After losing every semblance of a normal human life, the human-turned pony Silver Script turns to the study of alchemy in hopes of getting her life back on track. From there, she can start making friends and build a life for herself... Hopefully.
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Being knocked out is a reoccurring thing now is it?
2486039 Had to get one last bit of 'the universe hates Silver' out there before things get 'normal'.
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NEIGHPONESE PONIES!
... regardless, it would seems Silver is indeed learning the harmonious ways of Equestria.
But shall fortune still guard her?
Awaiting further releases.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
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Hmm, might have to change her cutie mark to a bullseye. No! A small flattened animal with tire treads across it and change her name to Road Kill.
Awesome job as always. Keep up the good work Captain.
2486200 Actually, that's Vice Admiral.
2486039 If I had a euro everytime I read about a character being knocked out...
Hm, I sense shenanigans with Chill once she chills and becomes friends with Silver.(If they do.)
For the record, I hate the word 'toon' (in regards to MMO characters) myself. I've always thought it was one of the most ridiculous bits of slang to come out of those games. At least other bits of slang make SOME sense.
Anyway, poor Silver. The sheer amount of physical beating she's getting of late can't be good for her.
2486212 My mistake sir.
this is such an awesome story
Ok, bad things happening to this guy is becoming a point of comedy instead of tragedy.
2486085 You mean that the universe hating Silver is NOT normal?
So, not only do you use something I love, heterochromia iridium, but you put it on a Neighponese pretty girl. Hell yes.
So, Silver admits in the psychiatrist's meeting that her misfortune is a result of her bad judgement, and it's not the universe hating her.
And then drunk Blueblood. And random ponies standing everywhere. And fireworks. And shouting matches. And bass cannon.
Oh, the irony.
2486518 2486674 Fun fact: I approach my life like it's being written by a very shitty author... one very boring, shitty author who only wants me to write and play video games. I like to pretend the Author is a douchebag.
2486888 I imagine Silver would love to have that author writing her life.
So there's a Neighpon. Does that mean there's an equivalent of Kamen Rider and Super Sentai?
2487267 For all we know, Kamen Rider is real in Neighpon, and the Super Sentai series is based off the Neighpon Self-Defense Force.
2487281 Then here's Wizard if magically oriented.
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If it's more technologically oriented, here's Faiz.
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I'm loving this story so much!
I'm liking the story, but I can't imagine all this blunt force physical trauma is doing Soren any good. That's what started the whole personality rewrite fiasco in the first place. Nevermind his still (likely) mental unstability. Physical abuse for the sake of comedy on someone for whom such acts led to real, serious mental and physical problems (for himself and others) isn't all that funny.
At the very least, he's starting to come around and is at least trying to give Harmony a chance, even if it didn't give him much of one in the beginning (or isn't much now).
Blinking away away tears
1. Extra away.
I almost feel like Silver will eventually get to the point of being beaten up and/or knocked unconscious by Blueblood one of these chapters.
Make it happenI really enjoyed the interaction between Silver and Ice Blossom, good job there. Also, bishoujo pony!
2490377 Nah, I have a specific interaction intended between Silver and Blueblood at one point in the story... one that shakes that putz's very foundations of life. Granted, it probably ain't any time soon.
This is simply amazing I actually like how you played out the scene with Ice blossom and Silver. The way Ice felt that sadness yet heart words that Silver said gave to Ice such a wonderful character :3 Love how Gale is honest and looks out for Silver. She is one bad ass roomie :D Poor Silver! Is she ever going to stop getting concussed and knocked out?! She is going to get brain damage (surprised she hasn't yet other then the mental breakdown) from all this trauma lol. Hope she feels better when she comes around. I can't wait for next chapterz :D
"the pain, it is" in the story has an unnecessary comma there.
Good chapter, but all this talk of cannibalism spurs a question: If horses are red meat, and avians are white meat, what are pegasi?
2494340 Blue?
You know, despite all this shitty stuff happening to her, I have a hunch that the Compass hasn't actually kicked in yet...
It was nice to hear a little recap and see her make a friend that was another pony. She hasn't had much luck in that department before. I look forward to many more concussions, also I look forward to Blue Blood pulling that stunt when Gale or another gryphon is nearby. I can already picture him being swarmed by gryphons and torn apart...
This was an good chapter, dam if getting hit by firework shells on the ground is bad enough flying into them has got to be 10 times worse, also the universe does kind of hate Silver but it's just Murphy's Law in effect if something can go wrong it will go wrong!
Finally got around to reading - These last few chapters were pretty cool. I appreciated the recap, as well.
Could there have been something up with that fireworks display... It seemed suspiciously like it actually was a flak barrage...
I have to wonder, too, where they're keeping the Pound Cake statue... Hopefully he's safe in a storage locker somewhere and not in a curio shop in Fillydelphia next to some more magic compasses.
2504881 I always enjoy when an author whose work I admire reads/compliments my work. It helps me pretend that I'm actually noticed.
As far as the fireworks display is concerned, it's more bad luck than anything else. Believe it or not, when Silver was still Soren, her character was loosely on me. Before the previous story ended, though, she evolved into something more than just an author insert, and I stopped seeing her as my reflection. One of the few ways that she's still like me is her terrible sense for dates/occasions. Unless I look at a calendar, I barely know what day of the week it is, never mind the date.
As far as Pound is concerned, I'd like to imagine that he was given a burial, foal-sized coffin and all, It would probably be too traumatic to just keep him around the house, and a grave they could visit might at least give a sense of 'closure'. What do I know about how that stuff works though? I'm just a loony who writes about ponies.
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You're in good company. But yeah, a burial makes much more sense. I just had this image of Silver in ten or fifteen years holding up an Erlenmeyer flask and saying "I've done it! I've finally done it! Here I come, Pound Cake, here I... umm... Aw hell." ...And I immediately thought storage locker since I've been intermittently helping a buddy clear out his mom's house.
[squeal] Believe it or not, Rob/Blue Shift has a similar origin, except he's a musician instead of an artist. I have a guitar but I never learned to play it. One thing at a time, I guess. Which should definitely translate to "Less DCS: A-10 Warthog" if I ever wanna get the illustration for that next chapter finished...
Definitely want to see where this goes from here... I have a feeling some cliques are going to begin forming, the Outsiders and the Royals, I'll call them.
2519728 I understand where you're coming from and why you find the 'recap' unnecessary, and I agree that it is unneeded for the most part. Part of the reason I went through this to point out both the way she recapped it - note she conveniently named no names - and to refresh the memories of those who haven't recently read When a Pony Calls, or have even forgone reading the original before the sequel.
You'll also get to hear a bit about Icy's family in the next chapter.
I loved a lot of it I'm happy that Silver and Ice Blossom are cool now and they are friends for a long long time .But Blueblood is still a Asshole for what he did to Silver I can't wait to see what happens next to them all
THEN WHY ARE YOU SAYING IT
4041344 needless to say....
The aura is cool, cruel, and unfit to rule.
Nice rhyme
2486888 funny enough I'm the same way! Screw our life authors am I right?