Legends Never Die: The Beginning of Harmony

by bookhorse125

Epilogue: Reign

His prison had been growing weaker…

He had been growing stronger…

The magic splintered and broke…

And the ram awoke…

Author's Note:

Dramatic sequel awaits! This was a kind of challenge for me, because I was told that I could write a chapter in twenty words, and it would still be amazing. So how do you think I did?

Constructive criticism is appreciated. Thank you for reading!

Comments

[Yoshifan30]

And the ram awoke…

He's back 😰

[Phetiamwantip]

I think it's great

[Yoshifan30]

Well this is not good grogar the king of the monsters is back

[StarzGecko]

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I definitely agree. It’s sad she wasn’t at the end of the show… I don’t think we never saw her again. You are definitely right that world runs very differently to the point that she could definitely step into Sunny Equestria.

I really like those two or three stories of her so far. Very good stories and it would be pretty interesting to see she here in this authors story.

Cozy definitely is sadly alone… maybe she’ll get really attached to Sunset since she is the closest pony who lived back in the past. Would be cool to see Sunset be Cozy older sister/mother like to her.

[StarzGecko]

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20 words? That’s the best chapter on the whole website. You’ve done it you beautiful ugly little blue goat monstrosity

I meant the Groger not you author…

[Sunnydlight]

The fact you made this in 20 words is really impressive! I'll be looking forward to the sequel!

[Stuff]

That's not good...

[Phetiamwantip]

Bookhorse125, as members of the Mlp fanfictions. I hearby giving you a trophy for finishing your Legend Never Die: The Beginning of Harmony. Congratulations. 🏆

[StarzGecko]

Just watched the new MLP special “Make Your Mark” and they introduce a new Alicorn villain at the end. Definitely very interesting

[bookhorse125]

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*Gasp* Maybe it's Flurry Heart gone evil!

[StarzGecko]

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[Yoshifan30]

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To be honest I hope not that would be even more heartbreaking

[StarzGecko]

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She doesn’t look like anyone we know in the show. She is likely a new character

[MatTheBook]

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it says Ram

[MatTheBook]

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oh no....

help

[MatTheBook]

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oh no....

what do we do?

[MatTheBook]

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4 character possibilities

Twilight sparkle (Idk how)
Flurry heart
Radiant Hope
Sunny's mother

or new character option

[Yoshifan30]

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I guess we'll find out next time and hopefully sunny and the others be ready for him

[MatTheBook]

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oh no....

what do we do?

[MatTheBook]

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we need the elements of Harmony

[Yoshifan30]

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Well With a Little Help the creatures across the Equestria maybe they still have a chance

[StarzGecko]

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Would be cool if she was Sunny's mother

[NightFlame389]

Imprisoned in the stars, the Father of Monsters awakes