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*sees new update*
*GASP!!!*
*Reads*
0/////0 almost finished
Ending: NOOOOOO CLIFF HANGER!!!
Awesome chapter. I shall wait patiently for the next.
3495318 come on, you should know by now I love using good cliff hangers. It's fun to torment you ponies like Luna would. :P
Steelhoof? hmm haven't seen him in a while.
Love this chapter how hard was it for lights drunken words?
It never fails. Every time I get an urge to read some of this story again, a new chapter comes out the very same day. I'm not even kidding about this.
Good chapter. Keep it up!
Curses, thwarted once again by...painting?
I...can't honestly say I'm disappointed.
Luna strikes again!
Good chapter! I really like your story, and I think this is one of the very few where I'm constantly rooting for the main character to hook up with new females XD. Usually that's a terrible plot device, but you haven't abused it in any way shape or form and when you have used it, it always let to some sort of character growth (or at the very least some good *ahem* reading pleasure). Dazzle seems like a sweet mare... too bad about Sandy.
Typo spotted:
I'm pretty sure that's suppose to be 'Sandy'?
Anyways, awesome chapter as usual
Featured... AGAIN
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(after reading the cliff hanger)You asshole! You damn sadistic magnificent bastard! Damn you and all your epic badassery!
On a side note; I may not be a meteorologist but I'm pretty sure , for Star, it's rainin' bitches!
Glad to see this updated, fucking love this story.
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Indigo, I will always love your use of accents in this story. It gives it a great feel and keep it up! Hope to see more updates soon!
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The only reason I'm not worried right now is that I doubt Steelhoof would just march in and cause harm to Star.
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Derp. Yeah, mares on the brain, I'll fix that.
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Fairo also, I see myself getting no sleep about to start chapter 14
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"Fairo"?
But, if you're not getting sleep, that means you're enjoying the story, which makes me happy. Alas, if only those two recent thumbs-down would tell me why they did not. Anyhoof, I watch the comments, so if you have any comments or questions, feel free to.
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fair enough
So far you have kept me interested so expect a thumbs up and a fav in the near future.
I expect to be commenting more when I get up to date.
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Shouldn't take you too long, it's only Two-Hundred and Twenty-eight Thousand words...*cough*
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There is no rest for the wickid so therefor I shall keep reading until I physically cannot stay awake
Impatient.
Think you accidentally a word, bro.
Another awesome chapter. I wish I had something more to say about how awesome this story is, but I've said it all. One of my all-time faves, and it just keeps getting better.
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If you think it's fun now, just remember that Steelhoof always leads to crazy times.
I'll fix those errors.
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Hmm, I'll add him to my list:
Characters Jake Wants to Punch In The Ding-Ding
1. Max Cash
2. General Esteem
3. Prime Enforcer Shell
4. Rainbow Dash*
5. Steelhoof
*denotes characters who lack a ding-ding, and thus will be punched in the hoo-ha.
When the mob boss / information broker comes to you claiming that "We" have a problem, you know that the fan is buried in shit.
On some other notes, it would appear that Luna may have sliiiiiiightly mislead starstep with sandy.
I am quite curious to learn more of this entity is lurking about in the bowels of the city, I have a feeling that it is in some way connected to Luna.
Also, will we be eating griffon for thanksgiving dinner?
Nice chapter. I think Dazzle is adorable and having StarStep comfort her was cute. I agree with some of the other comments that this story actually manages to keep you rooting for the main character to just bang bitches right and left, somehow without detracting from the deep romance he has with Luna. Lighthoof's drunken slurs were epic and just barely understandable to those who have read about said incidents. Dazzle's lacking understanding just made it even funnier.
Caught up on the last two chapters! WOOT!
Hopefully there isn't too much of a problem.
Great chapter! Bad cliffhanger... making me wait for more... sigh... lol
3497143 I'm gonna do my best to get the next one out before S4. I suspect S4 is going to toss my head-cannon out the window so I need to get it in print before that.
3497197 New seasons do that, although I have wondered... Is Twilight alicorn in this fic? Not that it matters, I like both unicorn and alicorn Twilight. It just seems like time has passed beyond the point. Meh doesnt matter. Keep up the good work and don't rush it!
Ugh... CURSE YOUR CLIFFHANGERS INDIGO ECLIPSE! Anyhow I really enjoyed this chapter and I eagerly await the next great chapter.
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When I started this fic, it was during S2 and Twili-corn was not a thing. So, when S3 finale rolled around and changed our adorkable purple pony, my story was not prepared and has thus been shifted into slight-alternate universe territory. I have nothing against Twili-corn, it's just my story wasn't written with it in mind. I might add it later, but for now, consider this story on an alt-timeline.
3497246 Ahh, no problem there though. Alt timelines just means free reign, to an extent but more so than usual lol
Oh sheeeeeit
Absolutely beautiful. I was hoping for more intimate stuff with Sandy .
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Haha, that was too predictable. I wanted to mess with y'alls heads a little. Not all things in this story are quite what they seem.
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Yay. Now to wait for the next chapter... And there's no more school to distract me as I now have holidays until February.
Words can't explain how excited I was to see this updated! I have read this story up to this point 3 times waiting. Thanks you make my night less boring and more fun. Send in another chapter soon... It would be wonderful to read more of this enchanting and malevolent story.
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Although i certainly do enjoy your clop scenes... i was kinda hoping it would turn out like that. Honestly after something like that, i would rather just cuddling
3497644 This story is many things. The writer has done an excellent job to capture the emotions of certain scenes, when he said that he felt something was watching him from the shadows, my heart started racing. I read a lot, at least a hundred hours each year, and not once, while reading has something in the story made my heart race. This story is.. just... There isn't a word for it.
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That. I did not see that coming, not at all, so now I wait for the next chapter hoping it will be in a day or two like your earlier ones were.
I finally read upto date within 29 hours which is a fair effort on my part also meaning I am in love with this fic
Wait
Shit just got 1000 times more serious.
"We have a problem" Why do I get the feeling that something has gotten into the castle and made a number on some gryphons?
Keep up the good work.
Rating /
Dunno
Imagine
Ideal
Domination or being dominated
Sorry I can't post the entire sentence, my phone is a piece of crap. Just use F3 and you'll find them.
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Same here.
Sandy invites Starstep upstairs... "WOOHOO clop scene!"
To paint. "...awww"
Dazzle embraces Starstep..."Woohoo rebound clop!"
and they cuddle. "...awww!"
While I love the mystery of the fear monster, I also hope its not just a red herring and we actually do see some resolution with that.
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Aww, come on, give the poor colt a break. He just had the shit scared out of him earlier that day. Patience, he'll get his. He really just needed a good cuddle.
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It's not a red herring, it is SO not. Long story short, it plays a part in tying up another thread and creating new ones.
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A good rutting cures all ailments!
Luna Damn it!!!! I have read this from begining to end today and I get to the end of this and BAM wait for update.... Great story and hope updates are quick. This is amazing.
Here I was thinking that sandy wanted Star to repay the favor by having sexy times with her, and all she wanted to do was paint him? Why am I such a clopper?
Brilliant chapter as always, only down side, that fucking cliffhanger... Yeah, fuck you. But regardless, you never seem to disapoint.
That thing in the dark is still creepin' me the fuck out. Also, after that little bit at the end there with Dazzle, I am kinda expecting her to be a big part of the story from now on. Is there the possiblility of her hooking up with Lighthoof or Star? Or will she get brutaly friendzoned by both of them?
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Star thought that too, what with all the things Luna told him about 'her' being into submissive play. If it wasn't Sandy she was talking about, who was it? Also, Luna is best troll.
You took one Steelhoof cliffhanger to the face, roll for Constitution check.
Hope you're not too afraid of the thing that lurks in the dark...it's about to get cranked up to 11.
Dazzle...nothing I can say here without being spoilery. Just remember to read her voice in a standard British accent.