Fluttershy and Rarity think about each other in ways they only tell their diaries, until one day.
Cover done by Tiki Bat: FIMFiction, Twitter.
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Fluttershy and Rarity think about each other in ways they only tell their diaries, until one day.
Cover done by Tiki Bat: FIMFiction, Twitter.
Entry into A Thousand Words Contest II.
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Short, sweet and cute. Loved this story!
Very sweet.
I really liked this one a lot, would love to see a sequel sometime! Keep up the great work!
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Thank you!
Sequel is planned!
extremely relatable
that is, indeed, a lot of hugs!
ehehe
aww poor Fluttershy being too shy
i mean if Twilight of all ponies is noticing this, it must be very obvious!
hugs do seem to feature quite prominently in this pony courtship
aww, glad it worked out for her! RariShy is such an adorable ship, and the world could always use more of it. thank you for writing!
When Twilight has to tell Rarity that there may be romance afoot, I feel like something’s gone awry with the characterization.
An epistolary story is a good way to compress the word count, and I really like the “D” theme in the minichapters, but this still felt less like a romance and more like a parasite hijacked Fluttershy and wants to spread to fashionistas. It’s the sudden swerve that really kills it for me. If this had been slowly building since before the story began and Fluttershy could only now admit even it to her own diary, it would’ve felt a lot more organic. (And again, Twilight “Social Awareness of a Bucket of Paint” Sparkle should not have to tell Rarity that somepony is in love with her.)
In all, a noble effort, but the “I suddenly have deeper feelings for this lifelong friend” approach to shipping never rings true for me. Still, thank you for the entry.
This is really short and sweet. I think Rarity didn't realise Fluttershy liked her bc she subconsciously didn't think she'd have a chance. They are honestly such a perfect pairing. I'll keep an eye out to see what you do in the future
To me diaries have always felt even more personal than seeing a characters own thoughts in a story, so seeing a story told entirely through diary entries is very interesting! Other than grammar/sentence structure being a little iffy in places, I really loved this story! Looking forward to getting to the sequel!