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Spike is searching for the perfect ring, with the intention of finally popping the question to his long time girlfriend. Thank goodness Trixie knows of a place that carries totally not cursed rings worthy of a pony like Rarity.


Rated T, for minor language and sexual references (nothing explicit.)

This was a commission for a patron and is a patreon supported story and will update monthly alongside the other stories.

Check out its sister story over here if you want something more serious.

Now with several readings done by Straight toThePointStudio Chapter 1 Chapter 2 part 1 and part 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 and Part Two (Coming soon)

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 39 )

Why a sequel when this story is in progress?

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Did you look at the sequel? Because if you did you will know its a collection of side stories requested by the commissioner. Not a direct sequel.

Spike waited for his partner to sit before spitting into his hoof, and running it over the dragon’s scalp, smoothing out her head fins. “There we go, perfect,” he exclaimed before trotting out the room.

Leaving Rarity to sit on the floor, her right eye twitching madly. “That is the last time I ask for help from him,” she muttered.

Speaking of boned, how awkward will it be for them to do you-knows-what?

this chapter has few mistakes like one time they say "Sweetie Belle" instead of Sweetie Drops, also noticed another i dont remember.
Still so, loving this fic so far!

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Gave it another look over and it seems better now. Thanks!

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It'd be interesting to see a side story portraying that xD

2 things:
1. Since how long has Inky Rose and Applejack been rolling in the hay in for several months?
2. That dragon who was snorting smoke on Ponyville was a lady?!?!!

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They were together for a bit but broke up because Inky didnt think Applejack was taking as much of an interest in her as she should.

Yes.

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He had such a masculine voice...

Spik cleared his throat and adopted his best Rarity voice.

Liking what I'm reading, just can't help myself from trying to help spell correct, and looks like you missed an 'e' there.

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Fixed, thank you!

I can't wait for more :raritystarry:

Loved it as always keep it up ^^

Still loving the story ^^ but why did the colt call security? lol

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Next chapter all will be explained. Though if a girl had a black eye and was weirdly defencive of their partner you would think that something happened, right?

Why did Straight toThePointStudio decide to split the chapter readings?

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I have no idea. I am unaffiliated with them.

With so many puns in just one visit clearly explain why not many people want to go to the government office.

:moustache::raritywink: Air Plane .... Revisited "Don't Call Me Shirly"
:trollestia: Surely you jest
:facehoof: I'm not inflating Auto Pilot
:pinkiehappy: Me me me me I love balloons

Trixie grinned. “That old codger didn't even notice me swiping it out from under his nose. Not exactly difficult given how high in the air he holds that thing.”

Okay, I have to applaud Trixie here for having a skill fit for being a magician. However, I do hope she had plan on how to return it safely afterward.

:trixieshiftright: Mission Imposable
:moustache: I'm you :raritywink:
:duck: You're me :moustache:
:facehoof: I'm disgusted
:trollestia: I'm cake

Spike was about to give up his quest when he saw something so perfect that his eyes lit up and his mouth began to water.

So you choose your engagement ring based on your appetite?

Comment posted by AdmiralTigerclaw deleted Mar 17th, 2022

Pinkie Pie cleared her throat. “Those covered by this plan will be able to claim up to ninety percent of the cost of their wedding should it fall under any of these three parameters. One, they find out their partner is actually queen Chrysalis herself.”

Never thought there would be insurance policy this specific.

“That's just one of Pinkie Pie’s classifications,” Twilight dismissed. “And also not the point.”

I had a feeling that was some point in there.

“Oh yeah, hundreds,” Pinkie Pie declared, waving her sandwich around like she was showing off her many file cabinets full of party ideas. “I’m ready for anything. Even a good majority of the XK class end of the world scenarios.”

Love the scp Easter egg

Hmmm... My homophobia senses are tingling.... That or the Mexican i just ate...

“This is my wedding!” Rarity bellowed.

Somehow I didn't feel that much surprised at this outcome.

:moustache: My mane!
:duck: No not that shampoo again?
:facehoof: Yes that shampoo
:rainbowderp: Now what?

:duck: Rarity?
:moustache: Spike?
:facehoof: We're all going to hang...
:pinkiehappy: On a Pink Rope!

This is heartwarming and delightful. Yay for swapping!

:trollestia: I'm such a sneaky shit
:twilightoops:

Can't wait tell I have enough money to move this story forward

Cadance: Why everypony try to steal my job?
Celestia: Not my fault you slept on your job.
Luna: We believe the new term is "You snooze, you lose.".

What a great chapter!

I didn’t expect the Stag/Doe Party to be presented in hindsight but this approach worked very well. Plus the unexpected twist at the end.

Well done!

Lol credit cards in Equestria.

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