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Nooooo!!! Sweetie Bell!!!!!!!!
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These princesses, man. They're both trolls.
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARSON!I SAY ARSON AND 'hopefuly' ATTEMPTED MURDER
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Cadance isn't. She's just...clueless. I think troll abilities happen to alicorns as they age.
<--- what the ending made me do
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uh-huh. And the rest?
1014253 the rest of the chapter was more like
Really? NO Sweetie Belle!
Ok ok I've calmed down I'm sure she's fine, I hope.
Anyway this was another good chapter and it's nice to see that Celestia is still number one troll around here
Pretty much I identified most with Shining Armor during that whole awkward exchange since I would have reacted pretty much the same way as he did.
Now I have to wait and see if my worst nightmare will come to pass or not.
wait wait wait wait...does that mean...Celestia..has VISITS from shining armor and cadence the same way..star and scoots..oh my .
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So, that aside. Any change of opinion of how Scootaloo feels about Luna? Or still sticking with the theory she's just doing it for Star?
And yes, Trollestia is very alive and well.
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Well...Shining is sworn to serve her.
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I'm not sure it's still too early for me to make a decision, I'm mean her whole plan to court Luna came after she had a long, seemingly deep meaningful conversation with Luna that we didn't get to see. At the moment Luna and Scootaloo are naturally more affectionate with Star than each (they always kiss him but only nuzzle each other) I just see Scootaloo as having feelings for Star and in order to be with him she's trying to make this situation with Luna work out. Of course Luna also trying to make it work is interesting since Luna really has no reason to try and include Scootaloo she's a bloody princess for Celestia's sake, so the fact that she is also trying to make this triangle work does give merit to the idea that Luna is interested in Scootaloo, and Scootaloo is willing to explore that as well (she gets to be with Star and she gets to maybe fall in love with a princess). It's still too early and I would need to see how those two interact with one another without Star around in order to make a decision.
Of course my biggest concern at this moment is whether Sweetie Belle is ok or not, and whether this fire was an accident or something else.
Did sweetie try to cook again?
with the princess no less they done fucked up
Everypony has been worrying about Sweetie Bell, but what of Dinky? Don't Sweetie, Dinky, and Pip all live in the same house?
1014466 I wonder who came after who then....and uhh, always figured it might be a little awkward for her to be uhh, involved with anyone that's not her own size. But, wait, she doesn't have any signs of rela...wait...isn't Cadence her niece, well I guess not, never really understood how that family tree worked out.. OK I'm thinking way too far into something that was meant for comedy.
Oh and I posted that comment before I read the rest of the chapter. A part me kinda hopes shes dead. Not that I have anythin' against Sweetie bell, but it would be sooooooo wonderfully tragic, and Stars angst would be just splendid to see. I just sorta like the hardcore emotional pain of losing someone through death - kind of tragic events I guess. On one side you're like noooo shes dead, and on the other side its like, buck yeaaah, awesome character moment to express all kinds of feelings and what not.
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If Cadance is a niece, I believe it's in name only. As far as we know, Celestia's only sister is Luna. And seeing as she was stuck on the moon during Cadance's growing up years, foal-sitting Twilight. That's kinda impossible. So, I'm going to run with 'unoffical' niece. I suspect alicorns are an incredibly, super-rare birth from normal ponies. And because of their race, they become rulers. Hasbro is kinda 'meh' on their background, so I gotta just make shit up. Besides, haven't you seen all the hot Luna/Celestia images? Sister or not, it's very cute to think of the moon and sun making out.
Ah, tragedy. A bitter flavor that heightens sweetness.
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Win.
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Please make a new chapter soon, I won't be able to function thinking about this!
1016401 Eh, incest isn't really my slice of cake. Though, I am glad to see Celestia getting SOME sort of action. Usually it feels almost like the idea of her being involved with anypony, (thats not freakin twilight) seems so taboo among the bronyfiction community. I swear, if I could find a legit fiction like this for her, it would make my day. Heh and here I thought that nuzzle she gave cadence was just an act of innocent affection, how naive of me.
And yeah, I can get behind the whole rare breed thing. I like that explanation a lot more than others.
Well somepony wants the insurance money.....
Hmmm...If given enough time I can put out the fire, why is it black and white now?
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No....unfortunately you couldn't.
Not this fire.
Burn baby burn, Disco inferno!
1017816 But, why is it black and white?
Sweetie Bell's house is on fire. She got involved with the Canterlot Mafia. Just wondering, have you ever played Grand Theft Auto 4 and if so, is your favorite character Roman Bellic?
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San Andres was the last GTA I played. It just started to take itself too seriously. Saints Row 2 was more my speed. Much more humor.
1023431 HAH I know what you're talking about. Can't remember if that ever stopped his annoying ass from botherin' me to go bowling every 15 minutes.
Seriously... Why didn't I see the last part of the chapter coming?
I mean... You've been setting up for it to happen and yet I didn't expect it.
Very anticipating. But the FREAKIN CLIFFHANGER!!! AAAAGGGHHH U KEEPN ME WAITING!
argh! them cliffhangers
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No need to fret. New chapter in a few minutes.
“I'm so happy for you, Luna.” The pink alicorn beamed before she glanced over at her husband. “It's so wonderful to have someone who loves you. Somepony who'd do anything for you.”
Celestia looked at Star, “Would you do anything to Lu-lu?”
The pegasus blinked. He wasn't sure he heard the question correctly but nodded, “Yeah, her and Scoots both.”
So' I'm not sure if this is a typo or not, but I think it may make a little more sense if Celestia asked "Would you do anything for Luna," because saying "to" instead seems to have a bit more of a negative inflection.
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No, it wasn't a typo. The intention was a bit of 'trollestia'. Not sure how else she could have worded it to hint at naughty things without being overly obvious. *shrugs* Sometimes subtle speech accenting a word is lost in text.
“Whatever do you mean, Lu-lu?”
is on a roll...
Minus "On" and add a 'T' to "roll".
Okay. I have only ever watched a few episodes.
The hell is the banana joke? I wanna laugh too...
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It's origin is thus: Bananas
Some find it hilarious, some don't.
Fuck
Really? No pony? Ug FINE I will do it. ts4.mm.bing.net/th?id=I.4599215034139219&pid=15.1&W=160&H=160
SO............MANY.....................SUBLIMINAL..............MESSAGES................THAT...............ARE................HILARIOUS!!!!
MUST........TALK...........LIKE.............SHATNER...........AMONGST...........LAUGHING.............SO.................HARD!!
PS- NO SWEETIE BELLE!!!!
a plate-armor stretcher from the blacksmiths
I see what you did there!
Oh god Sweetie Belle!!! WHYYYYY!!!!!!
noting wrong with burning down a building
Should have saidd that the recruit went to the store to get the elbow grease. that would have made it FREAKING FUNNY (of corse it was funny on its own, and i do see what you did with the elbow grease, but seriously).
I love the bit about the chariot keys (really similar to humvee keys )
Wow.....No one said anything about the red vs. blue refrence....does no one remember the early days with donut and him trying to find elbow grease :(
1014941 ....i laughed more then i should have at that.
them, not the ^^ that happens to me too, skipping a letter because I'm typing too fast....
I feel this sentence is missing something...like 'After' a short walk--' or something....I'm not sure....also after the comma, the pair were...or the pair was?....hm, interesting use of 'present tense' but in this sentence I think 'were' fits better....I dunno. This is less a complaint and more a suggestion X.x ^v^ ...damn I really am in LOVE with this story if I'm becoming so invested in the sheer wording choice.
She Commands, or She can command....but the two s's don't work together ^^
....ooh my, you're really making Celestia look bad here...quite the ...sibling teasing...which follows through with your previous chapters where she didn't tell star it was temporary or her prank.... oh my... oh, hey...CONTINUITY! YAY, I love when writers follow their character personalities ^^ (the main reason I was so upset at a GUARD behaving that way at the griffon party, lul.)
The ending is awesome and has me in it's grips! You write a mean story! I cannot stop reading <3 <3 <3
Ack my legal brain decided to think up another solution to The debt problem that would work if Equestria has it: bankruptcy. Sweetie Belle would be the prime reason for it, she's so far in debt that it'll never get paid and she has basically no assets. If bankruptcy existed Steel would be an idiot with his business model if he wanted to stay above board, beyond the ridiculous interest rates that are penalties but would still qualify for the purposes of loan-sharking laws, he'd basically drive all his debtors to declare bankruptcy and get out of the entire debt. That's why banks usually do forgiveness and other measures in the first place. If they don't they lose money. Ack, back to reading the story and stopping the legal analysis and why I think that guy is an idiot.
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That's of course assuming there are bankruptcy laws. Remember that even the US had debtor's prison not all that long ago. Bankruptcy was the replacement for that old system. I figured that Steel would be willing to work a deal in return for favors in the future, and perhaps he even has those working in law and finances in his debt as well? He's not so much in it for the money as he is the leverage it gives him.
WHAT THE FUCK. I was just about to go to sleep!
Ahhh, here we are again Not gonna sleep tonight, I just know it
That said, I might as well give my input now that I'm halfway through it
Well, so far, it's taken many a' weird turns, not all that I can really say that I like. However, I'm a huge fan of the the 20 Year-old CMC's and their characters, they're jus so endulgin' and lovable, it's ridiculous. I also love the development in Star, goin' from a one-track minded hopeless virgin idiot to a humble, somewhat wise, devoted and strong lad.
Who has sex...like, ALOT.
Reckon that's all I say for now 'cause if I cover everythin', I'll be here for a while and I wanna keep readin'