Twilight has taken notice that Pinkie Pie has an extremely unusual set of abilities, and Twilight is determined to find out the source of Pinkie's Power. However, she might not like what she finds
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Something Something Surreal Valued Set Theoretic Eldritch Gods are Subset of Pinkie Set...
I discovered this wonderful proof but unfortunately this universe is too small to contain it.
Pinkie pie being a eldtric god just makes to much sense
Knew it!
So this was a pretty good story, you did a good job with balancing horror and comedy, which is no easy feat. Unfortunately, there were issues with punctuation that ended up weighing down this story quite a bit. Iβd say give it another proofreading or two and youβll be golden.
Love it. Reminds me of the story of her being one of the four apocalyptic horses.
Is there something wrong with me that I find myself less amused than I should have been at this revelation?
I wonder how many times have she been doing this to Celestia or Luna? Wait, did she conjure her supposed family members too? Or are they just her minions playing roles?
I always figured that Pinkie was a shard of something\one that to the Eldritch are to them as we are to the Eldritch
In this episode we learn that Twilight doesn't trust her friends if they aren't ponies.
I suspect that twilight could become like pinkie if she tried
I'll be honest, when Pinkie said she was an 'Edlridge' god I was hoping for a bit with Twilight correcting her with 'Eldritch' and Pinkie correcting her back to Eldridge stating either it's a holding company or a small nursing home and going on about how she's not big enough to be eldritch yet but even a small god is still a rather big thing.
I love it.
Eldritch Pinkie Pie stories really need to be picked up on a bit more.
This story reminded me of a prompt I was too lazy to write myself:
"Pinky makes a Pinky promise to never miss her friend's birthdays"
Basically, a twist on "Twilight won't outlive her friends" with the loophole that it doesn't have to be ALL her friends.
Unfortunately I never got to it, on top of the fact my brain couldn't stop it from morphing into a shipfic between two immortals of order and cupcakes.
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Probably minions. It'd be a nicer concept I like to think.
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Maybe they're her cultists?
The mlp show did pinkie so dirty lol I would have loved to see pinkie become the alicorn of chaos and wreck absolute havoc like in the comics imao
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I swear this is an scp lol
That's good thumbnail art.
It's good to also see another one of these stories.
Bouncing between first and third person perspectives make this incredibly difficult to read.
Not to mention how some places seem to need quotations but don't, swapping between speakers in the same paragraph...
Just... Get yo'self an editor, please.
~Skeeter The Lurker
the title and description gave me flashbacks to when I read this story back in 2013, Pinkie Pie Is An Eldritch Abomination
Fun, albeit uninspired concept with absolutely atrocious writing.
This needs some serious editing.
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touched up
Oh my god this is so amazing and realistic
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Thank you very much
I love the cover art! Who's it by?
I love stories where Pinkie is some sort of 9th dimensional being. She is The Great Pink One! Even Asasathoth, Cthulhu, Nyarlethotep and Shub'nigurath are confused by her.
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For what it's worth, Azathoth canonically isn't sentient enough to be confused by things. The problem is that all of existence is his dream, and by extension what will happen if he ever awakens.
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Looks like AI if I had to guess.
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You know, usually the multiple legs would tip me off, but in this case...
Ok, this story goes straight into the Church of Pinkie Pie Group, no question asked, nor accepted, Great Job!
veeeery interesting!
Ah, elder god which might be too polite to ignore the banana peel you dropped to thwarth its plans. I like this a lot.
I'd love to see more of this please make more
Definitely gonig to have nightmares over this one.
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Sure, if I think of any other good pinky prompts
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Always happy to help :)
That was a fun story, Iβm looking forward to seeing if any more elder pinks happening. Also awesome cover pic for the story!
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I really love the genre of Lovecraftian horror, House of Leaves is one of my favorite books. I feel like it's difficult to write though. I'll try to think of new prompts for it though.
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Lovecraftian horror is fun stuff especially when it melds well with other IPs.
H.R. Giger did some biomechanical/Lovecraftian stuff too. That could be something pinks does to "help" her friends obtain immortality.
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Pinkie in the icescream.
Shes coming out of the Walls.
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I freaking love the cover art!! There's still some irregular capitalization & missing quotation marks, & "silly Billy" should be "silly filly," but otherwise, awesome story.
pinkie the eldritch party god