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Flurry Heart has grown old enough to begin attending school. However, she may have been spending a little too much time around her father, Shining Armor. She's been acting...different than the other foals during playtime. During a parent-teacher conference, Shining is informed of her behaviors.
An entry in the Shining Armor is a terrible dad competition.
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Like father, like daughter.
One hopes Flurry doesn't plan to turn one of her classmates into a ferret.
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I understood that reference
I was bothered by the teacher calling him Mr. Armor. Shining is a Prince or Prince Consort. And calling Flurry 'Miss Heart' is also kinda disrespectful given that she is a Princess.
The story has some similarities to my Play Date and Play Date Continued stories but cool to see the interaction of Flurry trying to attend a public school.
I don't see what the teacher's problem is. The way I see it Shining raised her proper, all things considering. She'll make a fine Tyra- I mean, Princess when she grows up.
On the plus side, those foals who will grow up to be guards will have a one up on their training.
Ha! Drill Sergeant Flurry Heart, I love it.
Lol. Good story.
Flurry Heart, Warrior Princess
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Nah, that'd be the doing of Chrysalis II disguised as Flurry Heart while keeping the real Flurry Heart, shrunken down and podded, in a thermos.
I wonder if Flurry Heart will wind up recruiting a ponified version of the G.I. Joe team in the future…
thats my girl
Awww, this was sweet. You should (have?) submit it to the "Shining Armor is awful father" contest just to make all the awful Shinings look even worse!
I love the idea of Shining being the loving but unwise father who praises his child's antics as long as they are impressive. LOL!
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I did, but thanks.
This was pleasently amuisng!
This is easily the best “Shining is a terrible dad” fic. It was realistic without being over the top to prove a point. Simplistic and effective, definitely recommending this one. Bravo!
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Considering the potential trauma Chrysalis may have left him with, what the brainwashing and such. Nah, I don't blame him. Doesn't want what happened to Cadence to happen to her.
Most amusing. I have to wonder what Cadence thinks about Flurry’s behaviour. Does she agree or is she resigned or exasperated?
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Terrible? That was great dadding! All he needed was the inclusion of some groaner puns and a few more shared interest and he'd be a perfect dad in this fic.
What a good dad :)
The way the author made a wholesome father-daughter bonding story - albeit with facepalmingly "oh Shining, you goofy idiot" moments - is what makes this one of the more enjoyable stories of the lot.
Goodonya Shining!! Make your daughter into that yak warlord she was born to be
Someone needs to make this into a comic or youtube video drama short story.
Flurry saying in effect "I could have murdered you for no reason and you should be thankful I was only going to hurt you", especially followed up by Shining Armor encouraging her, is really disturbing.