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I like it!
Is that a new cover? When did that come around?
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I drew it Friday afternoon/night. You like or no?
That... was pretty fuckin' intense.
Also, love the new cover art.
The only dissapointing part for me so far. No sweat though, it´s simply a matter of taste and some times it differs. Can´t always have the cake and eat it too
Oh wow, I really like this story and the character you set up with Fala. She's kind of similar to a character I'm writing in her motives...
... I'm rooting for Fala.
Personal Theory: Shit's going down between the ponies and the griffons/hippogriffs.
Nightmare and Dawn come back to repay a debt.
The Princesses and their consorts have...intimate relations.
That is all for now.
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How I spelt that or what they turned out to be?
From a world-building standpoint, the Hippogriffs represent a fusion of Griffons and Pony. A sub-race that has stayed hidden for a very long time. They're smaller and quicker than Griffons but not even close to as strong or durable. I guess you could almost call them the Unicorn's of the Griffon world.
Hippogryffs FTW, love the idea of them being druids
3820037 It's pretty awesome, man. I actually thought it was professionally done, lol.
Do you actually do art stuff on the side?
Fala is fucking awesome! Also was the gift that she removed the spirits from Starstep and Lighthoof? They seemed rather helpful to me, they provided information that Starstep had no clue about, I honestly thought they would be a future plot device.
I like how you described the false empress, you made her look cool, whilst her attitude left much to be desired, but with Fala she exudes a simple badassery about her that wouldn't be becoming of any over extravagance.
Can't wait for more!
Hmm. Curiouser and curiouser.
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I think Fimfic just ate my comment.
Anyhoof, she only swept away the lesser ghosts, like hitch-hiker plant-seeds. Remember the ghost guards that chased them at the end of the ruins? Yeah, not saying anything else now.
very interesting so the red emperess is a hippogriff
I love it!!! Can't wait for more... although one thoughts been running through my head about half way through. "It's really going to suck whenever this ends". Mainly because I'll probably want more but eventually I'll hopefully get over it. Until then, keep on doing what your good at!
Whitefeather Alexander is awesome. So, the Red Empress revealed. She's... nice.
Seriously, I did not expect this story to head any deeper into creepy and terrified, but StarStep and Lighthoof seem to be really, really good at living through life-haunting events. I am waiting for Luna or Celestia to be awesome and prove equals to the Red Empress.
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You don't like the empress?
As for Luna and Celestia, it's like poker. Sometimes you have to know when to fold and when to play your hand
*Reads the first bit* Oh boy! This seems like a Great little story to read!
*Sees the chapter's list* ... Oh crap....
*Sighs and hunkers down for a LONG all nighter* .... Okay... maybe more than one night...
3820705 heh. Look at it this way, you have something fun to read at lunch for a few days.
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Hehe. Point taken.
Dude you made featured again!
And with this, history is forever changed.
My theory:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
My, my, my, aren't I the shouty one tonight
im scared that this will end badly
This is either going to end spectacularly, with a story that everyone should read.
However, like most fiction on the internet, it might collapse under it's own weight.
I cannot wait to see what it shall be.
By playing the diplomat she's gained free reign over the Gryphon homeland. I like the Red Empress, she has demonstrated, among other things, the power to lead. The way she leads is powerful, it is absolute, and I feel like she's going to do to Equestria what Hitler did to Russia in WWII once she regains her grip on the Gryphon homeland completely. She seeks unity(or absolute control), and she believes she will get it in due time. Though, however powerful she is, I seriously doubt she will gain control of Equestria(or if she does it won't last) unless you're going to pull a "lol, nope!"(though you've gone around 50 chapters too far to pull something like that) and let some of the important characters die to give her lasting control; she will not win because she cannot. Seems like that's how this will end, now all that's left is to see how we get there. It's like the main character being pushed into a near-death situation in most tv shows; you know they won't die(or won't stay dead), but you don't quite know how yet.
Ah... Starstep has Nightmare inside of him...
Also, this story has changed so much... it started so upbeat,
but is getting darker and darker with each passing chapter...
After this chapter, you need to add both the Dark tag and
the Gore tag.
Omfg YES MORE;!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please :)
There is more to this Red Empress than meets the eyes, for she has yet to reveal all the cards in her claw....there is something she is not telling any of them, for she sounds far to sure about what she is claiming.
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Ehhh...
Think of this as the dark hour before the sun rises. There will be comedy chapters and some light-heartedness again. Don't forget we have things that are still suppose to happen: Sweetie's band-melee, Twilight/Cheerilee wedding, Star/Luna's reception, etc.
The story is kinda like the cycle of night and day and even during the 'night' sections, I try to toss in a few jokes and dawwww moments to break it up.
That said, I tried to change the tags last week and it wouldn't let me keep Comedy and Sad even though the story has both. *shrug*
3820851 Yeah, shame it doesn't last long.
3821329 Either way, enjoy the ride
3821340 Big difference being that the Empress isn't out to slaughter non-griffons like the fake one was. She's all about unity through force. "For the Greater Good" I suppose is a good motto for her. Also, no one is immune from dying in this story, no one. *walks away whistling*
3822038 still an amazing story... I tip my hat to you sir
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What they turned out to be. (If it had been spelling I would have seen if I could correct it first) :)
As for the red empress, I feel she has already lost in the long run because she sounds like a person stuck in her ways. If you are not capable of moving with time it will roll over you sooner or later.
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She may be stuck in her old ways, but politics remain the same. You don't always have to win through brute force. She is the counter to our beloved Princesses, a being on their level that will force them to bring their knowledge and powers to bear. And it will be glorious! Also, some really good growth for Starstep.
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I'll bear with you, although I only look forward to the Band "Melee" and to Star's and Luna's reception.
Frgove me, but Twiree makes me cringe. (Bad memories from Romance Reports)
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Huh, cheerilight makes you cringe? I always thought them a cute couple. Eh but to each there own.
Anyhoof, a few more 'night' chapters then the sun will rise for some cheerful ones. Like the old plays, working comedy against tragedy.
Scoots wants to know what things you'd like to see more of. Besides her cute plot.
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Really? What is Twilight's biggest nightmare?
To be sent back to magical kindergarten.
Why? Because the teacher and other kids made fun out of her...
She didn't have any other teachers than Celestia herself...
So it's not like she has a thing for teachers...
True, they're both intelligent, but hey, so is Big Mac.
No idea man, plus I don't think Twilight has a submissive streak.
Perhaps against Celestia, yes, but not other ponies.
Although your story is kinda alternate universe, because
if S3 or S4 were taken into consideration then it would
be "Princess Twilight Sparkle" not "Professor Twilight Sparkle"
But hey, it's your story, your world.
What more? Hmm... more plot... in all ways!
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In my head twilight has a thing for mentor-like ponies. Cheerilee may not be as book smart but she has far more social exp as well as a good head on her shoulder to help keep twilight's compulusive nature in chk. I see cheerilee as twilight's foundation to keep her grounded. Star's visit reminded her of that need. *shrug* just my head canon anyhoof. It's just a tiny part of the story.
As for more plot... Yeeeeah. You're going to get that wish very soon. All aboard the naughty train!
So, if I'm reading this right, the Sisters just accepted pulling all ponies out of the Griffon lands?
3822434 out of spurlin, but with the citizens now homeless and savage outcasts still roaming, the sisters are taking them to Trotyingham. How did you like the chapter, jake? Any thoughts/theories?
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I was quoting Fluttershy. The Red Empress is scary as all fuck and should go away somewhere where no one will have to lose anymore sleep over her creepiness, but not before leaving me with enough brain bleach to burn the memory out of my skull. But she is more regal and refined than her imposter and her wicked code of honor is literally the only thing holding back their total annihilation right now.
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Hmm...
Well, I definitely loved how that fake Empress was just owned. Bitch had an attitude. But I'm a little confused as to what the hell is actually going on. Like... iunno. So, all those griffons attacking the city, they were following her, or the hippogryff? And why are the Sisters just sitting there while the person responsible for murdering their citizens is just chilling? And they seemed so... blase about the whole thing. There's poker facing, then there's just sitting idly by and getting steamrolled. I mean yeah, they get mad, but this Empress is plain telling them, "Imma conquer you." A bit of posturing, please?
Also:
This confuses me... and I'm not even sure how. I get that the EMpress poofed the clingy spirits off of them, but how is it because of "the conflict within our walls?" Isn't the Empress talking about the shit from the underground? Like, all the ghosts? If not, then... what?
I liked it, it was awesome, but I find myself more confused.
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CHOO CHOO!
On a different note (what "we" want to see). The story is always written out of Starsteps point of view (or around him) and I like it the way it is so not interested in a break of style. As such I guess the immediate aftereffects would be interesting.
Many Clan leaders decided to NOT follow the red empress and she actually threw out one that might have followed her. So a little insight into their politics/arguing might be nice to see during the trip.
Then I think it would also be interesting to see how the normal ponies react to this change because I can imagine that this kind of ruler WILL have a certain pull on some ponies, but this would be more of a long term effect as the immediate fallout of a more violent change of rulership will not be viewed favourably.
Would also be interested in knowing if you have any plans with the Crystal Empire or not. After all as another nation and the sudden change in politics it can not realy be ignored is my feeling.
And of course more of the naughty stuff, always enjoy that ^.^
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Dunno, not enough info in canon to really place Cheerilee, for all we know, she might be illiterate, lol ;)
As for Twilight, the show portrays her as obsessive-compulsive, true. But she's learned her lessons and can pull ahead and take lead if the need arises. But hey, headcanons will be headcanons...
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Oh, oh! Pick me, pick me! I've a theory!
It's all a dream and Star is in a coma after his wings got burned!
But seriously, I believe that Nightmare is inside of Star now and Dawn might be inside Light.
Their names even kinda fit together. Will you make Star and Light immortal because of that?
Or will they go crazy?
3822492 she is everything the sisters could be. And it scares them. She's what you get when you stop caring what the citizens 'want' and give them what they 'need'. For the greater good.
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well... seems I didn't make it clear enough. Some of this will be gone over during the exodus but for now, here's the run-down:
The fake empress gathered the outcasts and attacked the city. The Druids were her advisers but secretly working for their true Mistress who wasn't in the world yet. They sort of maniuplated the griffon so they could access the key to bringing the Empress back. It was buried in the ruins since it was the Empress's home city. Nightmare showed Starstep the Druids in the process of releasing the Empress (The funny looking box was the key) and it was part of what prompted him to agreeing to letting the sister go so he could warn Luna.
The 'conflict' that caused the spirits to cling to Star/Light is the attack which forced them back underground against their will. The ghosts of Nightmare's captors. If it wasn't for the blitzkrieg, the ponies would have just taken the roads.
The sisters gave up because the city had fallen and the true empress had actually protected many of the ponies thanks to her Druids. So in a way, she'd shown mercy to them and the sisters were begrudgingly thankful.
I guess I didn't make it clear enough. Too much reading between the lines I guess.
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yes, I haven't forgotten the Crystal Empire. Soon.
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So, wait, Starstep is the one responsible for releasing the Empress?! That won't go over too well...
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Oh no. Remember that Nightmare created a image portal with bones and showed him a room with a weird box and druids chanting around it. This was them summoning the Empress. Nightmare was basically telling him, "She's real and about to show up." But since Nightmare wouldn't let him go warn his Princess without releasing the sisters first, well, it was one more weight on the scales of his decision to let her and Dawn go.
If it had not been for the Empress's Druids, the Xenophoic outcasts would have cut a bloody swath through Spurlin. Remember the earlier chapter comments from the Griffon-Leaders about the blood-thirsty griffons that were forming together. The citizens got really lucky and the Empress's act of mercy worked as a political token.
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Heh, I just noticed I'm not on your top five fics. I'll have to fix that.
Let's see... Just a dash of Babs, a sprinkle of plot and stir.
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Really?! I could have sworn I had you on my page! Fixing!