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Huzza indeed, this was a much more interesting read than the previous chapter (Sorry still being a dick about that) the setup from that chapter was well worth it. But Scoots' breakup breakthrough felt... False, I'm not sure if that's intended or not, if it was an accident I'd maybe like to see a chapter that shows the relationship they have, that would solidify that relationship, we don't really know if Scootaloo does like Featherweight like that or not. But either way I hope that isn't the end of Scoots being a main part of this story. Look forward to the next chapter good sir!
Woohoo!! Update! time to read then comment!
Aww shee-ite!
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Brilliant chapter. I'm clapping right now
Starstep... the frying pan and the fire are playing tennis with him...
Well, if by frying pan and fire you are referring to a certain kind of fire, you'd be pretty damn accurate.
I giggled, I giggled a LOT!
Thank you
Over 213, 000 words!!?
Okay...let's read this bitch
Great to see another update! And thankfully, most of the drama has been settled...of course now Starstep's a prince, bravo Luna! Poor guy seems in for a whirlwind, more so than he's seen already! Looking forward to the next chapter!
So Scootaloo is a whorse? She was still fucking Featherweight even after she got into the 3-way relationship with Star and Luna. Star is way too easily forgiving her.
2919234 How could he not forgive her when he did exactly the same thing, plus it's not like they were dating or anything.
2919268 1. The threesome with Sherry and his best friend happened when they were just friends so that doesn't count against him. 2. I forget when Cherrilee happened but he told her right up front. 3. What keg of beer do people/ponies get their logic and reasoning from? If you're not married then technically you're not together so therefore its not cheating? So since they weren't actually married even though all three were in a courtship relationship, Scootaloo fucking Featherweight for months behind his back was perfectly fine?
Woo! You're back! Another sweet chapter, as always. Though, I'm having trouble finding the overarching plot at this point. Like, what is left to be resolved.
Ah, whatever. More story is always a good thing.
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It's not perfectly fine, but Star has enough sense to know if he presses the issue or makes a great big deal out of it, that he'll probably lose his friend and make life for Scoot unhappy. He chose to be the bigger pony and just let her do her thing. Just like Luna can be all smiles and politeness when being offended, Star is learning a thing or two about diplomacy. He is being easily forgiving, but that's the point.
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You mean, since he got to be with the Princess? I always hated stories with "And they lived happily ever after." What happens after? The overall plot, I suppose, is what happens to Star in the end. All his trials, and lessons, where does his story with Luna end? We still have the Griffon issue to resolve and that's going to escalate into the final chapter. There's also a new issue that will pop up that will weave an underlying plot that has major significance for the ending. Enjoy the ride.
Really good chapter, I still can't believe Scoots broke up with him.
I was right with her up until that last little bit. Now I'm more like RRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Question to the arthor: How do you feel about a possible return of NMM?
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Haha, you mean Luna's little joke at the very end?
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I will, indeed, good sir! As I said, more story is always good. It's such a bittersweet thing when a story ends. I just finished my latest, and I got a bit emotional. So, I both do and don;t want this to end.
Damn you for creating such a gripping story.
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I always thought he would leap in front of a spear to save Luna and she would have some flashback hidden regrets thing again.
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Do you mean for the story or Season 4?
New chapter!
2919860season 4.
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It's not a return of NMM. Based on what she says to 'twilight', I believe it's more of a quantum-leap episode where Twilight takes the role of Celestia in the past. Either way, Luna back-story is very exciting.
Hahahahah he's got the picture of the story the same as my personal photo how sweet <3
This could just be my pessimistic cynicism...but why do I get the feeling there's still some strife ahead?
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Ah well, I started this story just over a year ago and at the time, it was a good an image of Luna as any. Seeing as I have no fan-art of the story, it still works as a header-image.
its back? ITS BACK! ITSBACKITSBACKITSBACKITSBACKITSBACK
aaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllll my yes
and congrats on re-dominateing the feature box
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Eeyup
Pure genius
these last 2 chapters saved me from a very boring evening so thanks for posting them
Great work! Loved this chapter! Its almost a shame that these come out only about once a month or so, but I wouldn't want to rush you at all (given the quality of the fic).
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Fear not. Thanks to somepony's generosity, I can afford to take a little more time to writing. At least for the short term. New chapter by Monday.
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Hey, better safe than sorry, right?
Another fine chapter. The reunion was touching, if bittersweet. I'm still a bit mad that Scoots hid everything, but I'm glad that they were able to salvage the relationship, and it seems might have even strengthened it even if it's not as intimate.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, especially if it starts out right where this left off.
Scootaloo... You're breaking my heart filly. So sad I even had some liquid in my eye
yay more chapters!
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So why the angry twilight face? Did you not enjoy the chapter?
The chapter was great! I enjoyed it thoroughly
I'm actually glad the whole thing with scootaloo has been sorted out for good i like it when the story is focused more on star and luna. Im also interested in seeing more about what you plan to do with Celestia and her situation.
aha Ahahah AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAXD DAT END OF THE CHAPTER.
On the more serious note it`s awesome. Really awesome. CAN`T WAIT FOR THE GRIFFON PART :D
2918827 Tis true you readers don't have much insight to the Featherweight/Scootaloo relationship as all of that was behind the scenes with no hints. She's not gone for good, but she's trying a different direction. The key point here was to explain a little more why she broke down after giving up the feather. The backlash of hiding a relationship, of lying to herself about being ok sharing Star and feeling insignificant in Luna's shadow. Featherweight is her 'out' for the moment. Whether it sticks or not remains to be seen.
I found the whole scootaloo ordeal a great twist that I was never expecting and caught me completely off guard. Thanks for the amazing chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.
I have finally read through all of your chapters and I must admit this is one of the most brilliant stories I have read so far.
Great humor, drama, excitement and even the suggestive parts are well written.
I can only pray that you will not stop your work with this, since it is a long time from last I have had so much fun reading.
Great thanks to you author, for you are brilliant in your choice of words and build when it comes to story making.
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I do so hope you let her find her happiness, or we're going to have a problem here. But I look forward to the next chapter Sir.
At the end of the chapter I was like
Really? Meh, my personal opinion I like dominating
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Star doesn't have enough confidence to really be good at dominating somepony as imposing as Luna is. Perhaps with more familiarity with her, he can get better at a little RP in the bedchambers.
YAY UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now for the next chapter!
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Tis just opinion but I guess your right
another great chapter! now the whole magical whiplash thing makes more sense, although with Featherwheight? didn't see that.
and a night on the town with Sandy? I have a feeling sexiness will ensue!
looking forward to it!
(slight update on pic: sorry, I'm taking so long. I've been kinda on and off with having time for it and, on and off with proper motivation to do ANY art. I've picked up again and got quite a dent in the background done[working on it literally RIGHT NOW] if time permits I think I might have it done by next week; not this week because i'm heading to University of Oregon for their intro-DUCK-tion.[UofO is funny like that])
I discovered this fic a day ago and have spent most of my time since then catching up to now. I just have to say that this is one of the best I've read if not THE best. I feel as though my time was spent perfectly and I cannot wait for more!