Shower Coffee

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Twilight drinks coffee in the shower, everypony else is appalled. It has to be horrible! Right?

Thanks to 6-D Pegasus for proofreading.

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ItsVelvet

ItsVelvet #1 · Aug 27th, 2023 · 6 · ·

I says, it has an interesting structure. It's so orderly and "polite" and it pays off as some sort of "humor" where Twilight addresses everypony individually. It was refreshing and a bit warm to read.

Mockingbirb

Mockingbirb #2 · Aug 28th, 2023 · 2 · ·

Honestly, always exactly one sentence per paragraph for a whole 1000 word story kind of...

Wishesshecouldwritegood

Wishesshecouldwritegood #3 · Aug 28th, 2023 · 4 · ·

Shower coffee? I think I can say now I’ve heard of everything.

Themaskedferret

Themaskedferret #4 · Aug 28th, 2023 · 3 · ·

Hahaha, very inventive. n_n

eiggengrau

eiggengrau #5 · Aug 29th, 2023 · 7 · ·

Twilight: you are a dork, you are a genius, i love you, you have changed my life today.

Gyro Pony

Gyro Pony #6 · Sep 8th, 2023 · 6 · ·

Trixie is much more refined. She has Shower Tea.

eiggengrau

eiggengrau #7 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 3 · ·

Now, where is Applejack? I need to help her on the farm…

I love this story, typos and all, but ever since i first read it, i have been trying to figured this one out. Why does shower coffee make Rarity need to help on the farm? What am i missing? Just from the energy boost?

I love telling other ponies about this story IRL, because then i can see the expression on their face.
"Shower coffee?"
And i'm like, "that's exactly how Twilight's friends react!"

Silk Rose