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Star went from a inexperienced colt to a PLAYAH
so much Practice for when he gets his princess
Now with that the Cheerilee arc is complete!
Now I'm a little disappointed the 'mystery unicorn' story was left hanging, and since Star is now heading back to Canterlot I'm not sure when it will ever be addressed again. Still for all I know he might be following him. All in all the Ponyville arc was a great touch to the story as it built up Star as a character, did a pretty good job of wrapping up two of his ever increasing romantic options (I especially liked that neither ended the way one might expect at first), gave some spotlight to some awesome side characters (Big Mac, Spike, Star's Dad, Twilight) and of course Cheerilee and Apple Bloom were both well written and I loved Apple Bloom's conclusion and wish her the best (though I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of her, plus we need to catch her stalker).
Now with Ponyville falling behind us we must press onward back to good ole Canterlot where many new and lingering challenges await us. Scootaloo, Luna, Light Hoof & Sherry, and of course the now repetedly teased, ever mysterious Sweetie Belle. I'm hoping Sweetie Belle hasn't gotten into too much trouble and I guessing Light Hoof's ever growing complicated home life will begin to spill over into Star's. But of course the main event of this story is of course the Princess of the Night (and Scootaloo), I'm afraid Star hasn't quite learned the full lesson she is looking for, but he has managed to surprise me the last couple of chapters. I love how Star has gone from an OK character with a hopeless crush on Luna, into a romantic hero I've come to root for. Of course I'm still not sure Luna is the best option for him. With Cheerilee firmly in the hooves of Twilight (which I am VERY much in support of) and Apple Bloom filling out the role of 'Best Friend I don't want to rut' this just leaves Luna, Scootaloo, and possibly Sherry and Sweetie Belle. Will Star be able to learn to juggle all these apples or will he settle for his one and only green one? I look forward to seeing where this goes and like Star Step I feel the skies are just a little bit clearer, and the future at least a tad brighter.
For now at least.
I want moar! as fast as you can. i even have my gf reading this...
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As for 'mystery pony'. It's not done. Think on it from Star's perspective. What could he have done? He had no leads and couldn't go around questioning strangers without any real authority. Sorry you're disappointed but think of it as a cliff-hanger, an string to lead us into other parts. I highly dislike unresolved issues, so I assure you, everything will be addressed in due time. Not everything will happen in a static progression.
Ponyville is in the past for now. But it's his home and he has a lot of ties that can bring him back. You know how I love to throw you ponies curve balls and keep you guessing.
I'm glad you enjoyed the Ponyville arc. I hadn't expected it to spread out as much as it did, but I think it really helped set the stage for some very important characters for later. Plus it allowed you all to get a better feel for StarStep maturing a bit.
The skies are a little clearer for our young pegasus. Perhaps it's just the calm before the storm.
Princess Luna awaits.
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Pics or it didn't happen
haha, but seriously. I'm glad you and your GF are enjoying my humble and sometimes naughty story.
Make sure to thumbs-up! Show me your love.
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When I say disappointed, perhaps I should have used 'anxious' instead I was sure you were saving the rest of that story for later, and you're right he had little to go on and very little time, my hope is he's caught before he does something to hurt Apple Bloom or somebody else otherwise
May Celestia have mercy upon him!
Also yes I love how you like to keep us guessing (at the moment I most looking forward to Sweetie Belle's story, I literally have no idea of where it will go)
Finally, let me just say the Ponyville arc has so far been my favorite one thus far, easily my absolute most loved part of the story yet, I think you did an excellent job with it and it wasn't stretched out too far at all.
Keep up the excellent work
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I'm surprised no pony talked about the interaction between AJ and AB yet. Hmm...ah well.
I think you just liked Ponyville because of all the Cheerilee flank
Onwards to Ye Old Canterlot and the Royal plot!
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Star, go get yo Princess playah!
Love it love it love it!
Indigo you continue to not disappoint and leave us all eagerly awaiting more. I really hope you plan to revisit AB's mystery stalker as well as touch up on her situation with AJ in the near future.
Or maybe you have something else planned for us when Star checks on Sweetie Belle for everyone hmmm?
Ah well before i ramble too much i'll just reiterate how much i look forward to more updates to this wonderful tale, ty again for making every day feel like a mini x-mas
P.S. Anyone else find Twilight's 'lesson' to be awesomely hilarious?
>Saw a new chapter of "To Love the Moon"
>Searched for Santa
>Couldn't find him, crushing disappointment.
Good chapter, they always are. The Christmas comments shall continue.
the mystery pony has been added to my list of people to justly smite with the power of cheesecake just under prince blue-blood...and trust me when I say that is a very short list
if star got the spell on day 1, meaning he only had five days of that spell, and cheerilee had her heat ever since he arrived, for a week, wouldnt that mean two days without the spell???
Cue Oblivion theme. (Elder scrolls)
904517 Starstep, the original PIMP.
That he heard stirring in the bedroom.
Que?
The next forty-five minutes were some of the most pleasurable and grueling minutes
Not even a LITTLE clop chapter here...?
Very rarely do I comment in the middle of a story. But, since my friend sent this to me and my reading, I have one thing to say...
STARSTEP BETTER END UP WITH AB IN THE END
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http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=V3EOibiVzq4
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The ending of this chapter was very beautifully written.
2051181 He want luna, not AB. And he will get her.
nice. very nice chapter <3 I approve.
Scootalo:1
Sherry:2
Cheerilee:7
Total Amount of Bucking:10
(From my extending amount of knowledge of expressions "few" means 3 so, 4+3=7 duh.)
3913529 Pretty sure he only bucked Sherry once....
.... And Cheerilee a LOT more than seven times.
2886776 you just love your face palms don't you?
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