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Commence read.
Luna knows all your fantasies.
At least some progress for Light and Star on Celestia. Wonder who Light has in mind.
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It doesn't have everything I wanted to fit in there, but I didn't want to overwhelm you ponies. Next chapter has cake...maybe.
1916076 Oh? What kind of possible cake?
Wait if she knows everyones' fantasies...does she instantly know all the kinky things Star might want to try with her eventually?
1916144 She already does, probably. From the beginning wouldn't doubt it.
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She's hinted at such before
She doesn't know ALL fantasies, but she does bounce around through dreams, helping those with nightmares and seeing what's in the hearts of her subjects. I imagine she's taken extra time to look in on her lieutenants. To make sure they're not dreaming of doing horrible things. Of course, this means she's gotten glimpses of very naughty fantasies. Our dreams are very fragmented and often jumbled. I suspect Luna watches em like if you were flipping through TV channels at home. Just pausing long enough to see what's going on before flipping to the next.
1916076 is cake a sex thing or is it a dessert thing, or is it a lie?
D'aw! Star and Luna get more and more adorable every time I see them!
SO excited for the next few chapters! Intrigue, drama... and Step may finally get to express his love in the basest of ways: Dat Lunar Plot...
Good chapter and feel free to call me a pervert but was kinda hoping Star would step in for Light with Celestia.
i couldn't stop laughing at the banter between light and star in the bathroom “Yeah, actually. Not many ponies have made it to the surface of the moon.” had me on the ground for like 2 minutes
Him nervous? Nah.
This kind of reads weird. Most people would put either a comma or question mark after "Him"
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Yeah...I agree. Adding comma.
Her tail drifted out the bottom like a starry train on a wedding dress, drifting about on it's on accord
Pretty sure those three words are typos.
Anyway, can't remember how long it's been since I've commented. As always TLtM is the first thing I read when a new chapter appears on my favorites list, and as always you never fail to impress. Forty one chapters in(I think) and still just as enthralling as the first chapter if not more so. I eagerly await your next chapter.
Cant wait for the.next chapter
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Wondered where you ran off to. Glad to see you're still along for the ride. I'd say we're heading towards the end at this point, but I cannot say how far off. Like most of this story, what started as a tiny idea and a handful of key-points has morphed into 170 thousand words. Anyhoof, stick around!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Awsome
i liked it. Ive always been a fan of jumping around, skipping large scene transitions.
BEAUTIFUL
Why you so good at this?
Is very funny!
You know. It's 2 am over here, my dad thinks im sleeping... He apparently heard me gasping when Star Step asked if he could help with Celestias... Needs
This was again a wonderful chapter with some interesting new info.
And if someone calls Luna something this time... At least he can't trash the bastard into a fish pawn
I really do hope he doesn't buck it up. Hopefully we also get to hear some more about griffin lore. And of course Lunas request to Star... I don't know if i should be exited or scared at the last part
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And if that wasn't enough, we have a special guest attending the Summit. All the way from Canterlot.
MUAHAHA
SWEETIE BELL!!!
Sorry can't reply to comments on my phone
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What?
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Sorry when I first started reading this chapter I expected something else. Not this.
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I'm afraid that's not telling me much. Care to elaborate? What's written is written, but I'm always willing to listen to suggestions or feedback. Doesn't mean I'll do it, but I'll hear you out.
1917166 Oh! Just hit the thumbs up on the comment, then the reply button comes up!
Aw yis
Booze. I'm guessing booze.
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Booze? What do you mean?
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I didnt expect it to start of with [Starstep felt a little of the Luna's juices run down the sides of his muzzle]
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Oooh. I gotcha. Yeah, sorry, was a bit naughty without being clop. Just a lead-in from the previous chapter. Trying to paint the picture of the rather awkward and messy situation he found himself in while the lieutenants looked on. Anyhoof, I hope it didn't distract you too much from the rest of the chapter. Lots of lead-up for the griffon party with a few surprises.
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yeah I havent read this story in a while. I kept hitting the mark all read tab; no offence, so thats what I get for ignoring a story. A weak stomach and descriptive sexual imagery is what i get.
Ohhh, I'm so nervous! Please don't screw this one up Starstep!
1916076 This was strangely heartwarming. Its safe to say I enjoyed it, much like the others. Can't wait to see how Star will fair with his second chance at this type of thing. Also, I do wonder what brave soul will be able to rise to the occasion of becoming Celestia's lover. These two things will sit suspensefully in the back of my mind, as of now.
He's not gonna screw up this time. Somepony else is going to get a hold of him.
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Thanks for the tip
1918680 Also, if the comment you wanna reply to IS a reply, then just tap the blue name at the beginning, then it should bring up the reply button, too!
Its okay you can overwhelm me I don't mind.
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Okay.
This is great, now I can misuse it in school
1918932 Way ahead of you, bro.
Another tale well told, however I noticed quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes that really should have been caught by your editor/proofreaders.
It makes this chapter seem a bit less polished than previous ones.
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I'm... i'm a girl
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Pic broken
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Spelling mistakes? I donno how I managed that. Spellchecker usually highlights them. Also, I don't have proofreaders. It's just me and Ye Ol' OpenOffice. I'll read through a few times, edit and catch mistakes before publishing, but I suppose it's easier for someone outside looking in to see them.
1917825someone's gunna get drunk and embarrass themselves.
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I don't really see the point of marking chapters as 'mature' since this chapter, and the one before that, contain some rather mature content. But whatever.
This chapter was great, and I'm already looking forward to the info-dump in the next chapter.