of Nova Scotia, here in Canada.
Wait, I'm confused, is Sorin dead or not?
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Well there's another friend in Canada. Why are all my friends in Canada? If I can ever get to Canada we all need to go crazy and have a huge party and by that time I may be 21 so being drunk all night will make us all do some crazy shit. It would be like ... he's stuck in the toilet, he's wearing girl's clothes, she's on top of me naked, that guy is in the tub, that girl fell asleep upside down in the chair, etc. Sounds like my everyday self but it's applied to others.
2998594 No, Silver is not dead. The 'Soren' persona, however, is.
I think you need a "you" in there. Also, Lyra is PISSED!
SO many good lines here, unbirthing as well! Being late for class is shortening this up a bit!
Should "Everfree" be capitalized? Also, vagina stuffing, kinda bummed it didn't happen, cause well, more emotional trauma can only lead to good things.
Silver is pretty fucked in the head. I like Chill Dash, though I can't remember what Silver exploded over though.
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Yikes, now there's a scary thought. Something tells me she's not going to react well when she's reminded of this. Again.
>>Seven Fates
*blinks*
Was that a quote from Gurren Lagann? Please be a quote from Gurren Lagann.
2999195 T'was.
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Then you are more awesome than I originally thought. Have a brohoof /]
I was sorta looking forward to Lyra cramming Silver into her womb as revenge. Then Lyra would be trotting around town showing off her new baby and out pops Silver's head "Help! Save me!" before being pulled back inside...
Luckily, you've got higher standards. The bit with Dash was great. I can't wait for the next chapter, even if the hilarious and ill-thought out revenge plan by Lyra didn't come to fruition.
Rainbow Dash is NOT the element of Honesty.
3007198 Nope, but she IS Loyalty.
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Which will get you an apology when they find the remains of Aqua Regia.
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Let me reiterate in another way... Below is a picture I found kind of neat.
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See the card in her wing.... Yes I could see RD cheating at cards.
Told that kind of tale?
3007339 You don't care much for Dashie's loyalty, do you?
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Loyalty yes, she is awesomely loyal. Honesty not as much. The only reason Aqua is probably safe is RD has no idea who she is...
I could also see a niagara falls moment with her name.
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3022956 Okay, I'm really trying to stay rational here, but I've gotta stop you on this whole rape point. Here on Earth, rape is the most prevalent under-reported violent crime. There are plenty reasons rape victims don't report. The belief that it is a private/personal matter and fear of reprisal from their attacker are two of the most common factors, but any other number of factors: police attitudes; attacker connections; cultural issues like honor killings; regional laws which would unfairly victimize the victim - Afghanistan, for example, where a victim reporting the crime might be charged with adultery, which is punishable by death; pride/fear of admitting weakness is a common one among Male/Male and Female/Male rape. Silver isn't being "stupid" about it. She's acting like a victim in the way any victim on Earth would behave, regardless of Equestrian laws.
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You just made me cry
I loved it all so much I'm so happy she is ok.And I loved this chapter it had my heart beating and I'm so happy I got to find out what happened and that every one is ok.And that Silver was able to talk to Rainbow dash and that there friends now.and I it was crazy what Lyra was planning to do to Silver.I can't wait to see what happens next.And I loved that Gurren Lagann line I LOVED THAT SHOW!!!!!!!!!!!.As much as I love this fic.
Oh, shit. You just tripped me the fuck out.
I was disappointed that it was only a flashback, though.
Her making a mini rainboom would be cute to see
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Agreed