My Sister-In-Law, Luna

Life has been pretty terrific since you married the retired Celestia. You've done your best to be the kind of husband that she deserves, but one day, she mentions that you don't really get along with Luna all that well. As such, you decide to rectify that, ready to form a close relationship with your new sister-in-law.

Unfortunately, Luna seems intent on making that difficult for you.

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NaviNautical

NaviNautical #1 · Aug 5th, 2023 · 7 · ·

Man I was ready to go to war for Anon! I was actually a little upset because this was so OOC of Luna, I thought that Runic, you had a grudge or something against her for some reason! Good to see that Anon is now going to be the little shit-head he’s always wanted to be!

Another good read Runic, 10/10!

joElecTeen

joElecTeen #2 · Aug 5th, 2023 · · ·

"Says the mare that had to wake up before the sunrise every day for the last few thousands of years. Literally, 'cause, you know. The sun wouldn't rise until you moved it."

joElecTeen

joElecTeen #3 · Aug 5th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Well something like this gonna happen, when marrying an alicorn's sister and how it's gonna go. Just wandering how the others would take it in strive. The possibilities are endless.

Froxy

Froxy #4 · Aug 6th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Loved this! The way you built up to the twist and the twist itself was fantastic, and how you arranged the plot added an engaging effect. The 'tight embrace' part was a little cheesy for me. But, all and all, an enjoyable read that sparked emotions. Thanks for sharing, RunicTreetops!

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