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hmm
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Feel free to elaborate. Is that a good or a bad 'hmm'?
852634 it's a i am intrigued hmm
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Ah, Splendid! Then you'll love where this is all heading. How far does the rabbit hole go?
852671 well it a good story just make sure you keep the same pace or else this story can end up badly.
bad prank was bad, its no surprise starstep snapped like that, and huzzah the shipping begins!
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Indeed. It just goes to show, even an immortal moon goddess can make mistakes. Oh, but her pranking is just getting warmed up.
pinkie says it best
I have this nagging feeling that Luna is trying to push StarStep away... or I may just be imagining things. I really enjoy the feel of brotherhood between StarStep and Lighthoof, kinda makes me wonder how that came to be. While not biologically related, they're so open and playful with each other at times.
"Dude, you're like the one colt I can think of that I don't have the urge to buck into next week when Sherry tells me she thinks you're cute.” <---- This was where I began to think of them more as brothers than best friends. He states that he doesn't like it when Sherry says a colt is cute, well to let another colt rut his fillyfriend with him, that says a lot about their friendship.
“Not sure, left that one in your stash and borrowed Pegasi in Heat, instead.”
I really can't tell where Luna is going with all this, and again I continue to love Lighthoof, even if I'm not sure if I like Sherry's proposition. Juggling two mares is enough but the possible ramifications of him hooking up with her and Lighthoof seem risky at best. Guess I shall read onward to find out.
that end...wow!
This is so delightfully awkward. I love it.
BURSHIE! I'm loving this story so far
Great scene with Star and Luna at the end I like how she is trying to hone him into a worthy companion, it’s also amusing that she keeps giving him a new pet name every time they meet; ‘Lost Puppy, Armoured Shadow & Brittle Blade’ I wounder what she’ll add in later chapters.
“Considering Lighthoof's last mare-friend, Trixie. This mare was a keeper”
Does this meal Light used to date The Great And Powerful Trixie or just someone else with the same name?
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Hmm...I'd forgotten I'd tossed in 'Trixie' as just a sort of filler name. Since she does appear in the story later, this would horribly confuse things so I changed it to Berry Punch. Glad you're enjoying the story.
Is it even possible to brush an ethereal mane?
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Well, Pip tugged on it, twice, during Luna Eclipsed. So, yeah, I'm gonna say yes. It's just very....flowly, but apparently has substance.
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Ah. That makes sense. At least there's logic behind it.
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Indeed. I've tried very hard to have some level of logic and believability to this story rather just going "HEY MAGIC!" and Deus Ex Machina'ing my way to the end. I do hope you enjoy your journey through the rest of the story.
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So far so good!
I try to do the same with my own stories, but on the only one I've uploaded, I think I might have done a bit of Deus es Machina. Unfortunately. Still not to good at writing.
I think this fits better on this chapter then the previous one.
I lol'd at the dream at the introduction of the chapter.
This being my 3rd complete re-read of the story (considering you completely lost me at Tia's come on towards light hoof on your latest update), and every time I see something I missed that helps explain things later on.
I shall continue....
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The other strange, and unusual thing he found in those dusty old tomes. Was a story about Celestia trying her hoof at creating a picture in the stars.
Should be a , instead of a . there
I wanna brush her mane...
What's this? A shipping fic where the characters actually develop and become interesting over time? Someone shoot me! This is awesome!
1982160 Done
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And, yes you're right, this is awesome.
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and here is where i end it for tonight
dude when I started reading this chapter the song 3way from the lonely island starts playing while I was reading this lol
He will probably end up with Scootaloo.
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Fuck naw, he better not...
2012919 Oh my god, best picture ever.
MUTHER F#UCKER (u why u i will kill u so here it is) TASTE THE RAIMBOW MOTHERFUCKER (IDK WHAT I POSTED THIS FOR XD)
This is a very good story. Far more than I had even dared hope.
But, I do notice a couple of things. Mostly, that you tend to get your thees and thous confused sometimes. Understandable, of course.
But perhaps I can offer a bit of assistance?
If I remember my Shakespearean English properly, this should read as:
"Wert thou afraid, in those moments when Nightmare Moon stood before thee?"
Just a humble offer of help with the Old Style speech that Luna uses.
It's a bit after midnight and there's only fifty more chapters. Let's do this.
D*mn straight, it wasn't thought out. That was a d*ck move on Luna's part. Not cool.