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D'awwwwwwwwwww~
Okay, allow me a moment to say something comprehensible about this chapter.
......
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
...Dammit
Okay but seriously, that was ballsy of him. Very ballsy. Good thing it payed off.
Another enjoyable chapter! Keep it up!
I sense bad things on the horizon, but maybe I'm wrong. Great chapter as always, I look forward to each and every one.
Not gonna lie the description of the armor made me want to be in the Night Guards, then we get to see how they actually function. Given Luna's playful character I'm not all that surprised her guards would be a tad more laid back than Celestia's. Also I'm surprised at how fast Star's relationship with Luna is going, of course he still hasn't told her about Cheerilee yet, so that might prove to be the next hurdle for him.
Well now it's time for Star and Light to learn the ropes of being a Night Guard, and what better way than diving head-in. Now I'm going to take a shot in the dark and say it will be on his patrol that Star first runs into Sweetie Belle since she's working in the area he's patrolling, also it's time for Star to go back having problems with more than one girl, of course he still has to tell Sherry and Peach Blossom about how he's responsible for Light working nights now (and knowing Sherry she'll probably have an umm 'interesting' punishment in mind).
This deserves to be featured!
Great story that has awesome quality despite the insanely quick updates! Keep up the awesome work!
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I based the armor coloring on the Night-time guard in the Twilight future/past episode. The Nightmare Night armor seems more of a festivity outfit with the bat-wing illusion. Crests on the helms will belong to the Shadow-Guard. We'll get into them later.
As for the speed of Luna/StarStep. Consider a few things. Courtship is nothing more than an old form of saying you're 'dating' someone. Luna still adheres to some old traditions. Also, she's pretty old. She's dated a lot in her lifetime. Now that Star has proven he can handle her jokes, can learn from his mistakes, and sees her as a pony and not as a Goddess. She now has few reservations about accepting his desire to date. Granted, she's still a very busy Alicorn. She still has her fears, and Star has his secrets. It's not exactly smooth sailing, but it's still sweet to see her finally showing affection and mean it, right?
And now, we dive into the Old Canterlot arc. Can StarStep and Lighthoof handle such a tough patrol?
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That would be nice. Do they feature fics with clop? To be honest, I'd be happy if they'd just fix the bloody site and get rid of those 502 errors.
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So you want me to go slower? Ok, no problem.
Glad you're enjoying the ride. Tell your friends and be sure to Rate it.
I wonder what his reaction would be if she said no..........oh, right. It's this --> encrypted-tbn2.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRQeKO-GTtdPhgt7OMychMTvCcFjfOcOy4nZgywQf_cuQx6Eovk
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Well...I expect she'd troll-face, and he'd 'rage' face, then 'ok' face, then 'forever alone' face.
Luna may be a prankster, but even she will give ponies a break.
UGH... I'm just... waiting for that [Sad] tag to hit me right in the face.
I feel like I can't relax. If I do, it's going to strike, and I'll be all "FUCK!"
He got some real balls to do that in front of the rest of the Night-Guards and Shinning Armor. I think I wouldn't have that kind of curage. Still good chapter and it took me by surprise good job.
So many daww's were given that day
Oh. Yeah and star just one little tiny thing TELL LUNA ABOUT CHEERILEE DAMN YOU
924603 Hopefully she'll be real lax about his honesty and maybe a little distant or not, depending on how he delivers it........or the whole thing will come crashing down on his head and he will probably have to do something really dramatic to get her to even look at him again. That's what I'm guessing at least.
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Yeah, the first of the [Sad] tags will be arriving in due time. Just relax and enjoy the ride till the train comes to a devastating wreck.
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Multiple mares is ok. Luna and Celestia were the ones who crafted the laws on such unions in the first place. The key to it, is that every member of a pony's relationship circle must be aware of each other. Under normal circumstances, the Princesses would not mind the pony they're dating, to see other mares. As long as everything is in the open. Because of how busy the Princesses generally are, they understand their colt may need more affection than they can give. It's part of why a lot of relationships with them fail. Most ponies can't be that dedicated
That said, you know how Star can be...
“Princess Luna. I would like to offer this flower as a token of courtship.”
My Mind:WOAH-OH-OH-AH-AH-AH-AAAA-HA-AH-AH-AH
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I...assume that's laughter of the joyful glee and not one of lunacy.
926631 ITS BOTH!!!
EDIT: I c wat u did thar
EDIT2:this is waht I mean
And now they're going to the night club district, their patrol will probably cover where Sweetie Belle is, and then we find the first [sad] tag. I can see it coming but it won't stop it from being sad.
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eh, there's some sorta-sad stuff coming. But the REAL sad tag will blind-side you all. This I promise.
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I have my suspicions...
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Do tell...
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Starstep "taking the spear" so to speak would be way too obvious, but you do seem to focus in on that concept a lot. So I'm waiting for Lighthoof to take a serious injury for the princess instead since he's the perptually loyal one. Then we get into the "real" sads about achieving one's dreams but is it worth it without your best friend etc.
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Very good angle, but Eenope
I will say this in regards to 'taking the spear'. Goldwing is at the heart of what holds Luna back from fully embracing a new lover. It's less foreshadowing and more hints of Luna's internal sadness.
Besides, by now you should know I try hard not to take obvious routes and toss you ponies a few curve balls.
925735 Hope he doesn't catch anything.
I have the strange tingly feeling Star's gonna die (Hence the [Sad] tag)....
Just saying.
But yeah, stories amazing would've written it the same way if I was the author.
Now sure how I'll work this out with Sherry yet, but I'm sure it'll be ok.
Found this typo.
I yelled, "WHAT THE FUCK?!" when Star offered his gift to Luna. And my iPhone went across the room, too. Thank god it didn't get a scratch on it. I swear, I'm WAY to into fanfiction sometimes...
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haha, if you're getting this excited over his offer to court her, your iPhone is doomed in the later chapters.
my thoughts:
"I let me feelings..."
YAR HAR, ME MATEY!
Great chapter! media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mcheixIhWD1qb7eni.gif
well it is official i love you
butterflys
*butterflies
well shit
1531549 I was thinking that same thing!!
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Sad has more to do with an overall element. A death, on the other hand, calls for TRAGEDY!!! Tis a Tragedy indeed.
1374289 gosh darn-it! i swear if you make me sad with a death of a character i'll break my computer and it will be your fault for making a truly great fanfic
Jus` sayin`: NORD MEAD!
2409375 How about Mead with Juniper Berry? Or even Black-Briar Mead?
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Chug a mug of mead
and another mug of mead
Chug another mug of mead till you fall down
Chug a mug of mead
and another mug of mead
Chug another mug of mead warrior
2749423 FUS-RO-DAH
2409375 FUS-RO-DAH TO YOU TOO
1696075 good by doctor........
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Why do you keep posting that image?
2887626 A troll that thing doing it make him cool.
2780369 u posted the image wrong... this is why we cant have nice things.
*Does the "yes yes yes yes yes yes~" dance *
hehe.... Love this chapter!
I know I said I saw it coming, but I didn't see THAT coming....oh wait....I did.
Heh, sorry, I mean YES it was a little tiny bit cliché, but overall I liked it. It was a very well 'executed' scene, that carried it's 'weight' very handily.
Good work!!!! ^^
Also, I have to say, I am so happy that you are taking the 'constructive' route with Luna here, I mean, I just....I love it. Luna Aeternam! Nobilitatis per Noctem! <3 <3 <3