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CommanderApplejack


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"Sweetie, Are ya okay? Ah took a medical kit if ya need help?" Apple Bloom said as Sweetie kept totally still, the pair in front of her making no move to enter the small cave.

"Please do not harm this unit." The voice was distorted, damage to the vocal box giving a metallic tang to the request. Both Bloom and subject 2 jumped back from the entrance, their eyes wide at the distorted voice.

"S-Sweetie?" Apple Bloom stammered, reaching for the shotgun strapped to her barrel. Sweetie pressed herself a little deeper into her hiding place.

>Updating survival odds: 37%

"Please do not harm this unit." Sweetie tried again, various subsystems starting to simulate the most optimal way to fight in her current state.

"H-Hey Sweetie, t-that's you, right?" subject two asked, sounding even more terrified than Apple Bloom.

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A small Sweetie Bot story I had in the back of my mind and have occasionally dotted down things for for the last 9 months. Hopefully a fun read!

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Now with physical book print!
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1037123/data-lost-physical-print

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 170 )

Decent Sweetie Bot story so far. No noteworthy narrative or spelling/grammar issues that I can see.

This is based on the events of the first Destabilize animation, right?

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:pinkiecrazy: no clue what that is, it's pretty much all based on the fic image and the prompt that popped into my mind from it.

Oh god I like this story

Continue please !
We all love a good Sweetie Bot story, and this has a packed beginning.

you have my curiosoty, but i shall wait for more chapters lol

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DFMJMSUgA4c&ab_channel=PrinceWhateverer this video is the second of 3 videos based on sweetie bot
note that it shares the image of your story

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Wow, that is an incredible coincidence xD

Another sweetie bot fic! Looks great so far!

really good start, hope to see more soon!

we don't really get that many sweetie bot stories ironically... you would think that would be REALLY popular but not really.. don't know why!

we have A heartswarming Tale ( 10/10 Story) and then some short stories and some unfinished stuff but that's about it....

so really happy to see more Sweetie Bot love!

Well, this should be interesting. Looking forward to seeing where it leads.

Well damn, you got my attention there! Nicely written too!

I like it so far! I would how Apple Bloom and Scootaloo will help Sweetie bot?

Love Sweetie Bot stories. Looking good so far!

Really engaging hook right off the bat here.

Ah, I like me a good amnesia story.
I like a Sweetiebot story even more.
Good stuff.

major system damage detected on subject sweetie bot running diagnostics
eyes: left sensor lost! Right sensor damaged
...
Major damage in all sectors
Requiring Immediate Recovery

Honestly, what the hell was Sweetiebot fighting, the damn Covenant? On the other hand, I guess Equestria is a pretty violent country, just look at all the villains the Mane 6 have to fight.

Now, I rate this story a LASO run, very well made, and pretty believable, really like how it turned out, can’t wait to read the rest.

If this story is finished, what will be the upload schedule?

Neeeeeeedddd moooooooorrrrreeeeee... Please?

"Okay, so lets build a robot."

"Sure that sounds like a good idea."

"Yes yes, and lets make it look like one of the fillies that live in ponyville."

"Uhh thats kind of-"

"and then, we will replace them, and add a bunch of canons on it."

"Sir-"

"And I ain't talking pussy shit, like plasma stuff, that melts faces all cool like."

"But-"

"And- and then we will add rocket boosters, so it go vroom, and swoosh, and go pew pew pew."

"Are you sur-"

"And and then, we will have it use those weapons if its discovered, hide the evidence and shit!"

"How will we- even afford that!"

"Pffft- The tax payers obviously. Its not our money! We can do whatever we want with it!"

"I don't think-"

"You're right this is a great idea, i'll send it to the board right away, put it under foal protection technology or something. Thanks for the input!"

"oh-."

"Man, this country is so great y'know. Celestia Bless Equestria."

"ya... sure..."

I already like how this looks so far, curious how everything will turn out :twilightsmile:

Author's Note:

I think this is logical, after all, the image is quite popular (in my opinion), the story of the sweetie bot and a tempting description. In the first chapter it was said that all the chapters are ready and this removes the unknown factor

Well this is certainly developing In interesting ways. I am frightfully curious as to what Apple Bloom was doing with that shotgun (and I suspect Applejack is as well).

"Seriously?" Scootaloo deadpanned. "Yeah, let's go to Rarity and tell her we need her help fixing her little sister, who by the way is a metal pony, that we need quartz to fix her because she blew herself up!"

:duck: "Oh dear, again? For Celestia's sake, I keep telling her to back up her hard drive every week, but does she listen to me? Sudo commands are so terribly rude, after all. Ah well, this is why we keep plenty of titanium-white synthfur in stock, isn't it, Sweetie?"

Okay, she may not react that well, but hopefully resource acquisition goes fairly smoothly. And Sweetie won't resort to sourcing carbon and iron by eating the treehouse.

Haha Scootaloo's reaction is so funny :rainbowlaugh:

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:rainbowlaugh: :twilightsmile: :raritywink:

Ha!I think that it is funny how many of you ponies out there are going so apes**t over a robot filly!

BTW, Sweetie Bot is MY new waifu!!!! Hahaha! :rainbowkiss:

Apple Bloom swallowed nervously as she walked over to the shotgun and slung it around herself, leaning over to Scootaloo after. "Ah think yer going ta have ta get them materials without me."

Okay, I know it was mentioned in the last chapter... but really?
A shotgun!? An actual, gunpowder propelled metal shooting shotgun?
I thought it was the robot misidentifying some other random object.
I don`t have a problem with guns in the universe, but why did Aplebloom have a shotgun with her? She`s like, 11 or something.

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I added a sentence next chapter to elaborate.

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Farm mare. there's ***always*** a few shotguns on a farm.

You didn't think your hit top of the recommend when the entire fandom loves Sweetie Bot?

Comment posted by RandomCommentor deleted Sep 12th, 2023

beep boop, beep bot

Oh look a chapter two

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Why do you think Applejack clearly had such a problem with her walking around with it without permission? :trixieshiftright:

Sweetie belle is a SYNTH!

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Because Apple Bloom is a Cutie Mark Crusader. Doing incredibly stupid and dangerous things is in the job description.

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Am I the only one who read this and was reminded of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HjR-L7ZlfYo ?

Agree if we go with the Sweetie bot canon Rarity is well aware he sister is a robot. Though I think she'd be really upset, she still loves Sweetie and she almost got blown up! For a sentient robot the hard drive is basically... well them every thing else can be replaced, but the hard disk is effectively irreplaceable, new hard disk it's a different person. Exploding would have effectively killed Sweetie.

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Well if it’s the Witchcraft universe, then she probably took it from Applejack’s old war stuff :applejackconfused:

Let's see how the material procurement goes!

Data lost still seems to be at hte top of the list lol :)

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Who made her tho?

Rarity? She's a craftsmare and Sweetie isn't her daughter who lives with her.

Either that or aliens, and she's a surveillance unit.

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I have read a fic where Rarity actually WAS a scientist and built her little sister.

Edit: took me some looking through my favs but i found it. Minuette's Lesson - Fimfiction

We starved for content my guy, and your content is like pork neck smoked for 9 hours

Spanish and German paratroopers are absolutely insane, just downing Jagermeister left right and center.

Yeah, that sounds like paratroopers, all right. Doesn't matter what country they're from.

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