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Best chapter yet. At the end of each chapter my craving for moar increases, especially now that Scoots is involved. I really hate to use the same picture more than once on the same story, but it just seems to fit in perfectly when things are going good.
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Huzzah indeed! Please spread the love if you're enjoying the story.
My only complaint about FIMFiction is that I'm forced to use the young-scoot character tag. There's not adult CMC character tags. So part of me is afraid some ponies will think it's a foal-fooling fic.
Anyhoof, glad to see you weren't too disappointed by the direction I went with their relationship.
Wow, 15k words in about 24hrs since I started this little project. I'd say I'm on a roll.
i love this story so far although it all been fine and dandy, so i really don't understand the sad tag yet, but i assume that stuff is for latter, but ill be watching you...
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Na JK, but i will be watching for future chapter or stories, cause Luna is awesome pony
"This is like Christmas. No. It's BETTER than Christmas. It should be it's own Holiday! EXPLOSION DAY! Happy Explosion Day."
An EXPLOSION of cool, that is. (Thanks for your kind words "RICK")
Now, to actually read it and not just skim it.
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Yes, I went ahead and added the 'sad' tag so as not to blind-side any pony with the later chapters. Since there's no 'bitter-sweet' tag I can use.
Anyhoof, glad to see comments and enjoyment. Please refer it to your friends, my confidence could use more 'thumbs-up'.
NEED MOAR
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Haha, there is more coming sir. If you wish it faster, feel free to gather ponies to rate and comment. The greater the response, the more driven I am to create.
@Indingo Eclipse sure i will, sir
Came for the clop stayed for the awesome and often hilarious story
“'When you came, you cried out her name. It's ok though Star. I get it now. Really, I do.'”
I almost cried right there. That's some major heart crushing.
“Luna....you...called out her name last night.”
Poor Scoots, I feel so sad for her, that is pretty much the worst thing Star could of done.
Lighthoof nodded and nudged his friend with his wing, “Of course your highness. I'm sure StarStep can ensure your evening walk goes unmolested.”
Still... laughing...XD
Damn Scoots... that's terrible... hope she really is fine. Otherwise, I like where this is going. Nice job, mate!
843616 I think I love you... JK I love the adventure core reference props to you ts4.mm.bing.net/th?id=I.4968311601432607&pid=15.1&W=159&H=160
they seemed to enjoy the darkness below.
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Augh! I was reading the last chapter hoping the whole time he wouldn't say THAT and I thought he made it safe and sound... then right off the bat, first thing we find out. He did say THAT. Worst thing you can do in bed. Oh well, $#!+ happens.
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Well, fret not too hard. Star is who he is, Scoots just wanted to know for sure if she had a spot in his heart. I assure you, things eventually work out in one way or another.
The discussion was abruptly derailed when some kind of a noise came from the pond itself. Startled royal guards silently watched as bubbles of air appeared on the surface, and the water grew darker, almost black, reminding Starstep of the unrefined waste sludge. A putrid smell rose from the pond; and suddenly with another rush of bubbles a five-fingered appendage not unlike gryphon's claws has emerged from the water. Badly rotten and waterlogged, it was clutching an equally foul-looking fish, partially wrapped in what seemed like remains of a newspaper. It hungrily latched onto the shore, lettng go of the fish, and a muffled, chilling voice spoke from beneath the surface:
"Need a dispenser here..."
Havent read the hole thing yet just making a guestimate that he will use the knowledge of the unicorn thing on Luna
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Lord I thought he was going to call out Luna's name at the end, that would have been, awkward.
Apparently he did......
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Ah, the puns...just wait till you get to the saucy banter about sleeping with the royal sisters.
At this rate I'll never sleep its so addicting
don't you mean dunno?
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Meh, fixed. I haven't gone back and really re-re-edited these older chapters. I write a chapter, go back and proof-read a couple times and publish. I just don't have the patience to wait around for a proof-reader to get back to me days after I write a chapter just so I can post it.
toward the end where they see luna.
Apologies, not Apologizes. ^^ just one of the few errors
Overall your work is very nice, the characters are ok.
I have to say I didn't expect hearing the word Perhaps from Scootaloo, but that's just me, since it's kind of a 'proper' word and I don't expect a rough and tumble personality like her or rainbow to say it.
Eh, whatever. I like where things are going and I love how you are depicting the characters. Keep it up! :D
I have to admit, even after i read this story all that time ago, it still holds up quite well.
Hmm, one would assume the fish have something to do with it, then...
Also, I notice that you've called this Chapter IV instead of V.
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Fixed the chapter number.
So if I had to guess, you wanted us to reread this chapter to be reminded of Goldwing. I like where this is going!
Friends... with benefits
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4529120 I was about to say the same thing
He should just go with scoots XD
Steal my waifu and I won't forgive you Indigo.
It should be their. I know it's small, but these mistakes drive me 'round the corner and up the wall.
Did she at least say hi?
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If you're joking then that's kind of funny but if you're not then they were talking about the time of day