When an ancient Equestrian artifact suddenly tears a hole in time and space, Sunny Starscout gets the chance to meet her idol, Twilight Sparkle, for real! However, not only is Twilight shocked by the changes to the Equestria she loves, but Opaline's ever-present eyes see this as an opportunity to undo her defeat at Twilight's hooves. Twilight and Sunny must find a way to stop the mad alicorn if Equestria is to remain stable.
G4/G5 crossover.
Timeline: Pre-season 9 of FiM, post G5 holiday special.
My 40th pony fic!
Coverart by Adagiostring.
Chapters (16)
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Talk about cliff hangers...
You certainly know how to grab the attention. Past meet present here we go.
While we already know who the threat is but unfortunately they don't know and that's also another good question about the magic and why it disappeared when did everything fell apart that's the only question we all want to know we only getting bit by bit information but not much
next chapter when
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Two weeks at most.
I'm loving the concept, excited to see where you take it. Excellent work so far
interesting
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Only one I can guess is
Twilight sealed magic away to prevent Opaline from winning. Just a guess tho, no mager evidence
AAAAARRRRGH
"What in Equestria was that!?"
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The Main 6😃
should of shouted for seashell
What kind of kids are these that's totally buried treasure. Old cool well designed and unexpected I would be so excited to find treasure like that on the beach
Anyway excited to see where this goes and for the main 6 to to pull off some girlboss moves on marentime
That's still pretty crazy what just happened
Well this is a pretty interesting start of a story so it was just a normal day in Maretime Bay and it looks like the holiday was pretty much done but it didn't stop Sunny to be more positive than ever but it looks like zipp I still trying to figure out the message that Twilight left meanwhile at the beach it looks like the pipsqueaks were just playing around until they found a watch and apparently it was activated and somewhere in town there was a portal in the center nobody has no idea what kind it is but it looks like somebody is coming I wonder who Could That Be guess we'll find out next time
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https://youtu.be/9AfYK1fKngU
I. Need. MOAR!
Great start. Six silhouettes though? That'd imply the whole mane 6 are present, but the story description implies only Twi goes through... I suppose something went horribly(?) wrong(?).
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The tag says main 6, so its all.
Right?
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I missed that! Good eye.
I just googled Opaline and she is, by far, the ugliest pony I have ever seen.
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Fixed! I hate it when I do that.
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In 3D at least. I think she looks more passable in Tell Your Tale.
Will be keeping an eye on this one!
I remember seeing someone do this for the Season 5 finale trailer on YouTube, and I'm pretty sure I'll never get a chance to do this again, so:
Long ago in a distant land,
I, Opaline, the all-powerful mistress of magic,
unleashed an unspeakable evil!
But six foolish pony guardians
wielding magic gems
stepped forth to oppose me.
Before the final blow was struck,
I tore open a portal in time
and flung them into the future,
where my evil is law.
Now the fools seek to return to the past
and undo the future that is Opaline!
Finally, I havent seen a lot of stories where two generations meet
The Mane 6 and Mane 5 could have met in Chip n Dale Rescue Rangers, which is an idea of mine for this sequel they're hoping to do.
This is brilliant so far! Can't wait until the next chapter!
This story is shaping up to become very interesting. Also I wonder what that watch was if it can tear a hole in spacetime.
i can only imagine pinkie popping out of the portal in a steampunk battle suit just because
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Gotta get back,
Back to the past
Or else their efforts would mean jack
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Watcha!
Been waiting a long time for this.
This isn't the first time travel story that I see between the two generations but it's the first that I see that has good pacing, good characterisations and competent writing. I am very interested to finally see this concept done right and what kind of adventure awaits the two groups.
Keep up the good work!
https://youtu.be/EnAe3LdDFs0
I have been teased once again, but otherwise, happy that it's finally happening. Two generations meet. At last.
Twilight has come a long way to finally being decisive.
The tear itself keeps reminding me of the Day of the Doctor when the time fissure appears (which is the same thing as the portal here). Ten says anything could happen and then a fez comes through much to his bewilderment.
On a different note I am happy to see this going forward and I am eager to see what happens when the 2 generations meet.
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Reminds me more of the tear in God of War: Ragnarok, but I can see that too.
Well I'm glad that he is helping after what happened during that freaky Fridays stunt
Hmm same with Sparky he didn't felt that either then apparently the magic is only affecting the ponies and I don't think the other creatures are affected I think I'm not really sure
Yep pretty much I mean Twilight Spike and starlight went through something like this and I feel like Doctor Whooves will have a field day after that
Celestia
i swear sunny is going to squeal and pass out at the sight of twilight
Sometimes you can't help it 😊
Well that's kind of a Miss opportunity it would have been interesting for Spike to see Sparky
This is actually a pretty good build up right now so back in the past of Ponyville Twilight and her friends are basically hanging out with each other after that event of the legions of Doom they can finally relax well until they filed a magical source and suddenly the time portal opens and they have no idea what is beyond their but it looks like Star Swirl and starlight figure out what it is and none of the cities and other kingdoms were affected just only Ponyville but she has to discuss this with Princess Celestia Luna and Cadence trying to figure out what to do until Twilight said she will go and investigate whatever is behind it but of course her friends will come with her and this is actually the first time they're going to experience time traveling which there should be very interesting how the generation 5 will react to seeing Twilight and the others well guess we'll find out next time
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Always the cliffhangers. They'll come to an end soon, at least!
So excited to see where this goes! And yeah, as much as the cliffhangers are painful to me, the other commenters are right - you have amazing pacing here
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Actually, this isn't after the Legion of Doom. Remember, this takes place in between seasons 8 and 9 of FiM.
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Thank you!
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Ohh so this is before cozy glow almost succeeded and it's between when Princess Celestia and Luna announced their retirement okay got it
Can I upvote a story twice?