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"Why does Celestia raise the sun? How can she move something so huge every single day?" Two simple, innocent questions. Yet the answer may be too much for Anon's mortal mind. A truth so great it could crush his very grip on reality.
Or maybe it doesn't even matter.
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I dig this a lot.
Good work, author.
Butt, what about the butt?
Seriously though this is a really nice story. Celestia is holding back her power. She is just a big pony goddess that wants to have friends.
This makes me think back to an old picture on DeviantArt of Celestia's reaction to that article the Cutie Mark Crusaders did about her in Ponyville Confidential.
"But... that was my birthday cake. And I am just like everypony else..."
Well done, Blobskin. The Princesses need more love.
Now this needs a sequel of Anon x Celestia, I think He'd be the only mortal who'd get her, you know with her showing him everything and all.
Lmao what are the odds of you publishing a story like this today. Just yesterday I published a picture on my FA account of Celestia doing pretty much the same thing described in this story. Though, she's a bit more obvious about height of her power and enjoying it a lot more.
About the story though, you did a great job showing the reaction of Anon and how he was struggling to comprehend the limits of Celestia's power. Meanwhile Celestia was characterized as goodhearted but scared. And that's something I feel like isn't touched upon a lot in these types of stories. Despite how powerful Celestia and Luna are, they both still go out of their way to be immensely kind and caring to others
Only thing I want to point out is “My sister and I” in two spots, I feel like Celestia would use that instead of “me and my sister”.
Great concept, enjoyed reading immensely.
In a way, this might explain some of Celestia's failings. A god, even one that desperately wants to be one of us, simply cannot understand every aspect of being a mere mortal. We have motivations that they cannot fully experience.
Nice work, Blobskin.
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This was a very interesting take on the Alicorn sisters. I liked it a lot.
I think my favorite part of the story is how it recontextualizes the cover art. At first, it seems like a metaphorical picture representing the sisters being more powerful than and outside of morals as gods, but nope, it is a LITERAL depiction of what Celestia would look like.