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Spike has helped in looking after Flurry Heart before, but never by himself. But, when all others become unavailable, he finds himself alone with that responsibility, and so does his best to look after the little Princess.

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Not bad. This was cute. :rainbowkiss:

9186138 Season 8 is almost over. I think you meant season 9.

Do you have to end it here like this? There's so much more they could do.

My new favorite story!

*dies from cuteness overload*

Cute little slice-of-life between two cute characters. Just fantastic!

9186322 You're welcome. :pinkiesmile:

Really kind and adorable story, a bit short but anyway too cute. Keep doing a great job! :twilightsmile:

dawww what a sweet little story. I loved it. :pinkiehappy:

An adorable scene between Spike and Flurry. It makes me feel like this could have been part of a larger episode in the show where we see Spike caring for Flurry while Twilight, Shining, and Cadence are off taking care of something really important.

Nice moment with the 'talking bear' and the flying. Cute and fun.

9186136
I have diabetes and that just might have been fatal for me... :derpytongue2:

The cutest story I've read in a very long time looking forward to hopefully more Spike stories from you!

I wasn't prepared to roll "feels" on my "This will end in _____" wheel today.

I love Spike and Flurry as cousins!

*dies from cuteness overload*

Adorable factor has broken the scale

(RL persona dies from cuteness with a big grin on face)
OC: "Great, just great, and I already owe Philomena for the feathers used thus far. Oh well" (drops a phoenix feather on RL persona)
"IT'S SO SWEET!":pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

This...honestly felt like a chapter in a slightly longer tale, all that really happens is the bear scene, then Spike just kind of, says what else happened. I think the issue was a complete lack of conflict.

Now I don’t mean conflict in danger or fighting, but more, potentials never happened. Even as simple as actually having to change one of Fluury’s diapers, feed her a bottle, of put her down for a nap could result in conflict.

I saw no issues grammar or spelling wise, but I’d say just maybe add to the stories you write in the future.

I know I’m not one well off to judge, being my own writing is crap, but a conflict is what is usually the hook of the story.

A cute little snippet of the relationship between these two. It was sweet. Thanks for sharing. :twilightsmile:

Ah, my heart! I'm getting Adorabetes from all the cute sweetness! :pinkiehappy:

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