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I felt a disturbance in the literary force...To Love The Moon has been updated.
Let the reading commence!
Going to her quarters. This means either sexy times or complete obliteration. Or both
I hope scoots gets her feather back, or at least another one.
Well that went better than I thought!
Nice one good sir!
Finally updated! Commence read!
Comment: What shall you do Princess...? She doesn't know about the feather yet, though knowing about the mission's end results. Let's hope she takes it well, and can see that Scootaloo truly regrets for having to give it up, and not some simple thing to give away.
1522199 sexy time obliteration is best obliteration... I'm deeply concerned for him though, once he tells her everything he's going to be in for a world of pain. I mean let's recap.
he made a deal with a hardened criminal
he allowed a feather of hers to be given away,
he led her guards into combat (although I don't see her being upset by this)
he was partially responsible for the death of one of her soldiers (again I can't see her being too pissed, but this is possible)
and he (depending on how you look at it) EXECUTED A PONY!
I am also worried about how affectionate Luna's being... What IS Steel doing with that feather?
havn't read it yet, but it sounds similar to a story ive been working on.
oh wow, even just a few paragraphs and im already liking it!
and alright, i admit i came for the mature tag...
I really hope things turn out okay, and that Star can eventually fly again.
Cliff hanger.... CLIIIIIIIIFHANGER!... heh, you magnificiant bastard
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Complete obliteration by sexy time?
1522561 Optional, but welcome
1522298 Valid arguments, but still. Love will conquer and all that good stuff
As for the feather, I suspect either some sort of ritual item or just a part of his collection.
shhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyt tha's a lot o' chapters.
1522637 I'll actualy be disappointed if he uses it for evil. I get the impression that he was actually telling the truth about just wanting it for his collection. I can see him fondling it and everything.
1522811 Well, as Copper demonstrated, appearances can be deceiving
this has to do with the feather doesn't it?
This is one of those "I need the next chapter ASAP!" endings.
I promise I'll be patient...
The ponynapper got off easy. I would first have snapped his horn off, stabbed him in the gut with it, then covered him with honey, lowered him into a fire-ant nest, stomped all over said nest to piss the ants off even more. Then dropped a swarm of killer bees on top of him.
Haaa, jeez. Its always these chapters that will just kill me to wait for again. And Luna's chipper attitude bothers me. It just feels too suspicious to be believable. Or maybe, just maybe, I'm simply being paranoid.
hmmm....a quick 10 minute read...you sir have made my night by updating this, however i hate to be the one to say it, but please for the love of lunas royal flank dont rush. it doesnt seem like your typical pattern just to rush a chapter in after waiting so long to update.
ill take it something bad happened back home OR you had a lazy streak
whatever the case, i would go back through and edit some more details in
other than that...no complaints
but you still wernt able to beat the previous chapter
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No, I don't suspect I'll beat the previous chapter. That was a rather large undertaking and a climax to a story arc. 36 is a bridge to the next arc, so I never intended it to be very long. More to clarify some things, touch on some of the fall-out and begin to slip into the next bit of excitement. I could have drawn some of the scenes out, including the meeting with the widow, but to be honest, I felt it wasn't necessary. This is just a pit-stop and a breather.
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I'm just glad the story continues on. I personally would have liked a bit more of the ponies response to their daring rescue. Since it made front page news you'd think there'd be more of a response, but I fully enjoyed this chapter none the less.
I think the scene with the widow was great as written. Anything more and it would have tinged the scene with too much sadness; it's supposed to be a bittersweet scene, the life of a brave night guard given in service to the ponies he protected.
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Part of the reason I didn't delve into the pony's response, is because the Guard had to get back to Canterlot as soon as they made sure the victims were taken care of. I always envisioned the Royal Guard as the type not to want credit or a lot of hype over their accomplishments. Humble in their duty. Besides, there's more opportunity to look into what happened after the rescue as Luna chats with Starstep. It was a writing decision to move the plot along and allow for deeper conversations about what has happened, later. Sometimes it's hard for readers to see the reasoning until the larger picture unfolds.
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That's very true. Thanks for giving me the explanation as well
Been refreshing my tablet daily, and BAM! Update!
Eventful twists, and, of course, leave us hanging at Luna's doorstep. I expected much worse from Shinning, but considering circumstances, seemed appropriate.
A tad disappointed at the 3000 word count. Hoping for an update a tad sooner than the last.
Other than that, keep up the good work.
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Well, Shining is married to the element of Love. I imagine him as the stern but understanding leader type. It would be wrong of him to blame others for wanting to do what's right. So he's making sure they know about consequences that follow such action. Not to punish, but to teach. Living as long as he has around the Princesses has taught him a thing or two.
I know, the chapter is shy of 4k. I guess I spoiled y'all with that 8k chapter. Next chapter will be much sooner. Like I said, this is just a lead-in to another story arc and to get things moving. Have faith. I wish I had more time to write, but money being what it is right now...well...RL is no Equestria. No monsters to slay for rent, or magical talents to earn a living.
Any leader worth his salt would seize an opportunity to reach.
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To reach? What do you mean?
I meant teach... I was on my phone>>1528028
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Ah, haha. Yes, that makes far more sense. Yes, good leaders know when to teach important lessons. Some do it by words, others by actions, or example. And some by letting their subordinates learn via Hands-on. Unfortunately, our current world leaders are lacking in this regard. Ah well.
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Looks like Starstep might get lucky tonight.....or get into very deep trouble in the next scene. Either way it shall be interesting indeed. Keep up the good work man!
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*wingbows* I humbly accept your praise. Sorry that you dislike the Cliffhangers, but I find them great fun. It's part of why I love Luna, the teasing aspect. Playful hints of things to come. Seeing as you're only on Chp. 25, you're not even to the good stuff yet.
Well still got 5 chapters to read, but gatta say ive loved em all so far. Also kinda funny, reading this got me back into typing my project ive been working on. Been a while since ive written.
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Hey, glad to be an inspiration
For Luna!
1530154 well you underestimate my reading skills! and yea i still hate but love the cliffhangers one of the best stories i've been reading by far. i can't praise you enough
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Well, to be honest, that's probably my mistake there. The spell was intended to last the duration. I'm still debating if I want to follow through with the original plan. Writing can be a creature with it's own intentions at times. Tugging this way and that against your will to go in another direction.
1524386 It is official...
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I salute you good sir for making such a excellent story so far.
I am curious though. can I ask a question via a MSG?
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Certainly. Though don't expect much in the spoiler area. Pinkie frowns on that and she's a harsh mistress.
1531277 I thought it was a good twist to be thrown in. If you need to doubt yourself about a path to take, think of the possibilities at each end.
Well... Starstep is about to be destroyed one way or another! :D
Finally caught up, no i dont have anything to do.
But wait
1564506 .................... Geldation....... Pinkie agrees
Oh yeah, shit's gonna go down, alright.
ts3.mm.bing.net/th?id=H.4685900351014270&pid=15.1&H=160&W=107 Sexy times are coming.
May be a bit late but for the enjoyment of future readers
their
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Fixed. Man, how did I miss that one. I'm usually very good about proper usage of They're, Their and There.
As wonderfully written as this story is, I can't help but notice a few grammar errors in each chapter... I'm not trying to be mean or condescending or anything, as these are to be expected, nopony's perfect. A particular repeated error has been gnawing at my nerves though... The word "its" only needs an apostrophe before the S if it is a contraction of "it is" or "it has," not when used as a possessive. So it would be, "the chariot began its descent," not "the chariot began it's descent." Again, I don't mean to be condescending, you're a far better writer than I am, (I haven't even finished my first work yet!) Just some friendly criticism. Now, it's good to finally see Luna again! Onward to the next chapter!
once agene I am driven to comment on a chapter and at the same time I do not want to give out any spoilers.
I am getting a feeling that Starstep should have paid more attention to how Scootaloo is feeling.
and what of the dragons horde it should be split between the pony's the ware held I know it is not much as to helping them recover but it will at lest get them back on there hoof's.
Harts Fire
PS this is my third time reading this story and it just gets better with time.