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Karmas a bitch ain't it
So, the lieutenants are voyeurs, huh? Guess Star has one more thing in common with them.
BWAHAHAHAHAAAAAA! LOVE IT!
Well that was as unexpected as finding a golden coin on the street, only to bite into it realizing it was chocolate, but since you were hungry in the first place it doesn't matter!
...I need new analogies...
Haha, love the last chapter
I swear I'm becoming addicted to this story, as soon as I see an update I have to stop whatever I'm doing and read it.
OH GODDESS! I can't stop laughing! Dat ending man, Dat ending!
Oh man, can't wait to see the reactions of the lieutenants after they get over their shellshocked state. This is freaking hilarious.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
New Chapter! Commence read.
Nice surprise.
Haha! Wonderful. I love this fic.
HA! Yes! Go Star!
Almost got blindsided by the clop, thank you again for warning us ahead of time. It means a lot to me, since I can enjoy the dawww moments without the stuff I'm not quite comfortable with
1822399 5 bits says the reaction is. "Carry on"
hahahahahaha oh god that last part...i can't breath...ah i love this story. the character building. the world everything seems perfect. keep it up
Holy fuck. You are damn good at writing, sir.
I wish all authors characterize the princesses like you. They seem so much more like actual rulers in your story.
I hope I'm as good as you someday.
haha, loved that ending.
Boner is achieved.
always great!
trollestia:
oh my, those are some serious views there, wow, such a thing. lol
I was wondering what the "(*)" was that marked this chapter. I thought I knew, but I was wrong. It's clearly Luna's plot viewed from behind.
Bwahahaha!!!!
1822784
What do you mean?
1822369 I think they came running at her scream, like the good soldiers they are.
1822979
Cookie for you. Remember that Celesta DID warn Starstep that Luna was a screamer. Add in the Royal Canterlock voice and well....yeah.
1823024Woot! Cookie! *noms it*
Forgot about her being a screamer, but I remember now...
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ALL EIGHT FUCKING LIEUTENANTS SAW THE WHOLE THING!
Well, i'm not sure what to say other than good update. For both chapters, as i didn't have time to read the last one that came out, until just a bit ago.
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Ah, i've never heard of those kind before, forgive me. Thanks for clearing that up. I took ionic at face value, for electrically charged particles, instead of doing a little research.
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Well, not the whole thing. They came running when she screamed, swung open the door and oh look, Star has his face buried in her flanks, muzzle covered in her juices, sooooo, yeah. 1+1= Oh my.
Well, I'm mostly interested in what sort of evil bastards are behind the murders and if I get to personally execute some or all of them for Crimes Against Things That Alondro Likes, which is punishable by the Death of a Thousand Chinese Hells.
1823298 Yeah, but still, it was pretty fucking funny.
1823352
Cooper was a really bad pony. Abuse/Slavery/Rape. These raiders are way beyond that to the level of racial cleansing. Killing their own kind for living/working with ponies, tearing out their hearts and cutting off unicorn horns. And it's not just one being this time. So, the stakes have been raised. The fallout will be equally nasty.
1823378 Oh I'm quite aware of that. Have you ever looked into the old stories of Chinese Hell? They were very... creative...
1823489
I've read Dante's inferno, does that count?
1823521 From the Wikipedia article on 'Diyu', the Chinese concept of hell:
Mountain of Knives: Sinners are made to shed blood by climbing a mountain with sharp blades sticking out. Some depictions show offenders climbing trees with knives or sharp thorns sticking out from trunks and branches.
Cauldron torture: Sinners are fried in oil cauldrons. Some depictions show offenders being steamed instead of being fried.
Dismemberment: Sinners' bodies are dismembered by various means, including, but not limited to, the following:
Sawing
Carving
Slicing into half
Mashing or pounding into pulp
Crushed by heavy rocks or boulders
Run over by vehicles
Grinding torture: Sinners are put into a grinding machine and ground into a bloody pulp.
Tortures involving fire:
Burning: Sinners are set aflame or cast into fiery infernos.
Paolao torture: Sinners are stripped naked and made to climb a large metal cylinder with a fire lit at its base.
Boiling liquid torture: Sinners have boiling liquids forced down their throats or poured on parts of their bodies.
Tortures involving removal of body parts or organs:
Tongue-ripping
Eye-gouging
Heart-digging
Disembowelment: Sinners have their internal organs dug out.
Skinning
Slicing off fingers and toes
Ice World: Sinners are frozen in ice. Some depictions show unclothed sinners suffering from frostbite in an icy world. Their bodies eventually fall apart or break into pieces.
Scales and hooks torture: Sinners have hooks pierced into their bodies and are hung upside down. Some depictions show sinners having nails hammered into their bodies (similar to crucifixion).
Pool of Blood: Sinners are cast into a pool of blood. Blood spills from all body orifices.
Tortures involving animals: Sinners are trampled by cattle, gored by animals with horns or tusks, mauled or eaten by predators, stung or bitten by poisonous species etc.
Avīci: The period of suffering in this chamber is the longest and it is reserved for sinners who have committed heinous crimes, including the Five Grave Offences.
(So you can see, it's alot like filling out IRS tax forms.)
Knowing Luna, she's probably going to turn him into a mare, and them rut him herself till neither of them can see straight.
Good ol' Star, getting caught in one of Luna's game (or fantasy?). Now anticipating what will become of this in the next chapter.
This is gonna be good :-)
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Personally, I think I prefer Dante's Inferno. The punishments are designed to be symbolic of the crime, and their very natures ensure that the torment is never ending.
These perpetrators, being violent against people and property, would be immersed in a river of boiling blood and fire. The more serious their crimes the more deeply they must stay in the river, and should they attempt to climb higher they would be pierced by arrows shot by centaurs that patrol the banks.
The ring leader would likely end in the ninth circle reserved for those guilty of treachery and betrayal, where they would be encased in ice upto their heads, "the place where shame can show itself" and be eternally tormented by the souls of those they betrayed.
The tortures may be less graphic, but I believe they are more poignant because they are eternal reminders of the sins committed.
My god yes! More please MORE your doing so good!
she is forcing him to do either Dusty or a griffin.
The ending was hilarious.
the last part was unexpected until the feather sequence.
I must say I... despise those griffins, if that's who they are. It could be some ponies looking to gain from a possible war or it's maybe a joined effort.
also, i would like to know why the female griffins look at him that way? is it respect towards him being with the princess or is it a set up to a mature chapter with a griffin. I don't try to force spoilers out but if there's something that went over my head please tell me
Dat. Fucking. Ending! Dear god, my laughing! It's too much! Thanks for teh lols!
-Stephie
Loving Star's new bold attitude. Things will be much more entertaining now that he is more adept at Luna's games. Of course she'll always be at least one step ahead.
Side note, the conflicts mentioned and what happened to the unicorn survivor makes me yearn for retribution to come. The upcoming conflict(s) will be very interesting to see.
1822892
Well everyone was watching and we don't know for how long.... I imagine light growing a thumb at this point well at least the griffons giving him the thumbs up with mouths agape and stunned awe in their eyes.
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As for the female griffons. Remember that their culture is all about honor, strength and social standing. Females are also a very dominate force in the culture, males often second class to their rule. Where-as in Equestria, everyone is generally equal despite the population imbalance. From the outside looking in, Sasha sees the following: A consort to a very powerful being who clearly has Luna's affections. This will intrigue the more powerful female griffons, causing them to wonder what it is that causes Princess Luna to keep him at her side. Not only that, but a pony that has apparently taken on the meat eating trait of his mistress. It's not physical attraction that is causing the looks, but curiosity and in some cases, a little desire for a pony in his position, social standing and apparent traits. A bit of exotic spice, if you will.
1822010 If we can set up a way for me to get the capters I would be happy to proof read them for you... once I catch up with the ammount of chapters that is.:P
1825117
You're great for doing all that hazzle to satisfy your fans
And thanks for the griffin info. kinda glad it wasn't setting up an interspecial scene
but that favour.
totally something to do with dusty
Hm. I would assume that the complex is rather small considering that all the lieutenants were there at the end. I am also surprised that they managed to stick all of their large heads into that one singular doorframe, then again it is merely a story element and not truly relevant as it is supposed to be there for comedy value. (Though I could critizise them for being unable to react to an unexpected situation but stand there slack jawed.)
On the other hand I can´t stop thinking that Princess Luna was expecting this to happen.
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Who said it wasn't setting up an interspecies romp? I'm not saying it is, either. After 40 chapters, you should know I love throwing occasional curve balls at y'all.
You seem to have this interesting fascination with Dusty. Perhaps you have a thing for down-to-earth cute unicorns?
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Well, it's less of ALL the heads in the door-way and more that some of them were peeking around or over the ones in front of them. The concept still applies. They reacted all-right, coming to see if Luna was ok. Finding their ever regal and cool Princess in such an...awkward situation sort of blindsided them. If it'd been a real threat, they've done what was necessary.
1825584
well, what can I say
Let's drink, eat, rut and be merry
but yeah you still need some hornplay which you set up back in chapter 4 or 5 if memory serves right
and think of Stars reaction to being ordered to do another mare... please tell me she isn't gonna have him do a stallion
1825614
*whistles innocently at the hornplay comment*
As for Star and another stallion? Sorry, no M/M play with the main characters. There's a few background ponies who are that way and perhaps one day I'll write something for that, eh, maybe if somepony pays me. Anyhoof, there's plenty of unicorns around for Star to learn with. Luna, Celestia, Sweetie Belle, Dusty, Sunspot, Nightmare Moon, Sherry, etc. One-third of the population sort of allows for a large pool of potentials.