Intriguing indeed.
It appears she is growing used to her new life.
Excellent work, dear Author.

I can make you that stallion shouting, “Just a moment!”

Might want to change "you" into "out"

Really good so far for a second there I thought that Silver failed!

Also Captain Jack Sparrow for the win!

Buy apparently cursed artifact?
ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED!

DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNNNN!

Heh, classic bait-and-switch there.

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Wait a minute... I RECOGNIZE YOU! Or... Your profile picture, at least. Keep forgetting the username of the author of the other gender-bender fic that I have read. I can't remember until the darn thing's updated!(Or I get off my ass and look through my favorites for it)
EDIT: I bloody knew it! You are ze author of Pony-bound!

Stylistics!

"Pony Joe’s honestly reminds me of a cross of Tim Hortons crossed with a Second Cup. "

You probably shouldn't use "cross" twice like that. "a cross between Tim Hortons and a Second Cup", without the second crossed, reads smoother and doesn't remove any context or necessary elements. Or "reminds me of a Tim Hortons crossed with a Second Cup", both read easier.

Other than that, still reading. :)

Well it seems things might be looking up for Soren. Hopefully he can get his old body back and return home. Just curious, is October 21, 1981 a real birthdate of you or someone you know, or was that just something you made up? The year 1981 always makes me think of my old Ford Bronco.

I loved it all an excellent beginning I loved the story of the compass I can't wait to see what else your got in-store for this story

Is that why there are tears rolling down my cheeks right now?

tears of elation

You deceptive little fucker.

I actually took college placement exams just yesterday.

Tim Hortons have best breakfast sandwiches I can find

I couldn't help but read "churro" instead of curio. Stupid mental auto-correct.

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Or you were hungry