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twi you messed up the spell
wat
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
SNAP.
HAVENT READ THIS YET BUT YESSSSSSSSS ALL MY YESS
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If you haven't read the story, how do you know you like it?
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"wat". What, what? What's the question?
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LOL, what's with the face, Autumnfire?
1069356 I think it's more of a ERRRRMAHHHHHGERRRRRD wat, than a -huh?- what.
I think I have the same feelings anyway. WAT.
1069396 closest thing i could find to a deer in the headlights look combined with a headdesk
1069356 LUNA IS BEST PONY Plus the character is hilarious in chapter 1
Twi dun goofed.
Also, congrats on finally getting featured! You absolutely deserved it!
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Aye, I noticed that. It's happened before but I cannot figure out how it triggers. Perhaps it's completely random? Donno, but I hope ponies who see it will give it a whirl.
1069453 It's done by mods. If they find something they like they feature it.
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Well...I guess they didn't like it much, cause it's gone again
When i read the part with Cheerilee trying to tell star i was like "........MY SHIT HITING THE FAN SENCES ARE TINGALING" then i read the end and was like cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/250x250/23937572.jpg
Oh man.... I just imploded. Such a vast array of feels.
OH FUCK!
Shit just got real!
I have to say, out of all the possibilities, this never crossed my mind. You sir, are a god.
I'll be honest, every time you use the word "plot" to refer to the backside of a pony, I cringe a little. It's literally my only problem with this story.
Suprise MotherFucka!
Twi... You dun goofed...
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Sorry to hear that. But I like the word. It's fun and less abrasive than using the word 'ass'. But to be honest, I use it rarely.
OH SHIT.
Hmm, well that was unexpected, Twilight messing up a spell
Alright all joking aside I do have to wonder what's going to happen now because if Star doesn't take care of the foal, um won't he be 'punished'? Also what will Scootaloo, Luna, Star's mom, his dad, Lighthoof, and Big Mac's reactions all be to this?
Brace yourselves it's about to get crazy up in here even without dangerous stalker ponies, underground Mob bosses, and crazy pony arsonists.
OH SNAP!!!! twi, i hope you didn't do that on purpose......
Only reading that last line caused me to say "Oh Shit" so many times. Dammit Twi, you messed it up!
This isn't going to end well...
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Pffft, silly pony. I warned you so many chapters ago that StarStep was weaving a tangled web.
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Well, to be fair. Celestia did warn Luna that her ultimatum would cause a problem. Luna has nopony else to blame but herself...and Star.
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Hah, I see you've made your way through all the chapters today. Huzzah and welcome to the party. Buckle in, the ride is going to be bumpy.
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Are you kidding, I fell in love with this story. I always drop everything when I get the email that says an update. it's led to a few spilled drinks. I await the next chapter...
I thought that would happen, not because she messed up the spell, but be ause of the MANY times they rutted the mess out of each other, and the time span it was over. Wow just wow.
hohoho Twilight your spell did not work as well as intended I see.
Fantastic update as always, things are moving along very nicely. Still really hoping Star doesn't stay grounded forever, and now that our protagonist is back in Ponyville for a bit I wonder if we will see more of AB's mystery unicorn stalker.
OU SNAP DAT ENDING!
OH....G..GOD. I uhhh...hmmmm. *Opens mouth to say something but pauses*.....
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.......hmmmm. Maybe..uhh...maybe its actually...uhh..all cool. Maybe it isn't all that bad. What if twilight and cheerilee want to take it for their own...uhh(probably not). Umm....well...I guess we'll just have to see how they'll go about this..situation. Heh...eeeh..heh..heh....uuugggh god . Hes about to go through hell isn't he? Hes already been humiliated, attacked by a stalker, involved in friends debt problems, set on fire, possibly will never fly again, and now has to deal with childcare. Yeah...because screw being able to have a good time for so long without some individual delightfully jogging over you, just to throw a handful of shit into the metaphorical fan you call a life. Who needs that peaceful noise?
Aside from all that, jolly good update, mate. Can't wait for the next.
MY REACTION!
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This is more like a swamp of pony emotions, I mean Twilight and Cheerilee seem like they're wanting to get married so will they just raise the kid? Will Starstep simply be the Equestria equivalent of a sperm doner and thus won't have to suffer the consequences of not raising it? If no, then we have to add Cheerilee and Twilight to this already complicated dynamic, never mind that there is still potential for Sweetie Belle and Star.
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Cheerilee, Cheerilee, I'm afraid to raise my hand. I have something to ask you, cause I want to understand. It's not about homework, it's about one plus one is two. I don't want you to teach me, I just want to be with you.
And yes. Perhaps not fire, but a rather nasty fate awaits the stalker unicorn. All in due time.
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If the trip to love Luna was an easy one, everypony would do it. Hell, imagine trying to love Celestia? She has FAR more baggage to sort through.
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You forgot griffons Dun-dun-DUNnnnnn
I believe this is called a "happy accident", well maybe not so happy for Star. Twi and Cherilee probably would've wanted a foal at some point anyway and now they have one from a stallion that they like; though maybe a bit earlier than what they would've preferred.. They don't seem too upset about it, not sure how Star's gonna react to this though...
Nasty fate for stalker unicorn you say?
<Reaction to pregnant Cheerilee.
I started reading this at 10pm last night, and stayed up till 6:10am reading it to chapter 27, I finished the other 2 just now, and its by far the best story I've ever read so far.
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Wait Star is going to hook up with a griffon? GOODNESS Man isn't an immortal goddess of the moon, Scootaloo, Cheerilee, and possibly Sweetie Belle enough for him?
Also I really think Cheerilee and Twilight are going to try and left him off the hook, but Star will step up and insist he do his part to care for it.
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I never said he was going to hook up with a griffon. Just don't forget, they are a part of the story. That diplomacy party is just a taste. What evolves from dealing with them, well....
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Oh my apologies, well the Griffon Delegation Party was one of my favorite chapters (even if Starstep made a dumb move at the very end) so seeing some politics get thrown into this will be nice, of course we still have stalker issues and Sweetie owing money to the mob, and an unstable maniac on the loose to deal with.
1073222 Well first off, more than half those things seemed a little out of Luna's control and the worse of them were from being involved with sweetie.
Second, the only real problem that would be with Celestia seems as it would be time (and it still seems she finds time to sit off in the garden, stroll around the castle in the mornings, eat breakfast with her sister, and [as seen in show] --> apparently schedule random tea parties with the main 6. sure she was called away then, but that can't really count for everything, plus I think she even stayed around afterwards. oh and make time for cake competitions and still be pen pals with twilight and the rest ) sense shes the main ruler and all.
She's older, and a bit more mature than Luna is despite them both being thousands of years old. We've seen her teasing them about a midnight rutting, but really that something most people would do anyway. The only other problem is that she has an immense mom aura about her, so that could make it awkward or not. But then again she actually has had time to come to terms with the current time period, where as Luna seems to have trouble escaping the past.
And I just realized I'm being stupid , and I'm sorry if I just offended you with this, it is your story after all.
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No no, you're right about a few things. I've come to the conclusion that Celestia sleeps very little. Despite Luna being back, I suspect she still can't let go of a thousand years of managing both parts of the day. If it wasn't for her taking random time off to do things like tea-parties and occasional strolls, I bet the poor pony would go crazy. Dating Celestia would require getting around the intimidation factor, her size, and like you said, her 'Mom' aura. With a pony that old with so many things in her past, what could you do to keep her interested when she's probably seen it all?
- Even magic condoms break?
- Cheerilee and Twilight came to mutual agreement to break the spell?
Either way. Poor StarStep had to deal with that painful as shit spell for nothing. Feel sorry for him.
Also...
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Second dat notion brotha.
Wait...so Star...and then he...spell like flaming hooves to the balls...Twilight, you got some explaining to do. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
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Man, I tell ya, I've been looking for a good Luna x Guardspony story and this fits the bill perfectly. A few errors with comma/period placement, but honestly I can overlook it all with the quality of the story. You, sir, are a hero and I eagerly await the next chapter.
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ZOINKS!!!
Three evenings have I been reading your chapters, And three evenings i have been left with a grin, and wonderings for the future.
only thing i can see to point out is a few grammar errors, and missing letters in a few places... and AB sayin fool instrad of foal. unless that was intentional. Keep up the good work.
P.S. As an aspiring writer myself your new perspective on luna is quite interesting. Regal as a princess should, but still fun loving. Like how her harshness and coldness from before comes from her immortal experiances, not really wanting to harm, but hesitant to embrace.
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Yeah, lack of good GuardxLuna stories are what prompted me to write this in the first place.
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Alas, even 2-3 read throughs don't always catch the errors. I do try, but my time is limited. So sometimes it comes down to a choice between getting a new chapter written or more editing. Also, Luna is best pony.
I HAVE to know the rest of this awesome story! the wait is unbearable
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How did you come to that conclusion?