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OH SHIT! Poor Dinky! and OH SHIT
OH SHIT SHIT SHIIIIIT.DAMIT SWEETIE BELL.
Well fuck.
Please excuse the expression.
Holy shit! Can't say I saw that coming. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Well, glad Sweetie Belle caught y'all by surprise.
But no pony has said anything about Lighthoof's history or Star's offer.
Ah well.
When I read about Light's past I was all like
Then when Star made his offer to Light I was all like
And finally at the end I was all like
I can't wait to see how this plays out.
God damn it Nappa.
Hahaaaa, I just knew it was sweety, as soon as she mentioned the "friend". Fine work this time around mate, Star and Light's little adventure here reminded me of the comradery shared through both games and movies I've experienced. This whole thing sorta brought me a good heap of nostalgia.
Light's over 9000
I just read through this whole story in one sitting... you're a good writer. I look forward to reading more.
Alright I pretty much indirectly called it since I thought Star would run into Sweetie Belle, instead you surprised me with Dinky and even Pip (who is now apparently big enough to work security at a Rock and Roll bar).
So now we get to see how Star gets Sweetie Belle out of this situation.
Must say this is probably the darkest chapter yet, what with prostitution, Light's mom being a 'pleasure pony', got to say it was a real Bro thing of Star to offer to have him adopted into the family (of course that makes his encounter with Sherry and Light before just a tad more awkward), and of course the attempted rape of Dinky, and this whole loan shark drama.
I look forward to seeing how Star Step fixes this mess (if he can) OH please for Sweetie Belle's sake.
God damn cliffhangers!
Indigo i swear if you weren't such a good story writer I'd have to hate you for doing this to me.
Side note, really hope nothing too fucked up happens to Sweetie, cuz if it does I don't think Star will be able to protect those responsible from Rarity.
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Only on his off-days
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84k words in one sitting? Musta taken a few hours. Glad to see the story holds your interest enough to hit it all at once.
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Of course Pip is security! He's a bucking pirate, YARRR! Yeah, this chapter has some darker, but nesscary elements. It was time to start piecing out why Star and Light are such buddies and Lighthoof's motivation for being a Guard. He likes to party and play with fillies, but he has a past he's not proud of. Unfortunately, it certainly isn't the darkest chapter planned, and it's not the last. But there will still be laughs and joy along the way.
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Unless he's hanging from a building, right?
935327 yeah it took maybe a little while, but it was enjoyable.
Lol, 502 fiction.net
Very nice. Some more things are coming up and some other things as well. And it was very nice for Star to make that offer to Light, he trully is the best friend ever.
I got 502 and 504 errors all morning and only got to reading it now, with an rather amusing site tile update :D
Also, suprisingly dark chapter
Oh snap lights just when I was thinking light was just all bark ( or should I say neigh ) no bite buddy for the main character, you throw in a complete backstory and give him a few kick ass moments to boot!
I forgot about Sweetie Belle!
I FUCKING CALLED THAT THE ROOMMATE WAS SWETIE BELLE.
I knew Sweetie Belle was going to have a part as soon as they got the shift. You bucker... if you landed a hand on her in later chapters...
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Oh, don't lie, you understood perfectly...
That explains...a whole lotta nothin...mostly...
i bucking called it the second they said Sweetie Belle lived in Old Canterlot, and i was right, she's fallen into poverty.
CALLED IT! I knew it was Sweetie Belle. I feel bad for her now. Oh noes...
The plot thikens... Come to think of it, MORE PLOTHOLE SMASHING!!!
1581685 It explains why she shut herself out of her life in ponyville.
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As soon as I read it was dinky I called the roomie was SB
Y U NO LEARN ANYTHING STARRRR !
Totally addictive, what a great story !
WHERE ARE MY TACTICAL FACEPALMS?!!!!
static.fjcdn.com/pictures/Tactical_cb4375_213920.jpg 5356132 right here.
5642223 Thank you for this image!
I think I know. Pretty sure the story has been hinting at this from since Scootaloo showed up.
Edit: yup. I was right.