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Damn man, just cranking out these chapters...
Rapid fire updates, very nice. Started sweet and ended with the funniest spell ever. Well played Luna, well played.
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I have the day off for once. I figure two updates today. Happy 4th if you're state-side!
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Yeah, a part of me wondered if you ponies would get Luna's method of doing things. It's a very awkward and rather adult situation StarStep was put in. But very little I write is without a purpose in this story.
I leave you with prankster Luna http://youtu.be/12460rr3sxk
He tried to call up the most un-sexy images he could think of. Dragons, roadkill, Lighthoof in a dress, Sargent Hardknocks licking ice-cream seductively. None of the usual stuff was working.
>None of the usual stuff was working
Oh god, I laughed. I'm really liking this story so far!
Definitely one of the more um interesting ways to lead into a sex scene
JESUS FUCK this chapter got me laughing so hard.
Boners sure can be troublesome.
"He rose and quickly made he way down the knoll."
I think you mean his.
OMG LOL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..................................................................
fuck this chapter earned you a favourite! FUCK but this was funny. No amount of words can describe my feels for the bro. I have had something similar done to me, and fuck It must'ave been Hilarious!
Point being. This chapter is my single most favourite thing on FIMFICTION. Thank you.
OH GOD WHY!?
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Hahaha. Because it's a hilarious prank. I'm sure Celestia found it just as funny when he asked for her to help
Every chapter I re-read only gets more hooked.
BTW, I can't think of anything unsexier than the Sargent licking ice cream seductively, lol.
I shall continue...
I hate those boners that just don't go away.
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That was honestly one of the funniest things I've ever read. Good job! Kind of had an "American Pie" feel to it!
I am dying of laugh. Loving this story more with every word! Excellent work, dear author.
Best and funniest chapter ever. Was laughing my butt off. Can't wait to read the next chapter
You know a story's good when it has you burying your face in your hands and laughing uproariously until there's tears in your eyes.
it was stars own fault , . yes sing for us luna, http://youtu.be/jW5n3k2VgZE
Why you gotta have a warning like that at the beginning?
Now I'ma have a hard time reading for fear of that moment.
I believe it's Sergeant, for the military rank. Sargent is a cancer charity... >>
ok...too many little spelling errors or forgotten words in this chapter for me to list
My main concern is way more of a problem then simple writers folly of grammar.
.....Sir, why...in the name of Celestia, why are you trying to make me dislike Luna?
.....I have deleted a large large large segment of my comment, because I came to the conclusion that I need to look at this story -specifically this chapter- not as a romance or drama or comedy series, as I would DawnFade's work University Days...I have to look at this story, as filler for clop, through the eyes of a perv. Because if I look at it as a pony wanting to like Luna and like the events going on, and appreciate the plot twists...I will be disappointed.
This is the reason that this is by far my favourite story on this site.
THE COPIOUS AMOUNT OF TROLLING!
Permanent erection, I'll have to remember that one.
Huh...phew....I think I cracked a rib...
Best. Line. EVER!
I read the first few paragraphs and I can't already tell the biggest facehoof of my life is about to happen in this chapter.
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Isn't it glorious?
Wow...
That...was really awkward
My not so little pony.
God that line killed me XD
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