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good as always.
YES! An update!
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Haha, what do you mean? I have published two chapters today alone. Dost thou wish to drain my very essence?
"[...]she was commanded to buy at least one toy from the store."
Oh jeebus. I couldn't stop laughing. THIS IS FUNNY STUFF, MAN.
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Any plans for more today?
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Almost 8k published today and you want MORE? Dear sweet sexy Luna, you ponies wish to drive me to madness! Lunar madness!
...what would you do for more?
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lol, depends on your proposal I guess? . .
Remind me to breathe inbetween my hysterical laughing. This chapter was brilliant!
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Laughing at poor manipulative Sundrop. How dare you!
Despite that, I am glad you're enjoying the ride.
Feel free to point out any spots that really grab you and please suggest this story to your friends.
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I certainly could suggest it to them. And I would, if any of my friends actually shared my love for ponies. Doesn't mean that I won't suggest it to others, I assure you.
If I may be so bold Indigo, May I request you read at least one of my fictions? It's simply that you are quite the writer and I'd like your opinion. The one I'm referring to is the longest one I have written so far and I'm still writing it. The others are optional of course. But I'd really like to know if you could give me some tips and what you think of it.
Please?
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Indeed. The two colt's personalities have developed and played off each other splendidly so far. I just started writing the story up the other day and poof, here comes these characters. Glad you're having a good time.
I like where this is going. Glad I found this little gem today.
I like the Luna justice system, apparently she's a really effective judge.
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Perhaps. But she can also be very cold and terrifying. Pissing off an alicorn with an older, more strict moral code is not a good idea.
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Things in RL are a might crazy right now. My little bit of free time has been invested into writing. But when I get a chance, I'll take a look at your story and see if there's any advice I could offer.
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Perhaps not traditionally, but when your country is ran by immortal alicorns who move the sun and the moon. Who's to tell them how they can and can't run things? I could really get into details and lay out the specifics and make it this huge thing. But then as a writer I have to ask myself, is it worth slowing the story down to pick it apart? Not really. It's a plot device I'm using to get across important information for later. Perhaps I'll do a story on Equestrian courts another time.
I would so watch 'Judge Luna' if it was made into a real show
"The mare pony balked and, of course, said no. Luna called her a lair and declared the mare had wasted the courts time and slandered a business."
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Awesome chapter. It's good to see Star and Light are still being awesome together their hoof-bump at the end of their scene was great.
The Night-Court works well as a way to world build and to do some foreshadowing, plus Luna as a "fair but slightly abrasive" Judge is fantastic.
And to top it off Luna and Star get a nice character moment at the end.
reminds me of judge Judy
I'll admit when I started reading this story it was for the promise of Luna clop... but I am much happier having found a good story instead.
"... ordered to buy one toy..."
Hold on, lemme find my ass, I think I just laughed it off...
Trollestia...we meet again...
857829 I could get you a Klondike bar....pffffffft sorry I could not resist your comment reminded me what would you dooo for a Klondike bar
857723 ... Is this a trick question?
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wait, the spell wears off?!?!
How StarStep probably felt like doing at that moment:
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2012993 You gonna post that every chapter?
Dear lord this story is badass. I adore how you portray Luna's character, it fits my headcanon most excellently.
Starstep is best wingman.
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I agree Luna, don't let the stupid reproduce. Stupid being a generalization don't get butthurt.
Alright, I thought I was convinced before, but now it's confirmed.
Luna's just bucking awesome.
Oh...well...I am....surprisingly surprised...I mean... .like <--- this surprised...
In the last chapter I refrained from saying a LOT of bad things, but now, everything that was on my mind, that I felt was a mischaracterization of Luna....turns out to be on Tia, who is, in fact, a troll teacher as evidenced by S1, xD....
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.....Sorry! omg Sorry sorry for almost going so far overboard, I mean, even what I said in that last chapter...er...chapter before last.
I LOVE how you tied it all together, I mean...ok...2 hours...that's NOT insane.... xD
Lol.... I feel like such a foal for going so overboard in my thoughts... Yay
This means that Chapter 8 was 100% fantastic Luna romance moment, ruined by...well.....I should say Segued by sex scenes...because...why not.
And here, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER :D omg I cannot stop, I have to keep reading <3
1995991 Yea, but he probably would've flipped Luna.
I'm glad I gave this a try
Can't wait to keep reading!
Yeah know every time I think just be fucking honest constantly and her have to fight her away with a stick if need be.
All I could think thought this chapter was OBJECTION!
I have to thank you for this chapter, specifically, the scene with the pregnant mare and the stallion she had hoped to trap.
So often in this world, a guy will end up in a situation similar, or at least as bad, if not worse. And usually, it seems that the woman gets away with it. Even if the woman is caught lying, in the end, more often than not, irreparable damage is caused to the man's reputation and life, following him forever.
I myself was in a similar situation once, but I was fortunate enough that she was caught in her lies early in the investigation, and my record and reputation remains clear, while she nearly went to jail for filing a false report to the police. (Considering the severity of the felony I was accused of, had the police not decided that she was the one that was lying to them, I could have been in prison for a lengthy time.)
Also... Why is this story not marked with the comedy tag? Seriously, this fic has earned it's place in my Comedy Gold shelf.
Luna's spell*
* In the event of an erection that persists longer than 2 hours, the patient should seek immediate Alicorn assistance.