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LOL, what's that about? Why the tears?
878654 i dont want him to hook up with his ex teacher!
Things most certainly are getting interesting. I really liked chapter 13, and 14, and 15... Well you get the idea they're all amazing. Don't really know what to say. Love it, can't wait for the next one, every chapter enthralls me, every new chapter notification is like waking up on Christmas day as a child, etc. Pretty sure hearing it over and over again gets annoying so here's everything summed up for the past 3 chapters.^ I eagerly await the next chapter.
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I wondered where you ran off to Hutser. I look forward to all you pony's comments. In fact, it was your observation that Luna was being a little too cold that I tweaked 14 to give the readers a glimpse into the alicorn's feelings. I love hearing what you guys liked or didn't understand. If you weren't suppose to understand yet, well, that's how it is. Anyhoof...
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Oh come on, it's not that bad....it's worse....
Also, wow I'm spoiling you ponies. 53k words published in 7 days? Whew.
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Hmm good chance for character and plot development... no foal fiddling.
Problem, officer?
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Sorry for all my commenting here, but I would like to say I really loved what you did with chapters 13 and 14. Not sure about other readers, but I enjoyed the peek through her calm demeanor; no more notions of her not caring. The bit about Goldwing was a very nice touch, I was wondering what the final thing she was upset about was, then it was just
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No worries. If it wasn't for y'all commenting, I'd probably stop writing this story. Funny how that little Goldwing info was a tiny conversation early on, then it popped up as a major plot-point. Makes you wonder what other little tid-bits I sprinkled during the early chapters, huh?
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I'm assuming that was an originally intended plot point? Hearing about that made me imagine what it would be like to see that from Luna's point of view. Goldwing committed the ultimate act of love and duty, and died in front of her, kind of because of her since the attack was meant for her. Thinking about that.... ow my feels
878668 well i want. teehee
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Yes, though I didn't intend to reveal it so soon. Your comments made me reconsider, and I concluded that it would be in the story's best interest to show a little weakness in Luna. A lot of what you speculate is correct, though there's more to it we'll get into later. Also, might wanna stock up on man-tears. Shits gonna get real before long.
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You and me both. I've always had a thing for Cheerilee. Her being a part of this story was decided from the start. Why is there no Cheerilee or Luna Emoticons? Damn you FIMfiction!
879109 eeyup
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I don't know whether to be afraid or excited, but one thing's for sure, I can't wait. Bro hoof /)
Luna has sent fluttershy to say " you will love me!". But seriously Love the story
Holy crap, you are a writing MACHINE! I'm definitely not complaining, because I'm still lovin' this story!
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Ah come now. You'll make me blush. I mean, not like I wrote and edited 53k words in 7days with a full time job. That's just silly.
Anyhoof ponies. It makes me happy when you tell me how you feel about the chapters. Next one is Mature, but it's a mix-chapter. Meaning, I don't think you should skip it. I will however, section the clearly mature bits off with break-lines. It's the least I can do for those of you not interested in clop. But too much is woven in the next scenes for me to completely hack it into little chapters. Hold onto your saddles, It's about to get hot up in here.
'In the morning, things would get rather interesting'
Well dang
Now i have to say I'm not so sure about this, it seems Star has his SWAG set on permanent . First all three CMCs, then Sherry, Luna, and Cheerilee!? Still this just makes for a potential delicious train wreck, and I truly have no idea of where this can go, it's like I'm reading 'Romance Reports' all over again, speaking of which why do I get the feeling of implied CheeriLight (which I ship btw, so I'm just gonna assume it's there).
Finally, I'm not so sure Luna should be Star's endgame anymore, I think she has a lot she can teach him, but I think I'm going to reassess his other options before I pick which mare(s) I'm rooting for. Also I'm wating to see Sweetie Belle's chapter before making a final decision.
All in all you're doing great and I love that you update quickly!
'Makes you wonder what other little tid-bits I sprinkled during the early chapters, huh?'
QUICK TO THE OVERANALYZE MOBILE!!!!!
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Hah. As for Star's 'Swag' you can kinda blame Scootaloo. She kick started his little adventure into rut-ville. Now, before you go jumpin to conclusions. He's only had fun with Scoots, Sherry and (shortly) Cheerilee. AB and Sweetie are friends, but there's no indication they'll be hopping in the sack with him yet. Good friend isn't the same as romantic friend.
Keep in mind how young StarStep is. He's kinda overlooked a lot of romance growing up with his little obsession. Now he's making up for a lot of lost time. Thanks to Scootaloo, and Luna's little pranks, he's learning a lot about enjoying the adult side of life. Also, to make your 'vote' for his final shipping more complex, keep in mind he can have more than one in my idea of Equestria.
Yes, I read Romance Reports quite a while back and I do admit I love Cheerilight shipping a lot. It's a very sweet ship like FlutterMac. And yes, I implied it on purpose. Choo Choo, here comes the train! Don't look away now, you'll miss the carnage!
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I love human (in this case pony) emotional carnage, of course I also love sappy, happy endings (I think I have some sort of mental issue) I love to see train wrecks but then I love to see everyone pick themselves up and learn, grow, and be happy from said train wreck so I look forward to see what you do.
Oh and I know he's not necessarily tied down to one final endgame that's why I specified mare(s). Still like I said I need to see Sweetie Belle and him interact before I make my final decision on how I'm rooting for.
Reading MLP fanfics has been what's gotten me interested in poly-amorous situations (now I would never be into it personally) but reading about them is pretty fascinating, now you hinted at it, but we haven't quite seen it yet (I don't really count his three-way with Light Hoof and Sherry) so I can't wait to see that as well.
880075 Personally, I don't think you should be so dodgy with the mature bits. This is clearly a romance story with mature elements in it that are crucial to its development. If people aren't into that kind of thing, then I doubt they'd be reading so far in to begin with.
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Hmm...I suppose you have a point. No pony has stated one way or another yet. I was trying to allow for a broader audience, but as this thing goes on, I'm finding it harder to try and split it apart. Too much starts to weave together. One of my intentions was to show that part of relationships is the mature side of things. For good or bad.
Why am I not worried that this will backfire on him? Maybe its just denial. Either way, good show my friend, jolly good show.
In the name of Mighty Celestia and her Glorous Sister, write MOAR!
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What? That's just silly talk...
The real question is, I wonder how many of you have guessed the true depths of what's about to go down. Oh, what a tangled web we weave.
StarStep finally got his groove on, and what a groove it is. So many fillies, so little time. But what goes up, must always come down. The question then becomes, how big is the explosion?
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This was my thought on the matter. 'Plot' is not a word I picture Luna using. A lot of her vocabulary is very formal and archaic. She's a prankster and a little bit of a tease, but I can't picture her with a 'Molestia' personality.
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Eeyup
You act like it's necessarily a bad thing. Sit back and enjoy the ride.
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I suppose. For the most part it does. But I like a little naughty fun tossed in to liven things up. You'll miss these little breaks of ponies getting their groove on when the drama-llama makes his appearance.
884480 Oh...well...uhh...hmm. Maybe that's the true reason for the "sad" tag. ......siiiiiigh, tragedies.
"Because I'm Twilight Sparkle." DAMN RIGHT!
And...can't somepony invent condoms, already?
O.K. GUYS, CALM DOWN.
some of us just have really cute teachers o.k.?
Spell=crazy hard
(lol penis joke)
Is she annoyed about him not listening to the "brittle blade" thing? Just a guess. Also... SPIKE WITH A MOUSTACHE!!
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Damn straight, DBI. Long time no see, you no like mah stories no more?
1070600 Well um... the first condoms were... goat intenstines, I believe. So that'd be fairly awkward.
“If this spell is that hard, how come you don't sound worried?”
Because she's Twilight Sparkle, you-
"Because I'm Twilight Sparkle."
HELL YEAH
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yes indeed. HELL YEAH ^v^
Okay, I sat down to start properly reading this.
I'm on chapter 15 and I must sleep, as it is 3:23AM and I've been reading for... I haven't kept track, but I have to say that you have written the only fic on this site EVER that has had me excited to wake up the next day and continue reading. I'm serious, I can't wait to continue this tomorrow.
Goodnight, Indigo, and thank you for gracing me with this wonderful fic (involving best pony/Luna)!
3688344 hah, glad you're enjoying the journey. Stick around, you still got lots to go.
Hmmm...15 chapters in.50 chapters currently.Challenge accepted.
3732566 Indeed... MUST READ AND CATCH DA FUQ UP!
I need to sleep
But I don't want to
No, I'm Awake! I can keep goin'! I'm not tired! I'm a trooper!
With that, I'd liked to say that man...this guys is gettin' all the mares.
Reminds me of myself in my youth
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With great power comes great responsibility.
3688344 I only just picked up this story. Been hiding in my read-laters for as long as I can remember.
Defs an awesome story
And I'm batman.