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Go read Conversation with a Lunar Prisoner, by Steady Gaze | Moondancer is best pony! | Bio updates daily!

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Applejack loses her ponytail and nopony recognizes her after.

Thanks to PseudoBob Delightus for proofreading.

Thanks to Forcalor for pre-reading.

Now with a reading done by Rainbow Infinity Readings.

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Great stuff! Thanks for bringing this idea to life!

Made me think of this video :ajsmug:

Sounds like AJ is the real villian here.

So... where’s Applejack and Rainbow dash? Also, missing Spike’s special appearance in the story, it would have been nice to hear a sarcastic comment from the

PS: Nobody really saw where Applejack and Rainbow dash were since morning?

Hilarious crack fic, good job!

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Me too! So it was a good thing I decided to check the comments first before I posted the exact same video myself!


...aw heck, I'm going to do it anyway, just so the video's embedded for easier viewing. :derpytongue2:

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Also if you ever do a sequel to this one, it also reminded me of this video.

“That’s funny. You look just like my friend Applejack. Oh, Applejack! You just missed her, there was this mare that looked just like you.”

It may be a profound ponytail, but it seems nopony’s a pro at finding the ponytail.

This's dumb.

I absolutely love it. :rainbowkiss:

In some (silly :twilightblush:) ways this feel like the (far :trollestia:) shorter, comical and (with a concrete :fluttercry:) happy ending version of Background Pony.

Crazy to think that is all it takes for ponies to not recognize AJ or RD. But, this was a fun story never the less, thanks!

This gave me one too many MLB (blind Adrien skits) vibes. :rainbowlaugh:

aaaah, that ending was adorable.

"Applejack has a blonde ponytail. You clearly don't."

The Princess of Friendship doesn’t recognise her friend with a haircut.

"Let's say you are Applejack, don't you think I'd recognize you without your ponytail?"

... Yeah... of course you would.

"Goodbye, Applejack impersonator."

Sounds a little harsh from Fluttershy’s side.

"Are you sure? You look a lot more like her twin sister I just met."

You mean like, right now, or did she meet somepony else looking like her twin sister?

She stepped forward and gave Rainbow a hug.

Awkward out-of-place hugging.

Applejack smiled. "You should wear your hair like that more often, it's kinda hot."

WHAT.

But I honestly draw Rainbow with her hair spiked from the neck.

Applejack smiled. "Apple Bloom needs a new haircut, don't you think?"

Revenge is a dish best served hot, I guess, since AppleDash is one of the most likely to diverge into a sex scene.


Funny, I guess. You started following me, so I’d hate to offend you, but this was one of your weaker stories.

It was a crackfic, yes, but all of Ponyville and Applejack’s best friends for years now didn’t recognise her with a haircut, absolutely no magic involved, just everypony being stupid.

"Oh, hello, non-AJ," Applejack now tapes or just holds her ponytail against her head, "Oh, hi, Applejack!" she removes her ponytail, "Oh, hello, non-AJ" without any hint of confusion as to where 'Applejack' went. Ta-da, the whole story, repetitive.

Now enter Rainbow Dash, she recognises her, cue the romance, it could have been better for the random romance if Applejack’s hair gets cut, everypony laughs at her, except Rainbow Dash, who thinks it’s "hot."

TL;DR, problems are more with the writing, which came from the prompt, than the pacing or grammar. This gets a PRETTY BAD.

Greetings. Your reading has been completed and can be found below. I hope you enjoy.

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