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Sooo having more than one mare is acceptable? I really hope I understood that correctly because after this manly tears will be shed if Scoots doesn't get her chance. I really liked the character development in this.
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Yes Hutser. In my vision of their social structure, it's ok to have more than one mate. StarStep's current character issue is that he hasn't figured out how to truly love more than one pony. His tunnel-vision on this obsession with Luna hurts him. No worries, Scoots will return.
That's good to know. I like this social structure better, and I greatly look forward to the next chapter.
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Hmm, more then one Mate? Yes! I love the smell of Shipping In the morning, It smell like.... An Orgy? WTF?
I've always thought about polygamy/poly amorous relationships being acceptable in Equestria since there does seem to be an overabundance of females, still I wonder how this little development will turn out
in the beginning you said to skip to chapter IV if we did not want to read the smut but this is chapter IV
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Derp, so it seems. Fixed.
Great chapter, a good way to introduce the premise of being with more than one pony.
Plus the adult scenes were very hot and well written. Kudos for having Scoots give him a wing-job, I'd never even thought of that as a thing before reading this chapter, so well done on being hot and innovative.
You know, I'm sorry, but he whole thing with "rut-buddies" seems so chaotic and disgusting to me, so I swear to god, if I finish this story and Scootaloo isn't with Star, Imma RAGE up in here! But, either way, this story is amazingly well written, so much detail and other accuracies, and you seem to have a vast knowledge of wing strcture, too. Kudos, my friend, you're both very intelligent AND a great writer!
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inturburbling.....:P
last paragraph, Chapter 4, handful.
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I must say, Well written story so far, I say good job.
Also to that last little bit... Oh dear
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Lord I thought he was going to call out Luna's name at the end, that would have been, awkward.
Well, this chapter has sold the story for me; I'm going to keep on reading.
The sex scene was remarkably well done. It had a kind of honesty to it which I really like. I would say that it actually seems realistic. You did a great job of describing the sensations and experience of sex. Even more spectacular is that you gave a rather accurate impression of what the first time is actually like. It's always at least slightly awkward and never goes exactly as one hopes or plans. I'm guessing that you've done some bucking yourself, Indigo Eclipse. Am I mistaken? Even if I am, at least this scene was several times more memorable than ninety-something percent of the clop out there.
I really like how you used this chapter for character development as well as plot development. Even more interesting is that while this chapter is in no way required for understanding the narrative as a whole, it complements it nicely without taking anything away. This is more or less a perfect omake chapter.
Keep on writing!
BUT I LOVE LUNA!!
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....im sorry love scoots and I really liked this clop.
2092001 Yyyyeeeeeaaaahhh about that....*SPOILER ALERT* he actually did but you've probably read that by now
I swear to Fuast.... If He gets THEM BOTH I WILL BUCKING RAGE SO HARD. But, i got to give it to you, botha Luna and scoots would make a good threesome
I only have one problem with reading this for the third time. Nothing is a surprise anymore! And this story got me to go "Wait.... What the fuck!" A lot. Still good though
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It may not offer huge surprises anymore, but if you pay attention, you'll notice little hints of things to come. The twin sisters from Spurlin, griffon conflict brewing, interactions between characters that take new meaning now that you know what happens to them later. I just need to get the early chapters cleaned up though. The errors bug me when I go back through it to refresh my memory of an event for continuity. Glad it still offers you entertainment.
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'Shutter'
well fathers that last part is going to complicate things a bit.
“I love you Star.”
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Oh shit she said 'I love you'! You better haul ass out of there little colt!
The plot thickens...