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Someones been watching star wars, hmm?
ANYWAY, great chapter, and I can't wait to see how it's all going to turn out with his 'boss' and when Luna finds out about everything.
A fitting end for a despicable pony.
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Starwars? If you're referring to Episode three. No. Fire and lava have long been staples in dramatic literature. It's primal and dangerous. A fitting punishment to a terrible pony. Besides, Anakin only lost his lower half. This death was far far worse.
Holy... shit... I can't even... Gimme a few minutes.
By god what a moment for butter hooves....
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Butter hooves?
Well... that was interesting.
Nice to know that the bastard got what was coming to him; during the end of the exchange when he was about to teleport I half expected him to escape and be a plot element later on. Now to deal with the fallout of this little incident... after we find out what happens with the dragon. But when we finish this arc there shall be much explaining to do.
Either way, till next week,
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Commence Reading!
He slipped. Damn.
Awesome!
I'm still just hoping Luna understands what Scootaloo did. I mean, yes, it's a token of serious meaning, but innocent lives were at stake. Surely Luna would understand and forgive, right?
Right?
Woo, nice chapter ma. First he dose a shady deal losing scoots feather, Then he leads the night guard on a unofficial mission. Poor guys gonna get it... Worth it.
Lol'd at the last two lines and another awesome chapter
1403241 Well copper obviously slipped... right?
A great chapter, and all but the dragon has now been taken care of it seems. And he managed to deflect a magical blast with his wings? Interesting, I am speculating that it is the remnants of the crap his wings absorbed that allowed him to deflect the magic. And Copper was the villain, good job not giving that away, didn't really see it coming. He definitely got what was coming to him.
And Luna is going to possibly have a field day with him, whether it will be good or bad will be seen in the future I suppose!
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Might want to read that last paragraph again. The last two lines will mean more if you see that he didn't.
*Edit* There, I edited the last paragraph to be a bit more clear to readers. Hope that helps.
....Update....faster.....need.....more...dying from....lack of...awesome....fanfi-
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*eyetwitch* I just spend my entire Sunday writing out an 8k word chapter...I don't even...just...
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Oh, to troll the author is to have fun with the author. :3 Though I wish things can be updated EVERY HOUR of EVERY DAY to satisfy my reading habits, ill settle for whenever. You have the good beans. Have a Luna to make you feel better.
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Woooona! Haha, dancing Luna is silly. Indeed, I wish I could invest more time to writing, but one must seek balance. Otherwise I'll burn myself out on it then you'll get no chapters.
I still don't understand how the stupid thing at the top of the site works. The suggested stories or whatever that selection of flipping stories is. My story gets up there with a new chapter but never stays more than an hour. I don't get it.
Well, you would get pushed down by other rec chapters. :L And though it may be insanly fast, there are an insane amount of Brony writers.
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That doesn't make sense. As there are stories in that 'Suggested Reading' Flash thing that stay up there for days. So really, I have no idea how it's suppose to work.
Mhm. True. Wtf Canada.
1403216 Kinda symbolic of hell fire awaiting the wicked. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
1403726 you can never have enough of a good story!
This was incredible. Had a nice smooth finish with a velvety after taste. The time I knew it was copperwas when he was in the mine. Stood out. Other than that... the unicorn part was surprising to me. LLet's see the black ops portion was great and then oh man. This was a nicely done cascade of events. Thank you. My stomach was twisting the whole time I was reading. Then again I did have to break for the toilet... might have been that. Anyway. I eagerly await the next chapter.
1403986 Nah, the true hell is you have to live in Camden, NJ for eternity. I know... I was there...
Burned to death in lava?
Dang, he got off easy. I was gonna send him to West Virginia where toothless inbreds could have their way with him.
Not quite the conclusion that I was expecting, but still a very satisfying ending. I would have never assumed copper to be behind this.
I have a feeling Luna will be most surprised, possibly require Lunatic. Or molestria, or both, or whatever. I'll keep reading
Also have a feeling Luna will force Star to admit that copper didn't slip. Wonder how that's gonna turn out.
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Well no, he caught fire then boiled to death. He was essentially dead when he toppled into the magma. Pretty horrible way to go, honestly.
This chapter was fantastic my friend. Loved the ending especially considering I just saw two cops say something very similar to that right out side my apartment.
1404110 I lived in Philly and my family is in Jersey so i'm somewhat familiar... *shudder*
1404271 He'd still consider himself lucky compared to the toothless inbred way to die. That could take months.
1404410 Are you still in Jersey? I shall have to get you to the Jersey Discords meet if you are!
1404427 Nope, I moved to Arizona for school.
POETIC JUSTICE!!!!!!!
We'll indigo, that was fun, and IIIIIIIII really enjoyed reading it. I love the length (bow chicka bow wow), as well as the bit of comedy at the end. JOLLY GOOD SHOW.
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can't wait for next update, then again, that's how I felt about all of the chapters. No even gonna try to guess what happens next, I'll let it come as a surprise....wonder how noble reactions shall be....oh dear, I just lied.
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You ponies have a funny definition of comedy. Star dropped the foal-napper to his death, then his buddy makes up a lie to protect him. Dark comedy perhaps, but that's stretching it a bit.
1404525 Nah that is in fact a form of technique in comedy, not sure which, but it is. It's probably more so me imagining the nonchalant statement followed by agreement over a rather serious occurrence that makes it funny. Its just the indifference that gets to most people's funny bones. Its kind of hard to explain. Its sort of like when something big goes down and what not, and one characters like freaking out over it, but the other guys just like, "Yep...mhmm..yep...yep." the whole time. It sorta follows that style but with two people, which by the way, can be very hard to pull off and not sound cliche'. So, I would personally, like to say kudos to you. Ugh, my grammar is atrocious, but bare with me here.
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....you will take the kudos.................you will take the kudos and you will like it.
Edit: Hmmmm, I wonder if I should comment on the next chapter using the Elizabethan form of English (or whatever Luna's speech is called) just for the hell of it. Yeah, I might actually do that, if I don't forget between know and then, which I probably will but who knows.
Paybacks a fucking bitch!! I say copper deserved worse but I'm glad he got the ending he deserved.
YES YES YES! Godamn this story is awesome, I MUST HAVE MORE
Never saw Copper's part in this coming. Well played
Huh. Copper butter-hooves'd it. Oh well. *dismissive wave* I would love to say i've got an idea where this story's going now, but i can't bring myself to theorize it, i've been doing that far too much lately. Must be close to two dozen stories i'm theory-crafting endings for (in my head). I'll just go with the flow and be happy and not get worried about how it ends.
Friend, you have truely impressed me this time.
*Thats all your getting outta me this time, no remarks, no angry yelling, just plain old honesty.
And this >
i double-bucking dare you to out-do yourself for the next chapter.
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Ah, well. I don't think I can out-do it next chapter. As 36 is the conclusion to the Foal-napper arc and set-up for the next. Once we have some closure, things will get a bit crazy.
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I like crazy :-*
well great chapter love Light's line at the end "he slipped." period not a question thats what happened... and on another note are star's wings now magic resistant because of some side effects from the dragon fire
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Ah, that's the beauty of life. Sometimes the bad things that happen, result in good later. I've tried to weave things into the story that mean little until later. Then you'll go "OH!" when the pieces click into place. In fact, there's a few things I hinted at very very early in the tale that will come into play soon.
1407622yes fore shadows are fun
Nice
Amazing story, just burned through the whole thing in an afternoon because I just couldn't it put it down. Can't wait for more!
*Reads Chapter*
Wat!?!!?
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MUTHAFUCKING CANADA!
I find it kind of unlikely that every single Night's Guard was able to participate in a covert operation just like that. Don't these guys have work-shifts or something?
This is my only nitpick. Great chapter.