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Of course we want to know what happens now! Sequel, Sequel, Sequel, Attica! Attica!
I will end you if we don't get a sequel. It's that simple.
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Haha, no sequel, the story will continue. I suppose it's my poor attempt to get ponies to comment. Last chapter was rather sparse on the thoughts from readers.
If I don't see more of this soon there will be terrible consequences!!!! And no more cake Forever!!!
Buck yeah, we want to know what happens next! DON'T LEAVE US IN ETERNAL SUSPENSE! PLEASE!
ha....suddenly flashbacks to another Luna shipping story...where, upon sex, her lover is a concubine!
Whut !!! NO Dont Leave it like that!!!! OUTMEAL ARE YOU CRAZY?!
SEQUEL'S ARE IN HIGH DEMAND
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Last chapter was also a massive buildup chapter, leading into their consumation contained within this one. : )
I'm guessing it was a lot of 'cliffhanger, nooo!!' comments / thoughts, right? Should be receiving quite a few more this time around, not to mention the revelation that they're now married, at least in Luna and Celestia's eyes. Star shall have a panic attack in - 3. 2. 1. Now.
Good chapter, I'm looking forward to the political implications and story content this is sure to bring about!
begin to caress his cute-mark,
*cutie
PROOF-READERS!
Huzzah! Continue!
Everypony loves Moonbutt!
Commence read.
Go Star!!
So you have any idea how pissed i momentarily got at "the story is done"?
Ohh well. Let's see. I cannot read Luna ships anymore, because I can't imagine her with other ponies than starstep. I absolutely loved this chapter. The pholosophies were thoughtful, the romance tear giving and rut.... The last part was beautiful. I just thought " look at how long this has been in the making. Look how far he has come." Everything in this chapter was beautiful, a.... Climax within the main plot if you will.
But I must ask. Did they get merried by doing.... You know?
Screw my choice of words
Holy hell finally poor guy was cock blocked for 43 chapters
and why is everyone telling you to put a sequel the stories not completed yet
You should end it after chapter XLVII, and then update it once a year for every Super Bowl XD
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Oh come on, it was a tiny mistake. I spend a pretty ridiculous amount of my free time writing these then rereading a few times to catch errors.
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Much will be cleared up next chapter.
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cause I was messing with them in the author notes.
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I can't wait. This story is the best one on the site
And... No i shouldn't. Aw screw it.
You mentioned that he needed to learn how to tease a horn. I can see two options. Either Luna will teach him or Dusty will use the "favor"
To be honest, stopping the story here feels... complete. I don't mean to say that I do not want more, but should it end, this would be a fine place for it.
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If he did that, i'd have to take a flight to Atlanta to change his mind
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On the one hand, this is true, he's has reached one of his dreams. So, think of it as an end to an arc, much like the finish of the Ponyville arc. But there's a lot of unanswered story threads that must be tied together before I'll be satisfied.
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Sneaky son of a bitch!
Yes, we plead for more! Seriously, this feels so... beautiful, so right. After all the trials, Star finally got his special somepony. But there are more questions to be answered. What happens with Scootaloo? What's the relationship like between Celestia and Lighthoof? How will his herd react to him bedding the Princess? Still so much drama to be had. And we will keep reading as long as you keep it up. Though I do wonder what the endgame is here now that the stated goal of the fic has been accomplished...
more please
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The sad thing about a lot of stories, is they tend to end after you reach that 'and they lived happily ever after'. Leaving you in the dark of how the relationship works from there. So let's tag along with Star and see how he handles being a married pony.
There's still the Steelhoof thing and Scootaloo and many other things to take care of. So yeah, I'm ready for the next chapter
Another awesome chapter an so happy Star and Luna finally joined together. Also wanna know who will be taking Light's place with Celestia and what are Light's marefriends gonna do when they find out about what he did with Celestia.
Lets see here. Sexy situations, Bits of micschif, Awsome Luna magic, Refrence to her past loves, hints of momentos from past loves, And some very very hot sex... Hmm, I give it a
Husband? Whaa?
Of all the things I saw coming, this was most certainly not it, well played.
Also, (it might sound odd) but this is pretty much the perfect chapter length. I'm currently reading another with 16k+ chapters and is too long, and yet another with chapters around 2k which is short, and though detailed, not as fulfilling as this is.
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I agree. Around the 8k mark I get that gut feeling to wrap it up. Keeps things tighter with enough room for description.
Guess starstep didn't realise what "consort" meant. Bravo good sir bravo. Curious as to where this goes from here. There are many way some being how he grows old with her and laments on their life together. Another where they break up and shit goes down or that he tragically dies in her arms
Hopefully not the first one as its too cliche. Gotta wonder where steelhoof comes into all of this.
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Great chapter as always! Im really liking Starstep/Luna and with this one it only makes them even better!
Im still curious about lighthoof and Celestia and his 'situation' but for now it all goes to Luna/Star!
Keep up the good work and hope to see more!
Oh my gosh this just wont stop being awsome! I wish i had a luna emotocon just to help articulate how amazing this story is!
Author dude... Or gal?
Author! If ever you get that funny artist deppression thing where you feel like crap for no reason...
Just don't, cause you're awsome... In fact .., hold on, i liked this so much im going to look up a new word just to articulate...
...
K i couldnt find a dictionary, so i asked my freind recardo... Asombro!
There, new complement... En espaniol
K im done.
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haha, I'm quite certain I'm a gentlecolt.
As for depression, meh, I get that a little everytime some pony down-votes the story without taking a moment to say why. It's not that I have anything against them personally, I just want to know what issue they have so I can see if it's something I can improve upon. Oh well.
Anyhoof, glad you enjoyed Star's little trip to the moon
THE SHOW MUST GO ON! You don't want to anger Mr. Torgue. He's got bitchin written on the side of his badass space truck. Do you know why you must continue?
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"AND I WANT THE BADASSERY TO CONTINUE!"
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oh and indigo just because XD
shaking his charcoal mane from (his) eyes as he rose up beside the
and
“Luna, I got my cutie-mark because (I) found my talent lost
My brain sung this in my head
Well done Starstep you have explored the craters of the moon where few have gone
Also Lightinghoof you and your jokes
Keep going! This is one of my favorite stories!!!
It finally happened, good god what a ride it's been up to this point. You were right about the 'adult' section of the chapter as well, I would advise against skipping it. Your writing continues to impress Indigo, the imagery and emotion here was incredible. You are still the master of ending a chapter in a way that leaves me needing more so bravo on that front. Can't wait to see where the story takes Star and Luna from here, I know it's been a long journey to get where we are now but it still feels as if it's only just starting.
Oh before I forget thank you as well for giving us the name of Luna's earth-pony consort responsible for the ecosystem of the sanctuary. I was quite curious to know at least that much about her after seeing a piece of her legacy.
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I was thinking this:
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Yerp, we have ended the "Luna gets laid" arc and move on to the "Luna cracks the whip" arc
Yeah, I mean, a few chapters ago, she says she's not ready to be mounted, Come 44, and suddenly, they're on the moon, she's showing him around her house, they bang, and now he's her hubby.
Can't say I'm not jealous of the guy, though.
congratz on 200k words! (not quite to the new chapter yet[i'm getting there i swear!])
Oh you want a comment eh? Well heres my opinion:
I wanna see a lomger version of the clop in this chapter. Like as long as this whole story has been.
Haha just kidding,although i felt the clop was a little short(no pun bout height intended) but im ready to see how starstep climbs out of the crater he got himself in now (again no pun intended)
This is too good not to comment! Goddess I love this story. The characters, the plot (hehe), the jokes, everything. This is a great romance you have going here, and can not wait for more. MUST HAVE MORE!
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Sounds like you intended every word of both puns. Shame on you for lying. It's okay, though, they were good ones.
Once again, thanks for marking the adult stuff. I appreciate being given the opportunity to read a story with both an interesting plot and occasional clop, but also the opportunity to choose to not read the more adult material .
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From saucy to kinky eh? Count me in.
*finishes reading this chapter. Upon doing so, takes it in hand and smashes it upon the floor*
I enjoy this. Another!
I think I missed the ceremony.