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This story is a sequel to Legends Never Die: The Return of the King


The end is coming. Sunny Starscout has rejoined her friends, and together, they must find a way to save Equestria from itself - and all the warring creatures inside it. But it won’t be easy - especially with every nation turned against them. Finding allies and putting their trust in them is risky and nowhere is safe - not once the hatred of the world is put on full display and threatens to destroy them all, trapping them in an endless void of anger, violence and division. Sunny and her friends need to unite the broken world that they have found themselves in - or suffer the consequences if they fail.

WARNING: Contains no relation to My Little Pony: Make Your Mark or My Little Pony: Tell Your Tale. This is strictly related to events that happened after My Little Pony: A New Generation.

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Gusty gave a weak smile and turned back to face the massive blue ram in front of her. She tried to remind herself, he wasn’t any scarier than the Chimera, than her brother, than all the armies she had run from in the past month. Then she took a quick glance at his eyes and felt all her confidence disappear.

Oh yeah grogar one of the biggest villains of My Little Pony if you ever see him in Generation 1 oh boy he's scary

“Someplace nopony can get it,” her commander said, relaxing now that he wasn’t commanding an army at that moment. “Someplace nopony would even think to look, and certainly not Grogar. We don’t want that thing falling into the wrong hooves.”

Uhh yeah about that.....

This is a pretty interesting start of a story specially talking about the past and before she was Gusty the Great she faced off one of the biggest villains of any other My Little Pony name grogar and throughout his years he have conquered destroyed lives and civilization and Gusty wanted this to stop her unicorn friends fought off as best as they could but there was still no match for him but then reinforcement came around it was the Pegasus who offered their help but there's still overpowered by him there was one thing she has to do get rid of the Bell which Gusty did there was some parts what she did was pretty silly but effective and she got the Bell with all the power inside of her she really said and defeated grogar once and for all and everybody was celebrating of his defeat and they had to hide the Bell so no ponies or creatures will ever use this Bell again well until season 9 came around so yeah but I wonder what's going on in the present I guess we'll find out next time

“Yeah… wait, I only met eight!” Sunny protested, watching Flurry hide a smile. “How many other tribes did you know about, Flurry? Do we need to send friendship ambassadors to all of them?”

Well there are other creature out there like cat creatures parrots creatures diamond dogs zebras donkeys Breezies and bat pony and probably more if I miss anything

Imara scoffed and tossed her head. “Well, I have been very busy in investigating what we’re up against,” she said, still sounding offended. “You see, the strangest thing is, we don’t have any mention of a ‘Queen Chrysalis’ in changeling history books - trust me, I’ve read them from top to bottom. The farthest we go back is King Thorax, and he was the father of Queen Monarch - so we have very minimalistic history lessons.”

Surprised they don't have her history book on her but I guess I don't blame thorax put it in in the history about Queen Chrysalis she is crazy

“We are not going to let them take our friend away so easily again,” Izzy agreed, putting her arm around her friend’s shoulders. Imara looked surprised that the pony had agreed to something she had said.

Aww thats nice see they can still work it out despite they're not the same creatures but they can still be friends and everything but that's why I like the idea of back in Friendship is Magic Season 8 and 9 spreading friendship across Equestria and Beyond

Ok so Sunny had to explain everything to Queen Haven about the whole situation on her journey and what is going on with the villains yes it was a lot to take it in but right now they all got to have to rest for tomorrow flurry heart even explained there are other creatures out there they never really expand on yet but that's another day because right now they still need to deal with the legions of Doom and Sunny wants to check on her other friends and I really hope it doesn't go too badly because I send some jealousy going on with zipp but anyway it looks like everybody is going to rest out for tomorrow because everything is going to be very Rocky as they say I will find out next time

So long as everyone works together? Sunny has all the ponies working together now, but her next objective is to get all species working together. At least the LoD are weaker now with Chrysalis doing her own thing.

Time to rest, and plan to see what the next best move will be. Will Imara and Izzy be able to get along?

It's cool. This new chapter is amazing, bookhorse125. I'm really enjoying it. I'll be thrilled to read your new chapter tomorrow.

I wondered where Helios was. Well then, Termite will have a lot to answer to when Queen Haven comes back. Maybe if Imara is with her, they can just put the whole charade down.

Termite was seeking information on the ponies themselves - what they were planning, how big their army was, how they planned to exterminate all the changelings - and, most importantly, what their weaknesses were.

But it's not true the ponies didn't even know you guys existed

Oh no more lies and misunderstood the situation apparently a changeling name termite trying to find any information at Zephyr Heights and he's in Disguise who was in charge of the Kingdom which he's got all the power but then a pony told him the information about Queen Haven conspiracy having interaction with sunny and her friends which he took advantage of the situation and spreading lies about Queen Haven and everybody this is really not good he's spreading all the lies and everything towards the ponies they got to do something before it's too late and stop his lies well we'll find out next time

Amazing job on your new chapter, this is great.

They arrived in the Crystal Empire in the morning, touching down gently in a large square in the Empire’s streets that housed a statue of a wingless dragon holding the Crystal Heart.

It spikes statue I'm glad it's still survived

“Sounds like a plan we should make up on the way ,” Little Braveheart announced, gently pushing them towards the zeppelin. “We can go to their hideout and stake it out, waiting until the perfect moment to steal the Elements and vaporize them with magic rainbows!”

I'll give a little Brave Hearts enthusiasm but she's just basically going in blindly in the battlefield

This is getting really intense again so after Hugo and Kailani all the ponies who were mine controlled back to the respectful home and heading back at the Crystal Empire but it looks like things are getting really bad zoom and Thunder gave us the information about sunny at her friends are Trader to Equestria and they need to warn them fast as they can once they made it there they told everything what's happening but it looks like little Braveheart was right they had to get going before things get worse but the thing is the Legions of Doom are probably long gone because they know that Sunny knows where they are so every ponies and creatures have to try something to figure out what to do to fix everything before every creature and ponies going at War well I guess we'll find out next time

Ok so we have a pretty good amount of ponies and creatures in this group two earth ponies hitch and sprout a alicorn/earth pony sunny two Pegasus pipp and Zipp one unicorn izzy alicorn flurry heart Crystal Pony midnight Changeling Imara dragon Ash kirin Brook Buffalo little Braveheart hippogriff/sea Pony Kailani yak Lukas Griffin Hugo again it's a pretty good group but hopefully it will be enough

“We should reach Tirek, Chrysalis, and Cozy Glow’s hideout in five days,” she estimated, tracing the most direct path with her hoof.

But they might be long gone by now because they know that Sunny knows where the location is So staying there would be a bad idea for the villains

“You can’t forget,” Izzy spoke up, “that they’re working with Permafrost and Sour Lavender - they’re ponies who tried to erase all of our memories and separate ponykind again,” she explained to the creatures with bewildered expressions. “We have to find a way to make them give up this philosophy that all tribes are meant to be separate.”

Izzy's right because those two would do anything very dangerous if it means they will achieve that goal of separating all the tribes away from each other which I don't understand why there both stupid

“It’s Izzy,” Sprout whispered to her. “Best not to question it.”

Oh man that's going to be a new thing but then again she could be related to Pinkie Pie Maybe man I miss her :pinkiesad2:

Also, Zipp was a fantastic flight coach.

Well yeah of course because she's been doing this for a while even if they lost their ability to fly just like in that episode tell your Tale

Well it looks like all the ponies and creatures went to the airshow and try to find the villains and need to figure out to deal with them but Sunny was still worried about the mind-link and she'll probably hurt her friends even Kailani is feeling worried about this whole situation like the whole world is against them they just need to figure out how to prove their innocence but it looks like Zipp wanted to Scouts ahead to see if there's anything going on and Kailani wants to go with her but it was really nice to see all the ponies and creature getting along with each other and even zipp and Kailani getting along as well and showing her how to do all those tricks and everything so it's nice to see that but still they had another threat coming not just only the legions of Doom but somebody who worse well I guess we'll find out next time

So many stories to catch up of boy :rainbowderp:

But with Chrysalis… Cozy wasn’t sure, but it felt different somehow. Maybe because she had worked with her before, had laughed around the campfire with her before, had told jokes and done evil and committed crimes and taken over the world with her before.

Wow so deep down cozy still felt like she got backstabbed for real thinking that she really did have a good time with chrysalis and now she's planning to betray her and she is going to betray her as well there is really no winning situation

Oh wow things are not looking good for the legions of Doom so it looks like chrysalis was getting impatient about this whole situation knowing that Sunny and her friends are on their way here so they need to prepare for their arrival and they have the Bell but unfortunately since it was becoming too much power to use they can't risk it but they have another plan to use sunny as their weapon since she still had the mind-link so chrysalis hide the Bell so just in case they needed but sooner or later she will backstab both of them but little did she knows that they knew about her betrayal and are planning to get back at her as well but deep down in cozy glow she felt horrible knowing to the fact she will betrayed chrysalis but Chrysalis doesn't even trust her as well so she's having this conflict of feelings about this whole situation and she needs some fresh air but then she heard voices and it turns out it was the three kids again the harmony of Crusaders they were wondering why is he out here and she told them that she just got lost and she needs to get to them so the Crusaders help her to find their parents and why do I have a feeling that she's going to betray those kids again I guess we'll find out next time again that means the legions of Doom are having trust issues with each other but it doesn't mean they can still be a threat

That's okay. This new chapter is amazing, I'll be willing to read three chapters.

That'll be great, I can't wait to read it!

Yes, yes! Let the friendship flow through you cozy! *cackles maniacally*

You are sure super fast on uploads. I definitely need to read the rest of the other stories… :rainbowderp: I know I’m behind but so far this series is super well done. I really like the path of redemption you are setting up for the Trio and the big (that Hasbro should had done), ultimately battle against the foe himself. The emperor Groger :raritystarry:

Definitely a lot of interesting character development. Can’t wait to finish other stories while reading the current story

Pipp’s voice shook as she said, “Th-there’s some kind of rally going on… about us.” She met Zipp’s fearful gaze. “And our friends. About how we’re dangerous traitors who don’t care about anypony other than ourselves.”

It's just like how Dawn Bellwether from zootopia said fear always works

and sometimes it really brings the worst out of us

“That’s Helios!” she said with a gasp. “He - he’s Mom’s most trusted assistant. She must have left him in charge while she was gone. But… he would never do this.”

Oh zipp it's only you know that's not him but a changeling in disguise spreading all the lies and everything

“Not really,” he told her. “Because I don’t see how anyone could be frozen in time for a hundred years - that doesn’t make any sense!”

Flurry grinned and patted him on the shoulder. “Welcome to Equestria, my friend.”

Yup pretty much sometimes we just roll with it

Pipp stood by the railing, alone, scrolling through her phone, bored. When she looked up and saw that all her friends were hanging out with the other creatures - even Sprout and Hitch were engaged in a conversation with Little Braveheart - she rolled her eyes, though inside, she felt like she was losing the thing she cared about most - her friends. It was as if they were trading her for someone better, and she hated it.

Oh pipp don't feel like that I'm sure they do care for you

So a lot of things are going on with the Two Sisters of the Pegasus pipp and Zipp how things are changing and how the world view so definitely especially with other creature not Just only the pony tribes and not only that what is going on to Zephyr Heights that Pony they thought they can trust is basically painting them as a traitor it really doesn't look too good for a sunny and the others and even flurry heart and Lukas having good conversation with each other and it looks like everybody's having a pretty good one but pipp is feeling jealous and fearing all the changes going on let's just hope it doesn't affect her too much I know it seems very hard but sometimes we just had to roll with it even if you're scared I had to deal with that well let's see how this will work out on the next one

Both Jinx and Rose were very curious about where Cozy came from, and she had to make up a story that she told them every time. She made it close enough to real life that it wouldn’t be that hard to remember: Cozy had been abandoned by her parents to an orphanage, but it was awful there and she ran away (that part was all true). Then she said that she found her way to a small town of ponies, which was also true, and found a new family. No need to mention that her new family consisted of two other vengeful villains that were working behind each other’s backs.

Boy it really makes thing complicated man

Rose pointed to one of them. “This one’s the smallest, those two are slightly bigger than the others, but one pair is lighter and not pressed in as hard. And over there - that one’s a bit different from all of them. See, the shape is a bit rounder and more… dainty.”

That must be flurry heart and the others

Permafrost had a small nick in his hoof. She had always noticed it but had never asked where he had gotten it.

Oh yeah that's right those two was spying on flurry heart and the others then put a mind link on sprout 😰

“Listened to all your ‘brilliant’ ideas?” Tirek asked, making air quotes around the word. “Poor, poor naive pony. You’ve never amounted to anything, and you never will. You can’t fool me with that innocent little act of yours. Face it - the world will never care about you, or any of us. Just when you feel that they might, they’ll dump you in the ditch like they’ve always done. And the sooner you accept that, the better you’ll be.”

I know he is a villain and all but dang that really hurt so much 💔

Oh man that was sad so cozy glow been hanging out with the Crusaders of harmonies and it's been a long time she ever hang out with somebody who's actually in her own age and she actually had fun with them just kids stuff but then they asked her where did she meet her parents and where they came from even though she has to stretch out the truth because she's one of the most villain in Equestria she didn't want to tell them but then they found a footprint and they didn't know who it belongs to but unknown to them it must be flurry heart and the others they were here but Dad there are other Footprints and it turns out cozy glow knows who it is so she had to sneak away from them and went back and confronted those two ponies and she knew that permafrost and sour lavender were out there but apparently the other two didn't believe her which that's save those two ponies from Cozy's accused add basically Tirek had enough with her ideas it basically nobody cares what she thinks it was pretty hurtful what he says that she basically took off and now she knows you really can't count on those guys they will backstab you as soon as they got the chance I wonder what she's going to do now I guess we'll find out next time

Once he said the words, he wished he could shove them back into his mouth, because he could see the hurt in Cozy Glow’s eyes, but this was the world, and she should wake up and see it.

Cozy Glow: no wonder Scorpan hated you. Then she ran off

I mean that's add more into the drama right

I can't wait to see your book cover and this new chapter is coming out amazing.

Okay, take a break to ease off the stress. This new chapter is getting great so far.

They only want you for your smarts cozy, but that's it. They don't appreciate you like true friends would.

The pegasi in Zephyr Heights were also decently easily convinced. Having Termite right in front of them, seeing the fake evidence he produced first hoof, was useful in convincing them faster. A few ponies, mainly in the royal guard, such as Thunder and Zoom, were still unsure or completely convinced that Termite was lying, and Thunder continued to send information to Pipp as secretly as he could. The other guards who agreed that Sunny Starscout would never do something like that were secretly plotting their own plan - that they would remain loyal to their queen and do as she would like them to do.

Good at least that's some ponies out there they don't fall for that kind of Lies

Thunder pulled out his cell and texted a message to Pipp: We’re on our way .

Okay that means we're going to get more help this is good

With each angry cry, with each hatred-fueled act, with each shout, with each lie and rumor spread, the howling storm on the horizon grew worse and worse.

Oh no this is really not good at all this is becoming a World War 3

Oh boy and you thought things could have gotten worse think again apparently back in Zephyr Heights the disguise changeling termite is still spreading all the lies and everything to every ponies out there luckily back at Maretime Bay that's still Pony so still doesn't believe that's sunny and the others will never do something like this but things got really worse every creatures that Sunny went through with her group believing all the lies that cozy glow told them about the ponies are deciding to go to war against the ponies which this escalated relieved bad sunny and the others better hurry up because another villain is coming towards them as well this is really getting intense I wonder how this will work out I guess we'll find out next time

Try to take your time on your story does no rush or anything

It look like Queen Haven are still worried about their daughters especially Phyllis worried about her son and they felt like they need to do something and I really do like the interaction with these three leaders how much Queen Haven needed a friend but then they got the message from pipp the one that Queen Haven trusted is causing more Panic at home knowing that termite is spreading more lies but that zipp told them if they need to do something go for it which the other three will well let's hope they know what they're doing well we'll find out what's going to happen next time

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